FF: (SG) Pyarasa LoveStory...Update Pg: 7 25/08/10

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jagrutid

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

no ive updated my updated i can get away with demanding one from you...please :P please..pretty please with a cherry on top! 😛

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bunny_fun

@bunny_fun

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: jagrutid
no ive updated my updated i can get away with demanding one from you...please :P please..pretty please with a cherry on top! 😛

Yeh, I read your update.... Its really fantastic and I will be posting my comment on it in the FF.... You can sure Demand for an update ..... It is your right.....

I would love to update.... but .....

I am really busy with my studies now..... hope fully after 30 days I will be free..... *fingers crossed..* so, please give me some time..... for now..... and once I am free..... I will surely let you know.....

I will also not be online.... from hence forth..... So, won't be able to read your updates as well..... sorry for that..... and would surely get back to you in a months time with my updates and with comments on your Updates......

Bunny.

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: bunny_fun

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Yeh, I read your update.... Its really fantastic and I will be posting my comment on it in the FF.... You can sure Demand for an update ..... It is your right.....

I would love to update.... but .....

I am really busy with my studies now..... hope fully after 30 days I will be free..... *fingers crossed..* so, please give me some time..... for now..... and once I am free..... I will surely let you know.....

I will also not be online.... from hence forth..... So, won't be able to read your updates as well..... sorry for that..... and would surely get back to you in a months time with my updates and with comments on your Updates......

Bunny.

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no worries wishing you the very best for you ongoing studies...

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

superb!

i m really glad that u have started this ff again!

u described everything sooo well!

really love shiv and gauri's scenes!

continue soon!

plzzzz pm me next time!

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Pria Sharma

@pria4ever

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

luved it!!!!!👏👏👏...OMG, u seem to be a very romantic person, cums across from ur writing...really luved the way u describe the romantic scenes n moments between SG...

Luved SG...n Vivaan, a surprise package😉...

Finally, finished reading all ur updates for this ff...great work!!!!👏👏👏

Pria

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Swapna

@pia.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

hey finally got an opportunity to read the new parts and they were very cute update soon

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sneha

@pals_sneha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

awesome updt... post d next one asap...

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bunny_fun

@bunny_fun

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: jagrutid
o i think it was really sweet..i liked the second chapter better..the situation between shiv gauri and vivan was funnny to read. suited shivs characteristics to the full.
as for gauri guess shes just playing along with it ...yet will she change??? dont want her to though..i think shy, introvert gauri makes for a good shiv gauri couple. after all shivs character is quite out there😉
anyways it was lovely to read your updates as usual they were fab..
thanks..

Hi Jagrutid,

I was thinking about gauri and will she change? I donot know the future track but.... As of now..... She had spent a whole of 10 days day and night with Shiv...😳 😉 So, She is bound to be a little more comfortable with Shiv than with others..... But, Still there are many things to come....

Like:
She has gone to switzerland.... but she has only worn sarees and she has not tried out any new dresses.... how will he react when she does get ready differently ....? 😉
and like, She has not worn a nighty in front of Shiv.... Wouldn't Shiv want to see her in it...? 😉
and Their reception is still there to be done..... How proud will shiv be to show of his blushing bride...?
and like, Gauri has still not told shiv "I LOve You" When is she planning to say it....??? How will shiv react....???
How will gauri adjust to the hectic schedules of Shiv..... "the tycoon...." ???

So, until I am through all these things I think Gauri will still be blushing..... But over time may be she will learn the ways of Shiv..... and slowly get the maturity required to understand things as being Mrs. Shiv Kapoor is not an easy task to handle..... what with the demands of Mr. Shiv Kapoor and the world looking at you as Mrs. Shiv Kapoor.....

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bunny_fun

@bunny_fun

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Hi All,

Since Shiv and Gauri are back from their honeymoon..... I would like to ask all your suggestions...

Do you want their Reception first.... ??? or
Do you want more romantic scenes between them before reception.....??? and
Do you want to see Shiv going to Office just yet or should he stay home for few more days....??

Do you think Gauri should be more extrovert in expressing her feelings... now .....???
Do you think Shiv's character is slipping off...??? Or is he ok in doing the things he is doing...???

Please, Do give your comments..... and Your ideas.... on how you want the story line to progress.....
I would love to know your opnion....... Please......

Thankyou,

Bunny.

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gulupada

@gulupada

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#40

hi the sory so far is awsome dear. well i would like to ee more romantic scenes between shiv and gauri and also gauri should be more extrovert now.
do continue soon

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