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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
^^^^ plzzzzzz continue!!! make shiv not liek gauri yet...and she wins the game 😆 😆 😆 i wud love too see his expression if this was true 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
yea. thatz what i thinkk will happen too.

lol. gr88 storiess ppl.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
ok after reading such wonderful stories even i want to write a new one.This is when gauri and shiv are forcibly sent for honeymoon.

Mahen sees that there are still many differences between gauri and shiv .so he decides to send them for a vacation so that they may be alone and they understand each other better

Mahen-shiv aaj se oofice ka kaam kuchch dinon ke liye band
Shiv-kyun dad
M- i m sending u 4 a vacation
S-whoa u r the best dad
M-jaao aur gauri ko packing karne ke liye bolo
S- kyun main khud kar sakta hoon
M- woh to theek hai par use bhi to karni hai
S- kyaa voh bhi mere saath jaa rahi hai.Kyaa dad u spoiled my mood
M-jyaada mat bolo aur jo main kehta hoon voh karo

in their room
S- gauri packing karo
G- kyun .
S-dad hamein so called honey moon par bhej rahein hain
G- kyaa main nahi jaaongi
S-mujhe bhi tumhaare saath jaane ka shauk nahi hai.Ab dad ne kaha hai to jaana hi padega.
Then she packed clothes and dadi called her
D-tum honeymoon par jaa rahi ho na
G- jee dadi
D- to kyaa kyaa dresses dali
G-suits aur sarees
D-oh gauri honeymoon pe bhi kyaa koi yeh sab pehenta hai
G- to main kyaa karoon dadi merre paas to yahi sab hai
D- are pagli shiv ko modern outlook pasand hai aur tumhein bhi vaise hi kapde pehnne padenge.Pati ko attact karne ke liye bahut papad belne padte hain.
G- magar dadi
D- chup raho aur mere saath shopping chalo

They both go shopping.They buy a variety of capri's,tee's spaghettis,and some really sexy night wear
Gauri was really feeling very shy
D- ab sharmana chhodo aur ghar chalo
So Gauri packes her new clothes and they both leave for switzerland.On reaching there they check-in in a 5 star honeymoon suite.Shiv doesnt t alks to her but strightly goes to have a bath.After coming out he says that he is going to a disco party and she can stay in the room itself
Gauri goes to have a bath and shiv leaves.When gauri has a bath she comes out in a towel gown..As shiv isnt there she removes her gown and wears a white one piece satin dress which is just above knees.she is infront of the dressing table massaging her wet hair.She is fully drenched and is lukin really sexy when suddenly the door open and shiv comes in.He just stops abruptly on seeing gauri.He is awed by her beauty and keeps lookin at her continously.Gauri immediately takes up her towel gown and wears it.
shiv comes back in his senses.
G- i m sorry woh aap nahi the to.......
S- theek hai aage se dhyaan rakhna but he was still wondering that how could she look so sexy .

He went to sleep stairght way and gauri changed into a night dress and gauri looked more awesome than the earlier one.She went and slept on the sofa but little did she knew that shiv was still awake and.........

hey guys i will cont after this too.it will be kinda a short ff.

Tanya
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
hey dear i m down with viral so i can cont only tommorow 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: *ba3ykush*

Here's my scenes. It will have more parts too it
because i love to write a lot so hope you guys dont mind. This is the time
when they both hate eachother but are starting to get feelings for
eachother as well. So i havee gone ahead bt yeah lol. Hope you enjoyy.
😃

Shiv- Gaur... (stops and realizes that he is so used to saying Gauri in the
morning for his breif case that he forgot she isnt here and she's at her
dad's house for a liltle while)

He goes to look for his breif case while Gauri at her daD'S house IS doing
the pooja and says "Shiv jaahan pe a-aoo" but remebers that he isnt here.

Kaya- Dhi tum kya karee ho mujhe parshad dhai-oo na?

Gauri- woh mai.. kuch bhi nahin yeh lai-oo.
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Shiv sits down oon the table for breakfast and is lookinf forward to those
yummy parathas that Gauri made everyday but just couldn't admit to
himself.

Shiv's Mom- Shiv yeh lai-oo merai hathon se garam garam parathai.

Shiv (takes the paratha but when he eats it realizes the taste is different)-
Mom yeh paratha ka taste tho aaj alag sa hai. Mera matlab hai ke loon
bahut hai or apnai merai man-pasand ke parathai tho nahin banaai.

Mom- Shiv mujhe tho lagai aa tha ke tumhe al-oo ke pasand thai.

Shiv- HAIN maa laikun maa jaise Gauri banathee hai waise chaheeai aap
bhi naa...

Dhadhi- Hmmp. lagtha hai kai Shiv ko Gauri kaa khana hee pasand hai
abh tho maa kaa bhi khana khakhai problems hai saiee khahaa Shiv 😆

Shiv - woh mai dhadhi aap bhi naa 😳

omgg guyz g2g if you wanna read moreee cuz im hardlii done just tell me
then i will post if u wantt ...

lub:
ba3ii k.



aawwwww thats really really sweet!!
pls caryy on...i can actually visualise it actually happening!!
maybe ekta mite do that!!
its sooo good!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
u knw what these are really sweet...
u knw when shashank came 2 see gauri and there was the fan scene there
should be one of those....shiv should feel the same!!!
well thats kinda crap...but oh well!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sharmin45

they r all really gud, n i thought of 1 too, here it is....

well it starts with shiv driving his car all alone then suddenly he has an accident n da people near by take him to da hospital n there da doc knows him n calls his family.
da whole family comes to da hospital n asks da doc how is shiv n da doc says he is out of danger but he has injured his arm n has to rest for a few weeks then mehen asks can we meet him?but da doc says he is unconscience n in da morning he will gain conscienc. Then gauri says 'aap lok gar jaye main yaha rukh thi huu'then after forcing them too go they all went n gari looked after shiv all night.

in da morning shiv gained consience n every1 also came to da hospital n they were aroung shiv talking to him n mehen started saying'tume pata hai shiv,gauri nai sari raat tumari seva kiya hai'. then gauri gets embarrassed n luks down while shiv is luking at gauri.

later when they all come home, gauri takes shiv to their room, n when they reach their room shiv takes his arm off gauri n says you really helped me but i don't need your help anymore thanks. Then gauri gets upset.then shiv tries to walk to his bed but he was about to fall but gauri gives him supprt.

Then gauri takes him to his bed n to puts him down n to do that she has to leap towards him n then her necklace gets stuck to his shirt button n they have this moment together, they r like really close to each other n gauri tries to take da necklace off when nikhila n dhadi comes in n sees them n coughs(typical) n gauri gets embarrased. Then they talk about his health n blah blah blah...

last scence is in da evening shiv is on da bed, reading a magezine while gauri is on sofa doing something. shiv took a glance of gauri by moving his magazine a bit, then gauri luks at him too but he starts reading his magazine again.

After a while shiv luks at gauri again n sees she was sleeping on da sofa. Shiv gets up n slowly walks towards(as he is injured) he bends down n luks at her, puts da blanket on her, then there was wind blowing her hair so he moved her hair from her face with his hand, got up n started walking towards da bathroom, when he went to da bathroom, gauri opened her eyes n smiled......
thats alll, hope u like it

sorry if my 1 is too long, it was supposed to be a scenes i guess i did a whole episode, sorry but i cudn't help it 😛

i would like to add somthing that happened before the accident happened and wat led to the accident i hope u dont mind 😳

i am trying this for the first time..here goes (i dont exactly know what each person says and stuff but this is just a senario😕)
gauri is like walking to the mandir cause all the other cars are busy and its really close by so she goes of walking and well cause she is in mumbai there are road romeos and so is is targeted by them it sorta becomes too much and they start man-handeling her and coming behind them in his car is...(drum roll plz😆) shiv 😃😃😃andwell he sees the whole thing and comes to her rescue he will probably tell them to get lost and get into a fight and then will hurt his arm cause one of the gundas would have a knife😡 and well the story can pick up like he was hurt and stuff and gauri takes care of him😳

i hope it nice 😕and i hope u dont mind me adding to your story😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
ok !!!!!
One day at the office guari was working late at night and same for shiv. When shiv was done he came down to the peon to close the office but the peon said guari madam is sitll working. Shiv gets really angry and by mistake tol him to close the office in min. By the time he came up the by stairs because the elvator stop working it was min and the peon came back from checking other locks. He thought everybidy was gone so he closed the office and went home. There shiv went into guari's office and told her let's go home because everyone is wating and i don't want to take the blame for being late. She said ok, when they came downstairs they relized that peon locked the office and they were stuck. Shive shouted at guari so loun she fell because she was going backward. Then shiv noticed this board saying that this week the office is closed. He gets even more angry and then this idea came to his head. Which was that he needed a rope to go down through guari balcony. So they both went upstairs bu coudn't fine a rope. When shiv was looking around he noticed guari sari and told her she need to take it off but guari is like why? because your office is only 2-story. she said i get that but what wil i wear, shiv told i always keep a second pair of suit in office, she can wear that but promise not to get it diry. she said ok. They through the sari down first shiv went down and then guari but guari got scared and let go of the sari and falled on shiv, here shiv got even more mad becasue his favotrite is runied. SO he said can't you look where you are going. And suddenly siad just lets go. They both started waling becase smarty shiv forgot the keys in the office. Suddenly from nowwhere these dogs started chasing them. Shiv just holds guari 's hand strted running like crazy. Finally they reached the house and locked the door tightly. Rest of famlily is stunned to see them in a mucky way and most of all guari wearing shiv's suit. She said she'll go change, suddenly shiv thought family would think what happen here in tthe morining. She told her to sop and stred taking off his shoes and socks, then folds his pants. Goes towards guari and guari is feeling really scared . He goes to her and holds by her waist sending shiver down her spine. And picks her up and told open the door of our room and guari just moves her head. When they entered the room he told her to open the bathroom door, she got so scared and shouted out why? Because i want to have a shower with you, She screams sunddenly shiv put his hand on her mouth and said because so i can throw you in the bath tub . ANd then AFTER I CAN GO AND YOU MAKE DINNER idiot........... 😉

This was my first one i tried my best 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
wow that was an interesting story, but the ending was a bit toooooooooooo romantic. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
great scenes you guys can't wait for more 👏

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