FF: (SG) Pyarasa LoveStory...Update Pg: 7 25/08/10 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 44:

Shiv took a deep breath.... taking in Gauri's fresh bath fragnace.... and the submuged wetness of body..... seeing Gauri sigh
..... Shiv looked at Gauri....her face devoid of any makeup.... fresh from the bath..... and wet hair..... and then at her lips...
which were trembling...... he slowly moved his hands to her face.... and taking hold of her face... he lift her face to look at it
more clearly..... and then moved his thumb on her cheeks... and lips..... Gauri trembled more...... seeing this.... Shiv's anxiety grew more...

Just then there was a knock on the door....

Gauri jerked from her dillusion state..... and getting back to her senses realised their closeness and due to shyness...
turned her face.... making the wet hair fall on her face.... Shiv slowly moved her hair away from her face..... and slowly gave a kiss on
her cheek..... Gauri blushed even more... making her cheeks go crimson....

the knock on the door grew louder....

Gauri tried to free herself..... but shiv pulled her from her waist.....trying to kiss her again.....
"Jane dijiyena Shiv.... mujhe tayar hoke neche...." and she was about to continue....
when shiv just put his right hand on gauri's cheek and moved it slowly into her hair.... telling her to feel his intensity.... and
gauri.... was becoming anxious as Goosebumps started to form in her body again.... she closed her eyes... at his mesmerizing touch....
and Shiv pulled her head a little towards him... and gave a kiss on her lips..... and Gauri reciprocated the kiss....with equal fevor...

There was a knock again.... this time both Shiv and gauri jerked.... and Gauri took deepbreaths..... and Shiv combed his hair to get control
of him self....

and then... "Bhaya!!! Bhaabhi....!!!! jaldi se darwaja kholo...!!!!"

and Shiv then looked at Gauri.... with anxiety mixed with irritation..... when gauri caught her breath and looked at Shiv.... and seeing his
expression she let out a giggle and pushed him a little to getout of his hold.... and turned to get ready.....

But Shiv caught her hand from behind as gauri tried to wriggle her hand ..... shiv came closer from behind.....
"Shiv vivan hai..... mujhe ready hona hai.... please chodiyena..."
He started kissing her neck moving her hair to oneside..... and Gauri giving deep sighs..... trying to control her anxiousness....
and then briskly turned her towards him.....

as the knock grew louder.... "Shiv bhaya dawaja kholo..." and Shiv gasped with irritation.... and looked at gauri..... and said...

"yeh nahi chodne wala...." to this gauri lowered her eyes.... and bitting her lips trying to control her giggles....

and Shiv walked towards the door.... shouting.... "Aaaraha hu..... "

and opened the door.... halfway and said.... "kya hai..." with irritated look....
and vivan said... "kya hai matlab.... ek toh... babhi ko humse teekse baat bhi nahi kiya... aur legaye honeymoon par...
aur waapas aaye aur phir se room mein bandh kardiya...." and continued... with hand justure... saying "now move..." to which
shiv lifted his eyebrows asking "what....??" and Vivan said... "Tum hato... mujhe tumse nahi... babhi se baat karni hai.."
and Shiv moved out of the door.... and said... "Babhi se kya baat karni hai..." with more irritation...
and Vivan tried to just go past shiv towards the door... and Shiv moved infront of him blocking his way...

and then vivan gave a "whats up with you...???" look....
and Nikhila called... "Shiv...." and Shiv moved forward to answer Nikhila from the corridor...

"SHiv... tum abhi tak fresh nahi huye....???"
"Jaldi se fresh hoke aajao... aur gauri ko bhi bejdo.... shyla chahi... aur dadi aye hai..." and
Shiv nodded....

and during this time Vivan just pushed open the door and entered shouting...

"Bhabhi...."

and Gauri had finished getting ready and was setting her bindi and she turned..... in surprise....
and vivan gave a beaming smile and gauri reciprocated the smile....

Shiv came from behind.... and sighed.... looking at beautiful gauri....and not being able to hold her..
and then took his towel and entered the washroom to get ready...

Vivan jumped on the bed.... and said.... "Hi babhi..."
and Gauri said .... "Hi..." smiling....

"Babhi... meine apko phone pe... bola thana.... mujhe kya kya chahiye..."
"chaliye... sabse pehle mere gift...."
and gauri smiled... and walked towards the bags.... to take all the gifts out......

she took out a laptop, ipod... and gauri smiled.... and gave them to him... and Vivan moved from
the bed and came and hugged gauri sideways and said.... "Thankyou babhi..."

Shiv walked in wearing a towel around his waist.... and wiping his hair.... and looked at vivan and gauri
and said.... "Milgaya tumara gift... ab chalo...." and Vivan said.... "haan chalte hain... hame bhi koi shauk
nahi hai.... aapke kamremein rehneki..." and said.... "chalo babhi... chalte hain...."
and took gauri's hands and started to walk with her... and Shiv said....
"Tum jao neeche.... mujhe tayar hona hai.... gauri badh mein aayegi..."
and vivan said... "tume tayar hona hai...toh tayar ho jao.... babhi ki kya zaroorat hai...mein unhein apne saat
lejavunga..." with a wicked smile....

Shiv took hold of Vivan's ear as gauri looked on feeling amused with all the boy fight....

and then shiv walked with vivan.... to the door and pushed him out.... "bhaya... mera kaan toh chod dijiye....."
and shiv left the ear....




Let me know how you like this part..... Do leave your comments.....

Thanks,
Bunny.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
o i think it was really sweet..i liked the second chapter better..the situation between shiv gauri and vivan was funnny to read. suited shivs characteristics to the full.
as for gauri guess shes just playing along with it ...yet will she change??? dont want her to though..i think shy, introvert gauri makes for a good shiv gauri couple. after all shivs character is quite out there😉
anyways it was lovely to read your updates as usual they were fab..
thanks..
Edited by jagrutid - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
R e s e r v e D [will comment for both parts here itself!]
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
Hey thanx alot for the pm.. nice update... enjoyed vivan teasing shiv.. do continue soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
hiii thnx for updating bunny well both updates r good
keep updating plzz
saba 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
AWWWWWWW! dat ws sweet! vivan being the kibab mein haddi n gettn on shivs nerves😆lol! poor shiv nt havin much time 2 romnce wid hs wife! well con sooooonnnn!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
first, thanks for the pm!


both parts were awesome!!! haahaa poor shiv...cant spend time with gauri:(
plz do continue soon...n once again thanx 4 the pm n srry 4 the late reply
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
hey very nice its awesomeeeeeeee pleazzzzz continue i am eager to read next
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
yaar you forget to pm em plz next time pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
thx yaar for updating well this ff is very special to me
actually every shiv gauri ff is very special but in this ff no vilian and the two parts awesom
vivan is so cute
update soon

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