FF~just hold onto me-II series~part 7-page17 - Page 13

hey its been so long u hav updated yr update plzzzzz waiting waiting.........................

Originally posted by: kuku..

awesome update hun!
Shabbir Sebastian Ahluwalia my hero😍☺️
wow.. now Shiv realizes tht he loves Gauri! How nice NOT!!!!😡😡😡
agree with him, he shud rot in hell😆 i am too evil yaar!
continue sooooooooooooon.. screw exams and write the next update😆

thankyou dear.........
yaaaaaaa ur hero indeed!!!!
hehehe leave poor shiv kuku......
u indeed are!!!!!!!
hehehe i'd better not screw it!!!!well completed it wid fair colours n will update soon!!!!!

love
nihita

Originally posted by: luv_pavi

u bakkk nice updateee shiv hmmmm realized nowww guddd....thnxx a lot 4r updatin best of luck 4r ur xamz

saba

thankyou dear......will post soon!!!!!!

love
nihita

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

agreed .... he should rot in hell ...

girl get Gauri to slap him, punch him kick him .... let her show the women power ... and tell that idiot that she is no crap he can use and throw away 😆 okay getting really angry here *grinning*.... but seriously man she shouldn't forgive him easy .... not after all that pain he gave her .... 😡

hehehe u all really hate him....dont you?well will update soon dear!!!!!

love
nihita

Originally posted by: atop

oye hoye jaans...itni jaldi update kar di hehe well i did give u some time off hehe par i would not mind also hhehe.........awww kya kahoon mindblosing is the same repeatitive thing i say but can't help it ...u know what whenever i read am always left wnating for more ..can't stop myself from reading it....maybe the ff is beautifully penned or the writer has displayed emotions with eae or the theme is wonderful or all the above..........gosh 8i can neevr figure out myself but only know one thing am always hungry for more...it was sweet yaar to see gauri in shiv's house ahem ahem..........hehe don't get me wrong soniyo just wondering ki how will this shabbir help both of them..maybe he'll help them to confess to each other but i know definitely he will do something chalo will wait for it......aww it was nice seeing them talking withing themselves and fighting with their own selve to hold each other..that justifies your title also.............
will wait for the enxt update.......and ya i agree with others gauri should show some superweoman powers...some meows hehe......this chauvy shiv better needs some lessons......
all the ebst for pre-boards......stay cool and calm(which i know u are)

may god bless you...

luv atop

hehehe u surely want more....hehehe i m blushing so many compliments in a go.....lets see shabbir helping them......hehehe i think gauri might heard every1 in d forum....i think he's repenting....will update soon!!!!!!!

love
nihita

Originally posted by: jagrutid

hiya got to say amazing..i dont know if ive been commenting regulary but got to say have been reading your updates..im a bit behind and so have been reading your past updates...they are all perfect. love your way of writing..and its fab..the fact that i can picture your discribed scene says it all...thank you so much for such a fanstastic update... and this last update was great..loved your discriptive skills and also the way you portray emotions..👏will look forward to your upcoming chapters...thanks again jagruti 😊

thankyou dear....i am glad u liked it...thankyou dear fr appreciation will update soon!!!

love
nihita

Originally posted by: starfan.shrk

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!tht ws sooooo sweet. aditi n gauris lv ws so sweet.shabbir will also probably hv da same story 2 gauri n shiv but mayb shiv n ggauri make him relise his tru lv.hope tht habbir will make things bttr btwen shi n gauri.(u no cuz he dont no tht ere separatd)!!!!! con soon!!!!!!!!!1111

thankyou dear...will continue soon!

love
nihita

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

amazing part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!👏

thankyou dear will continue soon!!!!!!

love
nihita

Originally posted by: jagrutid

please do update soon really love your ff!!!!, waiting....thanks
jagruti😊

thankyou dear....will update soon!!!!

love
nihita

Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey luved ur FF.. itz amazing.. do continue soon...Plzz do PM me when u update.....

thankyou dear....will cont.soon n will PM you!!!!!!

love
nihita