FF:GauriShiv-Saathi re..Updtd Pg:20 10thOct09 - Page 13

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Posted: 16 years ago
oh goddddddd reeno iam sorry yaar.i think i missed three parts.11,12 n 13 .iam really sorry yaar.seems like u still didnt get ur punishment.again short updates.hummmmmm i shouls take some action now.seriously.just kidding yaar.
i loved the three parts.espicially last part with our sammy boy.ahhhhh what a confidence but seems like he is being bit over confident.not gud at all 😆.anyway wating 4r ur next part to see sam's state.
n yaar what did u do to mahen 😭 plzzzzzzz u become ektha mayya n cure his illness😆.i dont want anything happen to mahen😊😊.he is such a great father.
n coming to ur update as usual cute n fantastic updates.keep up the great work yaar👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 14
(actually dis part was 2 b a cont of 13......bt....thot of doingg it dis way round!)
Kaya:Samar bhayya...aap??....yahaan kiya karre hain aap??
When she is askingg dis...samar actions behind sum1 2 go..

Its samrat and shiv.
they run upstairs.....fortunately..arent noticed by kaya or any1!

Kaya: yeh kiya karrahe hain aap??

Samar: umm....woh kuch nhii....arey kaya ...hehe tum kaafi achi lag rahi ho.....yeh dress miene pasand ki thii naa??

Kaya: jee nhii.....Mr......yeh dii ne select ki thii!!...ab aap jaiyye...sharam nhii aati yooon larkiyon k function mien ghuss gaye!!??!


She pushes him...nd makes him go

Samar: arey par yeh mera [plan nhii.....unn dono ka thaa!!...unn dono ko tho....

Kaya: kiya dono?? ...bhayya mjhe pata hai...aap bahane karrahe ho...jaao.



She pushes him nd he bumps in2 sum1
she has a basket of flowers in her hands which falls down.


They both kneel down and start 2 pick it up.


Samar: im sorry....woh yeh kaya...

Suddenly....2 da grl...da voice sounds familiar...and so...she lux up...
**{she is additi gupta}**


Samar also lux up.

Samar: TINA??

Tina: samar kapoor..?? ryt??

Samar: yeahh..


suddenly...kaya sees dem.


Kaya: Tiiiaaaaaa!!!!!😃...wow!! ur hre!!


Tina lux at kaya nd quickly cmz 2 her nd dey hug.


Kaya: wat a pleasant surprise tia!...tum tho kal pauhanch rahi thii naa??


samar thinks 2 himslf.."TIA??" is kaa naam tho tina tha naa??


kaya lux up at smar


Kaya: arey aap abhi tak nhi gayye??
bhayya!!!!...acha by the way....yeh hai tia...gauri dii ki old class fellow nd bst frnd...nd of crse meri bh9i bst frnd!

Samar: par tumhara naam tho tina hai naa?>?

Tia smylz.........: haan.....tina real name hai...par ghar mien sab hamesha se Tia bulaatey hain....
official name tina hai nd Tia is more of a pet name.


Samar: ohh....



Tia goes 2 gauri

Gauri lux at her.


Gauri: omg tiaa!!.......ur hre??!!😃😛...she blushes slightly.."thnx!"

Tia: tumharii shaadi aur mien naa aaooon???? IMPOSSIBLE!!!


Gauri is veryy happy nd xcited as well..nd da 2 hug tightly!

Shiv watches dis from upstairs and himself feels too gud 2 c gauri smile...soo immensely and deeply ... from inside.
He is also smilingg at himself lukingg at da 2.


Tia: gauri....chachi ne tere liye yeh kangan bheja hai....abhi pehenlo.

gauri: sach!!?? wow!...acha chalo...ooper chal k pehenleti hoon...tum bhi apni bangles pehenlena.

Tia: okie!


suddenly shiv and samrat realize dat gauri and her frnd are cmingg up nd dey gotta hide...but they dont find a place.
All the rooms are locked.
They move here and there in a haphazard way and gauri and tiaa c dem!!


Gauri's mouth drops open!


Gauri: Shiiv??? Samrat???😕😲😲

Samrat: ab tho gaye!!😕


Tia whispers 2 herself "Shiv??"///ohh yhh.....

Tia: SHIV!!!...ohh kool...tho aap hain shiv......
namastey...mien hoon tiaa...AAPKI GAURI ki bst frnd

Shiv: ohh namastey!.



they are smilingg ... suddenly shiv lux at gauri...who is angry!😡



Shiv: shit!!.......gauri......wohh.....mjhe dekhna tha

Tia: umm...shiv....ek sec...
she takes him 2 a side....nd tells him sumthingg....nd gives him the kangan.
den she winks at him and shows him athumbs up sign.
She goes down and suddenly lights are off all-over!.




end!
gyz m sooo sry fr da short updt again...bt i cant hlp it..
m too bzy 2 do longg updts!!
sry,,,,,,,
muaaah
Edited by xx-ReenO-xx - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwww sweet shiv ..and nw seems tia got some plan for shiv hehhehehehe grttt..........apdate soooooon!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kuku..

hahaha sammy walkin in as if he is on the ramp! i wonder wht his plan is.... i guess tia is goin to be his pair....wat a guess!! 😉 Shiv is soo cute and already fallin for gauri😛 yup!!
continue soon hun😃 ohh i hav already hun!!....

thnk u shoo mush fr readingg nd cmntingg...
hve updtd da nxt part!!
Happy readingg!!!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: komal hashim

awwwwwwww plzz con soon !!!

dun hun!!thnx fr readingg!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: starfan.shrk

OMG!!!!!!!!jaanu tht ws FAB!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aaww,...thnx soo much!..shiv dressin as a girl jus 2 gt an entry n b wid hs soon-2-b-wife. hehe yhh...how sweet n romantic!!!!!!!!!☺️ plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con ASAP!!!!!!!!!!! sure!!...n make it a long 1 cuz dis ws 2222222222222222 short!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11👏👏i kno :((( m sryy :(((🤪

thnx aroosa!!!!
ur a sweethrt!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: soniayk6

oh goddddddd reeno iam sorry yaar.i think i missed three parts.11,12 n 13 . no probz!!!....iam really sorry yaar.seems like u still didnt get ur punishment.again short updates.😆😆 hehehe sorry!!! hummmmmm i shouls take some action now.seriously.just kidding yaar. haha i kno!!!!

i loved the three parts.thnku!!!....espicially last part with our sammy boy. hehehe ahhhhh what a confidence but seems like he is being bit over confident. looll hmmm not gud at all 😆.anyway wating 4r ur next part to see sam's state. haha its up dii!!
n yaar what did u do to mahen 😭 plzzzzzzz u become ektha mayya n cure his illness😆.i dont want anything happen to mahen😊😊.he is such a great father.i kno he si.....bt....yaar dunno..wats gonna hapn :S
n coming to ur update as usual cute n fantastic updates.keep up the great work yaar👏 thnxxx

thnx dii fr readingg nd cmntingg!!
nxt part's up!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_pavi

again a very short barp but is amazing mehendi ceremony now shaadi n all eagerly waitin 4r moree hehehe...

saba

thnx fr waitinggg...sry fr da short updt!!!!
😆😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice updateee 👏but very shortttttttttttttttttttt as alwaysss 😡
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Posted: 16 years ago
cute part! oh my, waitin for the next part..Shiv, Gauri and andhera!☺️😆
how does Sammy know tina? well waitin to see Sammy and tina romance😳
continue soon

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