Ravika Drabble series : A beautiful feeling~ New Drabble , pg 6! - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome!

Cant wait for more !
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Brilliant teaser and really excited for the full update 😊

Like always, very well done
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Originally posted by: AmritaIPKKND

Really well-written!!! You described the scene beautifully!!! 😊



thanks a lot 😃😃⭐️⭐️

im glad you liked it 😃😃⭐️
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thanks a lot 😃😃😃⭐️

im glad you liked it 😃⭐️⭐️

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Originally posted by: Asheley

Nice teaser dear

update soon



thanks a lot 😃😃⭐️😃

im very happy you liked it 😃😃⭐️
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Originally posted by: miniapplepie

Awesome!

Cant wait for more !



thanks a lot 😃⭐️

im very happy you liked it 😃😃⭐️😃⭐️
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Originally posted by: LordRiddler

Brilliant teaser and really excited for the full update 😊

Like always, very well done





thanks a lot 😃😃⭐️⭐️😃

im really happy you liked it 😃⭐️
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hi guys! heres a drabble of ravika , hope you enjoy this drabble and please let me know how it is and please hit the like button 😃😃⭐️⭐️




Aasan nahin yahan aashiq ho jana

There were lots of lights in the hall , and the combination of white and pink roses were beautifully decorated on some walls and pillars. So many people talking to their freinds and family weraing larger than life lehengas sarees and suits .

But my eyes were only searching for her ... Only her.

Wo.. wowo.. wo..wowo..

And there she was , wearing a baby pink and white anarkali and with soft waves in her hair ... My heart alomist stopped beating when i saw her ... She was coming with the bride ... Walking right next to her she acompanied the bride till the mandap where the bride sat down and Devika stood with Sakshi and Pallavi .

Aasan nahin yahan aashiq ho jana

Palkon pe kanton ko sajana..

Aashiq ko milti hain

Gham ki saugatein

Sabko na milta ye khazana...

Wo.. wowo.. wo..wowo..

Wo.. wowo.. wo..wowo..

When all the wedding rituals wwre taking place i was standing at a distance wearing formals and my eyes were just looking at her, i couldnt do anything to help me out ... I just couldnt take my eyes from her .

The wedding was over , and Devikas eyes fell on me , it was a surprise, hence i looked everywhere but her , she caught me staring at her ... Or maybe not ... I couldnt figure it out ... When i finally gathered enough courage to look at her and face her ... She was smiling at me ... That wide smile of hers ... For that smile i can do anything ... Anything to make her smile thst way . ... Maybe she didnt caught me ... Thats why shes behaving normally ...

Shes walking towards me ... With a huge smile ... My heart started beating faster , shes standing right in front of me now

Baaton se aage

Waadon se aage

Dekho zara

Tum kabhi..

Evrybody around us went ti the dance floor and was dancing with their partners , Devika took my hand and pulled it to take me the dance floor , but i didnt go ... I smiled and shaked my head , i was a bit shy types and never ever danced in public , ... Devika stood besides me and then she went to stand with sakshi and my mom ... And me again , helplessly looked at her ...

It was time ... It was late ... So i thought of leaving ... I left the hall and went towards the swimming pool area... Which was as well decorated beutifully ...


Yeh toh hai shola

Yeh hai Chingari

Yeh hai jo aag bhi

Wo.. wowo.. wo..wowo..

Wo.. wowo.. wo..wowo..



Devika( in her mind )

Where has ravi gone ? ( searching for him ) .

And she left the place and came to the swimming pool area looking for him

D. Toh tum yahan ho ?

Ravi turned back to look at her abd said smiling

R. Devika ... Tum yahan ???

D. Andar kuch akela akela sa lag raha tha ...toh... Socha tumhaare saath aa jau ...

Ravis POV

And she she came towaards me ... A beautiful song was playing in the party and i could hear it ... suddenly devika came from behind and hugged me from back ... I was shockd at furst but then her scent was familiar... It was devika. He gently touched her hands which were on his chest...

Jismon ke peeche

Bhaage ho phirte

Utro kabhi rooh mein ho..


He turned around and saw devika... She was looking at him ... Intensely yet witth a lot of questions in her eyes...

D. Ravi... Tum shaadi chod ke kyun yahan khade ho ?

R. Thodi der akela rehna chahta tha devika ...

D. Par ab nahi...

And she stepped closer to him and placed hus hands on her waist and then... Placed her hands on the back of his neck ... After that... She rested her head on his chest and damced with him in sink with the music in the background ... And ravi was matching her steps.. It was an unexpected move by her abd thats why...He was really confused ...yet his happiness had no bounds as she was so close to him...

Devika felt somuch of calm and safety in hus arms... And as her ear was on his chest ( near his heart ) so she could hear his heartbearts ... Which were fast but not too fast ...

Devika soon looked at him... But very closely... So close that even he could feel her breath and she could feel his... Devika afyer breaking the eyelock... Placed a kiss on ravis cheek... He felt soothing with her kiss... He wanted this moment to get frozen...

kya aashiq

Kya aashiqui hai

Hogi khabar tab tumhe

But Pallavi came there to look for devika abd ravi ... And she found them too close

P. Ohhh!!!( she closed her eyed with her hand ) im sorry jiju ! Main badme aati hoon ..( and she turns around to leave but devika shouts)

D. Pallavi !! hum tumhaare saath chalte hain...

Ravis POV

Devika

Pallavi left saying that shomepne was calling her ...

And i was left there with devika... She entwined my hand with hers and gavee a ibtense abd pationate look... I looked hr ... She the started walking towards the wedding venue... With her hand in his .

Ho..wowo.. wo..wowo..

Wo..wowo.. wo..wowo..

Aa.. wo.. yeyi..ya..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Simply superb dear
u patryioted everything very well
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely drabble viny,wd one of my fvrt sng,keep it up dear 👏 👏 😳

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