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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi friends........am not that active in this forum but just come here to read the beautiful ff's penned down by the members here..........well this is my first ever attempt at writing ff's so i juts hope it turns out to be readable by u all.. ......hmm i have been literally pushed to this task by nihi and this is for her.....nihi u surely r a devil hehe but a great freind.......

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Red,orange,yellow hues were descending down the sea creating an atmosphere of bewilderment with the dusky waves leaping to and fro,trying their best to hide fragility.........the thin line of wind was roaming'abt trying to find someone'who cud be afraid of it for it wanted to feel the fear in the eyes of mortals equivalent to the storm,'aha well that is wat everyone desires hmm some point of time to be dominant.......the brids were singing a melody specially for someone for they have been doing so for many years alltogether trying to get that charm back .......the sand was moving here and there in'a hope to engulf atleast a single mortal..well this is nature..everyone has'something or the other to do or was this a mere though of a girl who has been visiting this beach for many years altogethere....
We can see a girl with the most gracious and divine looks which can sweep anyone off the feet and make hearts melt but the face showed signs of distrest...the eyes were just searching for some place amongst the winds .........she was continuously just looking beyond the horizon and waiting for someone,someone who is hers, someone she needs badly and someone who can never return.......
suddenly her chain of thoughts were broken a voice-
driver-madam , it's getting late tomorrow u ahve to board a flight
well she was irritated to the hilt ..but she felt pity for him for this was his job and it was alwyas like that..she used to get totally immersed in this sea trying to find some solace in it......sighing she headed back to her porsche...aww she had to change that also hmm not getting time for it...
girl-Prats(well she meant prateek but liked calling him prats..this is the name of her driver) time is never there by my side ......... aisa kyun hota hai ki i always feel short of time......hmm anyways let;s go...
prats(thinking)- sigh , i wish i cud do something.......
well yes mam let's go ..........
and saying this he drove her back and the car faded away amongst gazillion twinkling lights and mad rush......
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Far away...away frm this maddening crowd we can see someone..someone who's busy playing with a small puppy and also admiring the beauty of twilight..someone who doesn't feel left out in this maddening crowd..someone who's eyes r searching that special person whom he can love dearly and never let go..someone who enjoys seeing beauty around and yet never get bored..someone who doesn;t have time for himself but deffo takes it out for love ...for his favourite job was to love everyone and he was the one whom everyone girl would want to cash on for he was the hunk of the hunks...the hotest body structure with the coolest mind....the most succesful person yet nobel at'heart......thye most sought'after yet so kind....he was the one who cud just take u're breath with his killer'smile..............suddenly his work was stooped due to a voice...
Voice: hey dude , you getting late for the date...
guy(smiling):just hold on..emma coming , u ready my dear..
Voice: as usual honey....
guy(went up to her and kissed her hands ): looking gorgeous..ohh i am bowled over by u're beauty...
Voice(giggling):aha stop it now or else we get late again..
and with this he opened the door for the lady and they drove amongst the clovely creations of god ........riding past beautiful lanes and seeing the beauty around at least the guy considered so ......

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well here i end....hmm i donno how's it..had been extremely busy but as had promised someone so just wrote it..it's just done hurriedly have not planned how the story wud go ....will do that shortly...watever came on mind in one go just tyoed it..i hope it was atleast bearable....
loking forward for u;re comments and support...
plz i request everyone to comment so that i can do better next time..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hehehe i know i m A devil...Atleast i m glad u listened to me....see just fr u i logged on As i cAme home...i m still in my school uniform.,hehehe.....great pArt yaAr n u lied dat u cant write...it was beyond wat i thought n mind it u do have creative mind.....hehehe i know i m a gud frnd.....the description of envt.blew me Away...next time A longer pArt..got it.....hehehe

well gotta go n take bAth 1st just to see ur post....i didn't get fresh.........

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nihitA
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Posted: 17 years ago
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well fr d title laAgi lAgan s best..........so now cAn i know d story-line...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nihita

hehehe i know i m A devil...Atleast i m glad u listened to me....see just fr u i logged on As i cAme home...i m still in my school uniform.,hehehe.....great pArt yaAr n u lied dat u cant write...it was beyond wat i thought n mind it u do have creative mind.....hehehe i know i m a gud frnd.....the description of envt.blew me Away...next time A longer pArt..got it.....hehehe

well gotta go n take bAth 1st just to see ur post....i didn't get fresh.........

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nihitA



aha the devil is here....was waiting ofr u since the time i posted.......awww that was so sweet hehe waise me had no practiclas todya islye the moment i was back me alos logged on to write a part hehe.....hhaaha well i am not good at writing ff's hehe..nah re just did this for you lmao was thinking i made a fool of myself pata hai maine abhi tak pada bhi nhai wat i have written nor do i have any intention to do that hehehe...haha am just glad that u liked.......ya u are more than good......aww really thot maybe me has just messed up really donno wat have i tried to describe hehe....hmm longer???? haila itna zulm toh mat karo..will try dear........

aww okies jaldi and come back fast ........and ya eat something .....must be hungry na....
well dear u're comments meant a lot to me..never thot that u wud like it...thnxs dear for such sweet gesture and u r special..u noe that?? haha i guess u noe...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nihita

well fr d title laAgi lAgan s best..........so now cAn i know d story-line...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz




aww wow ..well do u noe this was my first choice..and baad mein the other one came up o thot it's better to ask............story line hmmmmmmm lmao pehle let me think first haha me donno how am gonna proceed next and waise bhi pateince rakh kudiye ...lmao sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: atop



aha the devil is here....was waiting ofr u since the time i posted.......awww that was so sweet hehe waise me had no practiclas todya islye the moment i was back me alos logged on to write a part hehe.....hhaaha well i am not good at writing ff's hehe..nah re just did this for you lmao was thinking i made a fool of myself pata hai maine abhi tak pada bhi nhai wat i have written nor do i have any intention to do that hehehe...haha am just glad that u liked.......ya u are more than good......aww really thot maybe me has just messed up really donno wat have i tried to describe hehe....hmm longer???? haila itna zulm toh mat karo..will try dear........

aww okies jaldi and come back fast ........and ya eat something .....must be hungry na....
?well dear u're comments meant a lot to me..never thot that u wud like it...thnxs dear for such sweet gesture ?and u r special..u noe that?? haha i guess u noe...

luv atop

well in ur words gud u waited...sAbr kA phal meetha jo hota hAi....hehehe.....wow no prActicAls....i also bunked english class.....pAgal ho itnA achchA toh hai..bAs jo short msg writing likhti ho mat likhnA....hehehe abe sabko pAdni hai sirf hume hi nahi.........i really liked it n i mean it when i sAId it....hehehe i m blushing ya if u insist i'll thnk i m more dAn gud😳😆😉....u r crAzy...just go thru it once...u'll find it too pleAsing.......
ya i came...........hAAn yAAr abhi chAi ban jAye fir nAshta kArenge........thanx...wo kyA hai....no violation of rules.....
yoooooo me speciAl😊...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: atop




aww wow ..well do u noe this was my first choice..and baad mein the other one came up o thot it's better to ask............story line hmmmmmmm lmao pehle let me think first haha me donno how am gonna proceed next and waise bhi pateince rakh kudiye ...lmao sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...

luv atop

well All i can say is dat gr8 mind think Alike....hehehe....yoooooooooooo think n den chupke se tell me😉...sAbr hi toh nahi hotA humse......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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soundzz nicee dearrr........... likee it now updatee asap plzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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your a new writer ❓ doesn't seem it... the first part was really good 😃

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