Doli Saja Ke - Pa 3 on Pg 4 - 01/08/09

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Tia Verma

@Shagun-Ki-Raat

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Posted: 16 years ago

Note - My fan-fic is kinda similar to the film Kuch Khatti Kuch Meethi.... 😛

Kapoor Parivaar
Salil Ankola - Mahen Kapoor
Achint Kaur - Nikhila Kapoor
Yash Tonk - Samar Kapoor
Iqbal Khan - Shiv Kapoor
Shubhangi Aatre - Tanya Kapoor

Intro of Kapoor Family:

Mahen and Nikhila are proud parents of three kids (Samar, Shiv, and Tanya).

Samar is a perfect son, a perfect brother, a perfect businessman (who gives hundred percent dedications to anything related with work) and maybe Samar will turn out to be a good husband because he is very dedicated person in life.

Shiv is Mahen and Nikhila's spoiled son who is a perfect brother, but not a son. Shiv doesn't believe in long-term relationship with anyone except for taking revenge from anyone he hates in his life. Also Shiv is over-protective of his sister but does not care about anyone else's sisters' dignity.

Tanya is youngest out of all her siblings in the house-hold and loved by everyone mostly her brothers Samar and Shiv.

Mehra Parivaar and Sharma Parivaar

Cezzane Khan - Dr. Rohit Mehra
Shweta Tiwari - Prerna Sharma
Omar Vani - Swayam Mehra
Vikas Sethi - Akshat Sharma
Pallavi Subhash - Shivani Mehra
Pallavi Subhash - Gauri Sharma

Intro of Mehra Parivaar and Sharma Parivaar:

Fifteen year of marriage is broken by one misunderstanding between Dr. Rohit Mehra and Prerna Sharma. Rohit and Prerna's separation didn't affect them much but it affected their kids' life after (Rohit got custody of Swayam and Shivani and Prerna got custody of Akshat and Gauri) when they wanted to live together because they can not stay apart from one another.

Seventeen years later

Dr. Rohit is well settled in London with his kids but misses Gauri and Akshat a-lot. Rohit doesn't share his feelings with anyone that easily after getting backstabbed from his friend Mr. Bajaj in life. Also Rohit has created a wall between him and India. And hates to think about it or even hearing the name of India makes him angry from his kid's mouth.

Now days Swayam doesn't bother thinking about his mother and his siblings but misses them terrible. But doesn't let his father know how he feels after they moved to London. Anyways Swayam keeps himself busy in his music and his teaching career at St. Peter's Collage.

Even Shivani gave hope in changing her father's point-of-view about India. After completing her masters in crime fighting, Shivani joins CID Special Bureau in London. One day Shivani is sent to India on a case without letting her father know about it or else she knew that her father would end up killing her or kill himself. So she made her ACP Sir to promise her that he won't let his father know about her leave to India. During her investigation she meets her twin sister Gauri in Simlia.

Also Prerna moved on in life by getting married to Rishab Bajaj after she got divorce from Rohit. Her decision in marrying Mr. Bajaj harmed her relationship with her son Akshat and her daughter Gauri who stands by her side but her eyes are filled with questions.

Akshat created a wall between him and his mother after she got married to Mr. Bajaj (who is responsible for his parents' spilt up and also for his cold behavior toward everyone in life except for his sister Gauri). Also Akshat only shares his feeling with Shiv and Samar not anyone else... not even his sister Gauri.

After her mother got married to Mr. Bajaj, Gauri hardly talks to her mother but always stands by her side. One day without telling anyone she decides to go to Simlia for her friend's wedding and lucky she meets her twin sister Shivani during her investigation.

Edited by Shagun-Ki-Raat - 16 years ago

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Amnu

@Eternized_Blues

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Posted: 16 years ago

Very intersting story line and i loved the line the says about Shiv and dignity of other ppl's sisters...hmm waiting to see what he does with akshat's sister which i gather is his best friend. And it seems like Samar the good boy is going to be a bad husband and Shiv the bad boy could be a good husband but i guess it is very early to assume anything...Bring it on hun

Amnu

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Tia Verma

@Shagun-Ki-Raat

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: amneet89
Very intersting story line and i loved the line the says about Shiv and dignity of other ppl's sisters... Yep! Shiv gives a heck about his sister's dignity but doesn't care about anyone else's dignity. 😉 hmm waiting to see what he does with akshat's sister which i gather is his best friend. Yep! Him and Akshat are good friends. And it seems like Samar the good boy is going to be a bad husband and Shiv the bad boy could be a good husband but i guess it is very early to assume anything...Anything could happen... maybe a good person turns into a killer to get the girl he loves or could team up with Shiv's exgirlfriend. Just have to wait and watch who Shiv ends up with and Samar.... 😉Bring it on hun

Amnu

Thank you so muh for your support... 😃

Tia

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Tia Verma

@Shagun-Ki-Raat

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shivgauri
awesome intro
start soon:)

Thank you

Tia

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Tia Verma

@Shagun-Ki-Raat

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part One - Gauri and Shivani switches places...

Scene One

Shivani convinces Gauri to switch places with her so she can meet their mother and she can meet their father. And also learn the true reason behind their separation.

After awhile Gauri agrees with Shivani in switching places so she can change their father's point-of-view about India both girls aboard switch passports, tickets, id-cards and many other things.

"Bye Gauri" Shivani hugs Gauri with tears coming down her face. Gauri also hugs Shivani tight with tears coming down her face and warns her about Shiv and Akshat's angry problem.

Shivani told Gauri not to worry about anything over here but make sure that Swayam Bhaiyya doesn't recognize you and also don't get to emotional always act tough around them also remember one more think... my nickname is Chutki around them and my friends in London.

Gauri assured Shivani she will handle everything but warned her to be careful around Shiv.

Before a-boarding the flights both girls hugged each other for the last time.

Scene Two

Akshat sat in his room and looked at his father's picture and tears role down his face. Samar notice Akshat crying silently in his room and decided to have a-word with his father about Akshat's pain for his father's love.

Nikhila thought about getting Shiv married to Gauri but Mahen wants Gauri's hand in marriage for Samar not Shiv - because he is good for nothing and Samar is a perfect son in-front of him.

Shiv heard his parent's discussion in who should get married to Gauri even he wants to get married to Gauri so he can take his revenge from her by marrying her.

Shiv had a wicked smile on his face...

Samar taps Shiv on his shoulder but Shiv leaves from there with a smile on his face and Samar knocks on the door.

Mr. Bajaj yells at his personal assistant for booking Gauri a ticket to Simlia without his permission.

His personal assistant stood there with his head bend down in shame but also doesn't understand why he is being so harsh on Gauri for attending her friend's wedding.

Scene Three

Prerna sat in her room and looked at her kids' pictures and thinks about where she went wrong in raising her kids. Akshat hates seeing her face after she got married to Mr. Bajaj and Gauri stands by her side but her eyes are always filled with question about her remarriage with Mr. Bajaj.

Tears role down her face and remembers Rohit's word about the kids before taking a leave to London with Swayam and Shivani.

Mr. Bajaj comes into his room and gets irritated by Prerna's crying. And begins shouting at her.

Shivani enters Bajaj Mansion with a smile to see her mother but also scared in getting caught even though they are twins (meaning her and Gauri).

Servant of the house shouts Gauri's name witch is heard by Rishab in his room and comes running down the stair.

Shivani observes his movements before he came closer to her. Before he can slap her or question her she moves back one step and bumps into her brother Akshat. For awhile, Shivani forgot what was going on and stares at her brother with tears running down her face.

"Gauri, are you okay?" Akshat asked her with concern in his throat, Shivani breaks out of her thoughts and nods her head. Akshat also told Gauri to go in her room and pack her things because they are going to Shiv's farmhouse in Goa for few days.

Scene Four

Gauri again nods her head without saying a-word. Mr. Bajaj stared at Akshat for saving Gauri from his lecture and plus ordered her in-front of him.

Mr. Bajaj leaves from there with anger while Akshat also goes into his room for his packing while Shivani is figuring out where in the heck is Gauri's room.

At first she enters into a wrong room filled with beer cans all over the place and remembered Gauri's word about Mr. Bajaj's son Rahul (Amit Tandon) who lives there but doesn't keep relationship with anyone... not even his own father.

Shivani had a smile on her face and walks out of the room. And enters another room filled with half-naked guys picture on the wall with another picture of one guy all over the place and remembers Gauri's word about Mr. Bajaj's daughter Kripa (Neha Bamb) who is madly in love with Shiv, but Shiv doesn't give a heck about her or her beauty because he wants to take his revenge from her.

Shivani had another smile on her face and walks out of the room. And finally enters into the right room. Shivani goes inside, takes a mini shower than begins packing another bag, since she is going out of town with her Akshat Bhaiyya.

Akshat finish packing his things and leaves from his room but bumps into his mother who asks him question regarding where he is going with his friend and his sister.

Scene Five

Akshat looks at his mother for awhile than says "is a mother asking him or Mr. Bajaj's wife asking him?"

Prerna couldn't bare her son's cold attitude towards her and leaves from there with tears running down her face.

Akshat stood there awhile and said something into his mind about what happened a second ago between a mother and son. Afterwards heads toward Gauri's room and finds her taking a mini lap while packing her bags. So he finishes her packing without disturbing her sleep. He carries her into the car.

Shiv watches Akshat carry Gauri in his arms while Samar asked Akshat something and Akshat told him "I hate taking help from Bajaj family and plus I am use to carrying Gauri in her sleeps. And my bags together without anyone's help", Samar looked at Askhat for awhile than open the car door so he can put Gauri in the back with Shiv who pretended to sleep so he doesn't have to sit front seat with Samar.

Both Akshat and Samar smiled at Gauri and Shiv afterwards they took their seat in the car and Samar drove off to Goa.

Thank you
Regards
Tia

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Tanya Patel

@Kripa-Rani

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Posted: 16 years ago

Awesome! Please continue soon! Because it feels like I am re-watching Kajol's film over again.

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saba

@luv_pavi

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

awesumm intro n part luved it plz do continue asap

saba

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139271

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Posted: 16 years ago

great start! but why does Shiv wants to take revenge from Gauri😕
if it is possible, can u mention who all are the pairs in this?😳
pls continue soon

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Dina known azz **Angel or Shaz

@xAngelicANGELx

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Posted: 16 years ago

Nice intro Tia...Keep it up & do continue soon.x

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starfan.shrk

@starfan.shrk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#10

such a WUNDRFULL FF n i jus noticd it now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡 its vryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy intrestin n 2 make it outstandin, u gave gauri a twin.😆 lol!!! im luvin it yaar!!!!!!but wot if shiv gets marrid 2 shivani instad o f gauri,,,, den poor shivani will get stuck wid shiv n he will give hr pain 44 wot gauris done. i rlly hope nothin like that happens.itll b a real nightmare. well, con ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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