FF:GauriShiv-Saathi re..Updtd Pg:20 10thOct09

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swetha10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#101

Hey Reeno short but cute part.. wonder wht this Dhruv would do now?? Well happy to knw tht Sangeet is cming up... Plzz continue asap.......

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Posted: 16 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi
short but sweet ....aaww i kno yaar...m sry......bt thnx

not much ShivGauri but Kaya Samrat Shreya part was cute ... so they're planning something for the sangeet cool!!yh...........thnx sweeto

sweet update...thnx...😳

tc u 2 hun!!

yasmin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: shivgauri
manoj bohra is evil?😒 umm..yh!! 😕 i like him😳😆.......me 2 yaar!!😆😛
cute update hun... thnx honeyy!!...i thought samar and kaya are goin to be a pair..nah..samar is kaya's bhayya typ! but looks like it is samrat and kaya...hmm or is it? it is it is darlin'!!
gauri already startin on her wifey duties!sort of!!hehe i like it!hehehegud!..thnk god!!!😃
continue soon 2day or 2morro itslf fr sure!!!!

thnx fr reading kuku.....ur a darlingg!!!!

i luv it wen u gyz cmnt!

x muah x

reenoo

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Posted: 16 years ago

#104

Hey Reeno hii swethaa!!! short but cute part.. aahh....ill defo try nt 2 post short parts bt...cant hlp...dunno y my parts r short!!??!! lollzz wonder wht this Dhruv would do now?? hmm...im wonderingg da same thingg!! Well happy to knw tht Sangeet is cming up...really??kool thnk god!!! Plzz continue asap......i defo will..........2 nyt or 2morro mornin hun!!

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muah!!

thnx fr readingg

reenoo

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starfan.shrk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!
part 11
kaya is at home....alone

phone rings

KAYA: hello??

samrat's on da fone

SAMRAT: hi, kaya

KAYA: hii..hmm bolo

kaya n samrat???hm.. now is sumthin goin on ere r nt??

nxt scene

Dhruv is shown....lets assume its (karnvir bohra/manoj)

DHRUV: gauri, lagta hai mere changed luk ki wajah se tum mjhe pehchaan nhi paeen...u jst kno me as an employee..i mean as an ex-employee in shiv's office...par mien tmhien yaad dilaaoon ga k mien kaun hoon. Aur college se lekar ab tak tumhien hi dhoondra tha. Jab mien tmhien apna purana chehra dikhaaoonga...tho tum mjhe zaroor pehhchaanlogi...haina gaurii??

he has gauri's pic in his hand nd is talkin 2 it wen suddenly sum1 calls him frm behind nd da scene ends

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!itna bara jhatka!!! well, i lv it yaar!!! now its gunna b a mission 2 find out the truth n all.

She asks da office boy 2 giv her da tea nd dat she will take it 2 his room awwww how sweet!😳😳

***END***

m sry i keep n telling u gyz bt i cant hlp it im really bzy yaar......i hav 2 luk after studies..home..frndz..family......nd more its alrite aar, i ubdrstan n atleast u did upd8 cuz me 2 buzzy aswell!!! so all dis is keepin me damn 2 bzzy

bt...dis is fr all of u nd specially fr...

saba..sonia di..aroosa.(awwwww, so sweet n thx so much, rlly lv ur upd8 n do con soon, plus even if kaa is finishin, jus continue 2 rite ur ff cuz i rlly wanna read it all till da end!! 👏).shwetha..kuku nd all u who wantd an updt soon....bt...hehe sry if i let any of u down!!😕😛

x muah x

reenoo

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Posted: 16 years ago

#106

Part 12
shiv receives da fone call nd is shocked, his eyes r wide opened staring at...nothingg.....bt still as if he can c sumthingg

SHIV: wat???...yeh kiya kehrahe hain aap kaka??....acha........acha mien aaraha hoon

he quickly gets up, takes his coat nd is leavingg. Gauri is worried as 2 wat has happened

when he's leaving, gauri holds his hand

GAURI: kiya hua shiv, aap aise kahaan jaarahe hain??

SHIV: gauri, dad ki tabiyat bauhat kharaab ho hayee hai.......kaka keh rahe they k woh behosh ho gaye they after vomitting

GAURI: kiya?.............aap hospital jaarahe hain??.....mien bhi aap k saath chalti hoon

both of dem quickly leave

the 2 r realle tensed

GAURI: unhen hospital kaun lekar gaya??

SHIV: baba..mom aur kaka. Shayad dad ki tabiyat sahi nhi thi iss hi liye baba unnko ghar le gaye

GAURI: hmm........shiv......yaheen park kardeejiye ... aaage parking nhi miley gi, hum walk karlenge yahaan se

shiv parks da car dere itself

both of dem go.......dey run..a bit and reach da hospital.......

quickly dey ask da receptioninst about Mr. mahen kapoor and she tells them his ward/room

Both of dem go

nd slam open da door

shiv quickly enters and goes 2 his father

SHIV: dad...kiya hua...yeh....

MAHEN: arey...kiya hua ...kiya matlab??,,,,age factor son.......ab tu javaan hai.....tera baap ....he's grown old nd thtz it!!!

gauri is still at da door

she had never seen mahen kapoor....a man of his wrd...such a strong man....laying down helplessly on da hospital bed nd speaking slowly...givin her a hint tht it was a bit difficult fr him 2 talk at da momnt!

Gauri comes forward

GAURI: arey kaisi baatien karrahe hain aap??....aap kahan se boorhe hogaye??...aap hi k dum pe sab chalte hain....aur aggar aap hi yoon dheele par jayenge tho.....

Mahen calls her 2 him....nd makes her sit by his syd

MAHEN: gauri......pata hai, tum nhi jaanti lekin 1 of da reasons y i am still living is u......beti....miene tho.....

suddenly...nikhila actions him nt 2 say anythingg else.......... gauri senses that nikhila nd mahen r tryingg 2 hide sumthingg

Shashank gets up and leaves

GAURI: yeh kiya hua baba ko.??

SHIV: mien dekhta hoon

shiv goes 2 shashank

SHIV: baba......kiya hua???...aap aise kyun baahar agaye??

Shashank holds shiv's shoulders nd

SHNX: beta....

he sees nikhila standing behind shiv and pleading shashank not 2 say anythingg. Her tears fell down frm her eyes

SHIV: boliye baba

SHNX: woh....yeh dawaaen le aao

he takes out da doctor's prescription from his pocket nd hands it over 2 shiv

SHIV: r u sure baba aap ko yehi baat karni thi?/

he feels tht shashank is hiding sumthing frm him

SHNX: haan beta.......medicines le aa

after sumtym...da nurse cmz and she says she'll bring da medicines

The doctor asks everybody 2 leave da room bcz he had 2 do sum check-up

all of dem leave

Dr.:Mr. mAHEN ...aap apni family se chupaakar acha nhi kar rahe

MAHEN: arey Dr. miene apni family se nhi, sirf apne bacchon se yeh baat chupayee hai....woh pareshaan ho jayenge

Dr.: aur phir jab 11th hour par pata chale ga tho toot jayenge aur apne aap ko sambhaal bhi nhi paayenge

MAHEN: nhi dr. .....hopefully aisa kuch nhi hoga...... my kids r strong..........

Dr.: if dey r strongg, y dont u tell dem??.......humein bhi jhoot bolna parh raha hai. Dekhiye...im ur family Dr. and so am saying dis 2 ya. Ive been trying 2 cure ur CANCER from a longg tym now.....bt now....v 2 kno dat it iznt possible

MAHEN: jab tak chal raha hoon.....plz mjhe chalne deejiye......mien haarna nhi chahta.

kal gauri ki mehndi hai aur mien in donon ki shaadi k pehle kahiin nhi jaaoongaa....... 2day if im alive , its only due 2 dem and 2 c dem wed nd 2 c dem happily forever.....mayb i wont b able 2 c my grandchildren bt...........

Dr.: acha bus....aaraam kijiye

nd da dr leaves...sadly..shaking his head.

~~~***End***~~~

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Posted: 16 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: starfan.shrk

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saba

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Posted: 16 years ago

#108

heyyy mahen is having cancer 😭😭😭 godd dammit 😡😡😡 well such a emotional update 😭🤢 plz do update asap 😳 n reeno again a very short update goddd 😡😲🤢 u will never change lol 😆😆😆

saba😉

Edited by luv_pavi - 16 years ago