Doli Saja Ke - Pa 3 on Pg 4 - 01/08/09 - 11:21pm - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Kripa-Rani

Great update 👍🏼

Please continue soon 😛
And I love the way you included pictures along with your fan-fic.... 😉
Regards,
Tanya
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Thanks Tanya

Regards,
Tia
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

heyy gr8 updt!

da pix...prithviraj chauhan or dharam veer hehe,,haina??
khair gr8 idea!
nyc cont asap!



Thanks yaar and those pixs are from Prithviraj chachan

Regards,
Tia
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hw sweet!!!!!!!!!11n a pics were rlly gud(aldo dey were 4rm pritviraj chohan,LOL)hppy dat u upd8d n plz make sure dat da oppasites dont fall in lv or else itl go or rong(can add a differrnt twist but nt dis)😛👏👏con SOON!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

Happy new year yaar.

n iam very sorry 4r being soooooooo late to reply.coming to ur ff its a fantastic ff.it really sounds gud.n yaar thank u soooooooooo much 4r making iqbal,yash n pallavi as leads n that too pallavi double role.i really appreciate this idea👏.u know i just to see yash pallavi n iqbal pallavi in one show.they it would be really a very big hit.hope atleast in the future we can see these 3 in one show.

i read the 2 parts n i really loved the 2 parts.keep up the gud work yaar👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: starfan.shrk

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hw sweet!!!!!!!!!11n a pics were rlly gud(aldo dey were 4rm pritviraj chohan,LOL)hppy dat u upd8d n plz make sure dat da oppasites dont fall in lv or else itl go or rong(can add a differrnt twist but nt dis)😛👏👏con SOON!



I haven't decided who will get married to who... but for-sure I will try my best to keep Shiv and Gauri together or else they are together in my other fan-fic (Pyar Ka Sauda)...

Thank you

Regards,
Tia
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: soniayk6

Happy new year yaar.

n iam very sorry 4r being soooooooo late to reply.coming to ur ff its a fantastic ff.it really sounds gud.n yaar thank u soooooooooo much 4r making iqbal,yash n pallavi as leads n that too pallavi double role.i really appreciate this idea👏.u know i just to see yash pallavi n iqbal pallavi in one show.they it would be really a very big hit.hope atleast in the future we can see these 3 in one show.

i read the 2 parts n i really loved the 2 parts.keep up the gud work yaar👏



It's okay! You don't have to be sorry...
Even I want to see them in future together on one screen...

Thanks yaar

Regards,
Tia
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part Three... Shiv is getting close to the truth

Scene One
Somewhere inside Shiv's heart he still loves Gauri but he brushes it of by hatred but he cries for her when he is alone.
Gauri sat in the car and thought about Shiv who use to be her best friend more than Akshat Bro's friend, but after her mother got married to Mr. Bajaj her lawyer. Everything changed for her in-fact she builds a wall between them because she doesn't want to get hurt by anyone who she loves after what happened 17yrs ago.
Sagar notice few tears dropping down Gauri's cheek and asked her if she's alright.
At first Gauri didn't answer him because she was thinking about Shiv and all the good time she had with him before her mother got married. After awhile she told Sagar that she was thinking about her mother, her brother and some close friends who she shares her feelings with.
"Gauri, what would you like for dinner? Asked by her brother Akshat
Shivani thought twice before ordering because she loves non-veg but Gauri is a vegetarian so she ordered herself a glass of water with Cesar salad.
Everyone looked at Gauri who never ate any kind of food other than Indian and today she ordered herself a salad.
Shiv couldn't keep his mouth shut no-longer and said "Gauri, are you okay? Are on some kind of diet that you ordered yourself a salad instead of Indian food?"
Shivani wanted to punch the lights out of Shiv than herself for ordering her type food instead of Gauri's kind.
Shivani mumbled something to herself than said "actually when I went to my friend's wedding in Simlia, I ordered myself a salad and I liked it for a change. It's not too oily or heavy food... just perfect for a light meal. So do you have a problem Shiv?"
Shiv nods his head and said something to himself "this is not my Gauri? My Gauri never talks back like her. In-fact she listens to me in-front of everyone than complains to me when they are alone not like this."
Shivani felt like she heard something so she asked Shiv "did you say something?"
Shiv just replied a simple "no" but Shivani felt like she heard something and gave Shiv a weird look that made him angrier inside where he was held his anger before.
Scene Two
Mahen thought about getting Gauri married to Samar or Shiv because both of his sons' like her, but he wants to know what Gauri thinks about her life partner.
Nikhila comes and touches Mahen's shoulder to bring him out of his thoughts.
Mahen looks at his wife before he tells her what he was thinking. After Mahen told her everything she agrees with him that it's better if Gauri picks her life partner instead of them asking her to choose out of Shiv or Samar.
Shivani finishes her salad and decides to go for a walk while her brother Akshat, Samar and Shiv are finishing their meals. Shiv finished his meal and told his brother to pay for him too since he doesn't have enough money, but Akshat stops Gauri from giving money to him by saying "let your bro pay for you and remember when I am with you. You don't have to pay for anything because I can afford."
Shivani wanted to cry and hug him but she controlled herself. And Shiv asked her if he can join her for the walk but Shivani told him "I just want to be alone, Shiv. I hope you understand" Shiv nods his head while he wanted to follow her so he ended up following her instead of going into his room in the hotel.
Shivani walked by the beach feeling the water on her bare feet, Shiv also did the same without letting Gauri know that he is following her,
Shivani felt like someone is following her so she turns back but nobody is there.
"Gauri, are you excited to meet your father, your brother Swayam, his wife Aastha and their five year old son Kunal." Sagar asked Gauri while they are driving to Rohit Mehra's Mansion.
Gauri shakes her head but wonders how her sister Shivani is handing Shiv who always pushes himself on her but never does anything because he doesn't want to force her. But wants to win back his love and break the wall between them.
Shivani is dam serious that someone is following her so she hide behind a tree to see who is following her but Shiv is ten times smart in the game so he also hide behind a tree.
Shivani gets more frustrated and sits down on the sand and leans her back behind the tree.
Shiv comes, in-front of her and stared at her face and whispers something into her ears...
Shivani opens her eyes but nobody was there and decides to go inside the hotel and take a nice, hot shower before going bed.
Scene Three
Finally Gauri comes to her destination in London; she gets out of the car and touches the nameplate on the get.
Her smile turns into a frown when Sagar says something to her. Gauri controlled herself from sobbing because she can not see her Papa die in-front of her because of his cancer that only Shivani and Sagar know about.
Gauri wipes her tears and says "I am proud of you Shivani that you gave me a chance to meet Dad in my life and I promise you that Dad will come one day to India".
Gauri wipes her tear again and looks at Sagar with a smile on her face... than pushes the gates of her father house.
Shivani returns back into her room and find her brother sleeping peacefully on the sofa and she crawled into bed without changing her clothes.
Swayam gets up from his seat and welcomes his veeranwali into his arms... Gauri runs into his arms and says "I missed you Veerji and where is Dad?"
Swayam tells his cute, loving sister that their father is waiting for her in his room.
Gauri looks at Sagar for help because she doesn't know where her father's room is or even Shivani's room where she have to stay until her birthday and within that time she has to make her father agree to go India.
Sagar guides Gauri around the house by holding her hand so nobody would notice anything new around the atmosphere.
Shivani had a huge smile on her face while she slept on the bed peacefully while Gauri had a huge smile on her face when her father hugged her. (This moment was special for Gauri because she was hugging her father for the first time but for him it wasn't because he was hugging his daughter Shivani).
"Why is my Chutki so emotional today?" asked by her father who wiped her tears.
Gauri looked at her father than at Sagar who covered his face... with his hands...
Scene Four
"Dad, it's not like that but I was missing you so badly that these tears escaped from my eyes" Gauri begun to explain herself.
"Very!" said by someone from behind
Both father and daughter turn around and shout "of course", afterwards Swayam joins them for a group hug. Afterwards they go down for dinner and Rohit asked Sagar to join them but he said "some other time".
"Are you sure Sagar Bhaiyya?" asked by a responsible housewife, and loving daughter-in-law.
"Yes Bhabhi... I'm sure but some other time. But why don't you need your daring sister-in-law Shivani for a change?" Sagar begun to play pranks with Gauri
Gauri gives Sagar a weird look than says "Bhabhi since I have along vacation from work... now on you won't step in the kitchen until your due-date. Right Veerji"
Swayam agrees with his sister and tell his wife to join them for dinner but she denies by saying "after I feed you guys than I'll have something to eat."
"Bhabhi, if you aren't going to eat than I am also not going to eat and if I don't eat than Dad won't eat also Veerji won't eat. So what are you thinking Bhabhi?" Gauri begun to emotionally blackmail her Bhabhi and she gave into Shivani's (meaning Gauri) blackmail.
While they were having dinner, Gauri had tears slightly escaping from her eyes and landed on her hand. Also she had a smile on her face because after many years she was eating a full meal with her dad's family or else her mother doesn't have time for her or Akshat Bro.
Scene Five
Gauri wishes goodnight to her family and heads to her room (meaning Shivani's room). She begins to un-pack her things and before putting them away proper she texts Shivani about her first day in London with their Dad, Veerji and Aastha Bhabhi.

Shivani's cell beeps... Shivani wakes up and reads her text message... also text back by saying that she is in Goa with Akshat, Samar and Shiv. Also Shivani asks Gauri about her feelings for Shiv.
But Gauri doesn't reply after her first text because she isn't sure anymore what she feels for Shiv.
Shiv wakes up six in the morning than usually... takes a mini shower before heading down for his morning jog since he, hardly slept after Gauri's change of behavior. He started to wonder, if something is wrong with Gauri and decided to have a chat with her before his parents ask her to get married to his older brother Samar.
Shivani also gets up... takes a mini shower and heads down for her regular exercise in the morning for her figure. Shivani was on her way when she bumped into her ex-boyfriend with his wife Meera. She looks at him for awhile than says "I'm sorry... I should have watched where I am going."
Meera's husband says "its okay Shivani" and both of them walk their own way, but Shiv heard the conversation.

Regards,
Tia

Edited by Shagun-Ki-Raat - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow!! fab part honeyy,,.......shiv hrd him say SHIVANI!!??? oh god now watz gonna hapn? truth out??? well........nyc part updt nxt part ASAP!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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tia luved it superbbbb emm confuse yaar wit couples shivgauri or shivshivani lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AMAZIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tht ws soooooooooooooo gud. i like da way in brakets u rote who it ws actually referin 2 cuz its rlly helpfull. i jus wishs dat gauri(real 1)gets marrid 2 shiv n dat shiv finds out bout shivani actin as gauri by readin a text on hr fone or sumthin. well, cant wait so con ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

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