Ravika Drabble series : A beautiful feeling~ New Drabble , pg 6!

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hi guys, i was thinking of wrting drables on ravika , pleasetell me if you are interested to read those?

They are going to be romantic drabbles and sometimes include a song

Please let me know id i should write
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My first comment in this forum...only to let u knw I am dying to read sth on Ravika...
Plzz
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Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18

My first comment in this forum...only to let u knw I am dying to read sth on Ravika...

Plzz



Thank you so much , hope you have a nice time on this forum 😃

Will be writing first drabble soon hopefully they like it 😃
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Yes heartbroken plz continue 😳
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Originally posted by: NusiSg

Yes heartbroken plz continue 😳



thank you so much😃😃,


you can call me viny 😃😃😃⭐️⭐️
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Originally posted by: heartbroken1



thank you so much😃😃,


you can call me viny ⭐️

hey viny
I hope u update soon-ish.. 😊
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Originally posted by: NusiSg

hey viny
I hope u update soon-ish.. 😊



, yes i hope so , thanks a lot 😃⭐️
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hi guys, heres the first drabble of this drabble series , so hope you enjoy it and please please leave your feedback and likes for the encouragement as it motivates me to write more and better .




Ravika drabble : Kabhi jo badal barse



Devika ws stading outside the building where she wotrked wearing a pink ank yellow salwaar kameez , it was raining ., heavily , soon , ravi came out of the office and went towards his bike , he was wearing white shirt , trousers and a black coat. He saw devika at the corner standing under a roof to protect jerself from the rain. So he went towards her .

Kabhi jo baadal barse

Main dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke

Tu lage mujhe pahli baarish ki duaa

Hetouched her shoulder, devika felt a warm touch in the cold ... and she turned around to see ravi , she smiled at him , he smiled back

R. Chalo ... Ghar chaltein hain...

D. Haan...

Ravi looked at devika , she was wet , so he removed his coat and placed it on her shoulders...

Tere pahloo mein reh loon

Main khudko paagal keh loon

Tu gham de ya khushiyaan

Seh loon saathiya

D. Thanks ravi...

R. Youre welcome Devika

And she follows ravi to his bike . Ravi got wet , and his white shurt was now transparent , and his well toned body was in front of devika , she looked at him , and then... Turned her sight somewhere else . He sits on the bike , then she, she grabbs his shirt on his waist... Ravi notices this

R.. dhang se pakado devika , warna gir jao gi

Koi nahi.. tere siva mera yahaan

Manzilein.. hain meri to sab yahaan

Mita de sabhi aaja faasle

Main chahoon mujhe mujhse baant le

Zara sa mujhme tu jhaank le

Main hoon kya?

Devika then leaves his shirt and grabs his waist , tightly , and smiles looking down , she was blushing already ,

Ravi smiled and started driving .

Woo.. aeee.. aeee.. aaa.. sathiyaa..

Ae ae... aa...

They reached at a little tea stall which had the roof a bit extended so that the customers dont get wet . And a little light .

Ravi got down from his bike .

R. Aa gaye

D. Yeh kahan aa gaye hain hum

R. Aj main tumhe baarish mein, ek garma garam chai pilata hoon ( he said smiling (ravis killer smile ) ) ao

Devika got down from his bike . Ravi grabbed her hand and They both ran towards the tea stall and stood under that extended roof .

Ravi . Bhaiya do cutting chai to dena please .

Pahle kabhi, na tune mujhe gham diya

Phir mujhe, kyun tanha kar diya

Guzaare thhe jo lamhe pyaar ke

Hamesha tujhe apna maan ke

To phir tune badli kyun adaa

Yeh kyun kiya?

Bhaiya gave them their tea. Devika took a sip of her tea , ravi was completely lost on her , he took the chai glass towards his mouth but didnt take a sip . As he was mesmerized with her wet beauty ,at those beautiful brown eyes , at her wet hair , she looked at him , with big eyes ... Her eyes were shining ... Due to the joy ... She was really happy ...

Ravi finished his tea sltealing glimses oof devika . Devika was also looking at him . She finished her tea .

Wo o wo o.. Wo o wo o..


The rain became softer and they started walking towards where the bike was parked ( sorounded by tall trees )


Kabhi jo badal barse

Main dekhun tujhe aankhein bharke

Tu lage mujhe pehli barish ki duaa

They reached there ,

D. Thank you so much ravi , for gifting me such a beautiful evening

Ravi smiled at her in response .

R. Waise... Tumhe yaad hai ...ki aj kya hai ?

Devika looked at him , confused then...she remembered .. .

D. Oh ... Ravi ... Im... Really sorry ... Office mein kaam . ...woh...mein...i ...am ...realky very sorry...

Ravi shaked his head and placed his finger on her Soft wet pink lips

R. Happy anniversary devika

D. Happy annivrsary ravi

And she hugged him tight , ravi smiled and hugged her back , it was rainiing and it was cold , but they felt the warmth of each others body in the soft rain.

Tere pahloo mein rah loon

Main khudko pagal kah loon

Tu gham de ya khushiyaan, sathiya


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Posted: 10 years ago
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GREAT WRITTING DEAR👍🏼
I LOVED YOUR IMAGINATION. SWEET

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