Ravika ff: 50 Shades of Ravi Garewal

Part 1

"There's still time for the rituals to begin pls dont do this marriage Saket is not a good guy for you" said Sakshi to her cousin who was marrying a casanova guy just to keep her family happy.
"Now nothing can be done Sakshi I have to do it even if it doesnt give me happiness atleast my family will be happy. I can sacrifice anything for them" replied Devika who didnt knew where this marriage would lend her. But her eyes were searching for her best friend Ravi who wasnt found anywhere
On the other side her would be husband was very happy and why wouldnt he be afterall his evil plan was successful he had destroyed the last evidence Ravi had of proving him wrong by killing his pregnant girlfriend
All the rituals were going on and the priest announced that the time for taking the seven wedding vows had finally arrived. The ritual started they finished six vows and suddenly someone screamed "Stop this nonsense". All were shocked yes it was Ravi. But soon another noice rocked the hall it was Devika's granny tight slap to Ravi
"What do u think of yourself I had warned you not to come here but you always do what u want to do even if no1 respects you here or want you here"
Yelled her granny
But her slap didnt have any effect on Ravi coz he had a determination to save his love from that demon. Suddenly the lights go off everyone wonders what is happening and suddenly Sakshi plays a video which left everyone in shock and Devika desvastated.


This is my first ever ff. Read it guys.Comments and suggestions welcome.

Wow lovely story and much more interesting then what is happening in the show. ..thanks for sharing and I hope to read more soon...

Originally posted by: raaz19

Wow lovely story and much more interesting then what is happening in the show. ..thanks for sharing and I hope to read more soon...

Tysm for liking it will post the next part soon 😊 😊 😊

superb ff.waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: shreepatil.

superb ff.waiting for next part.

Thanks a lot

Part 2:
The video had Ananya conffessing that whatever she told on that day was a lie and she wasnt Saket's cousin and was his girl friend who was pregnant with his child and that Saket tried to kill her nd her yet to be born child whatever Ravi was saying was true and Saket is a nerd
She requested Devika's granny not to marry Devika to him and Devika will only suffer after this wedding .Saying this Ananya took her last breath in Ravi's arms
Saket: "What is all this it isnt true why will I kill my cousin it is plan made by Ravi and he also involved her into it"
There was a huge commotion in the hall nd everyone was looking at Saket. Another sound echoed in the hall and this time to everyone's surprise it was from granny but the person she slapped wasnt Ravi it was Saket
Granny: Everyone told me that you are a bad guy but I didnt listen to anyone and agreed for this marriage and I regret for my decision and now come what may I wont let this happen. So before I tell my kids to throw you out from here you better get lost"
Suddenly Sakshi requested Ravi to go and propose Devika. With an evil smirk Ravi said "Are you mad or what who will marry a girl who's marriage broke in her own wedding hall and anyways I was neither interested in marrying Devika or be-friending Devika. I used her as a pawn for my revenge and as it is Ravi Garewal has never used second hand things and will never ever use in future".

Mm. ...interesting twist...my I ask why ravi is negative?

So basically first shade of ravi was as a helping person and second one is of a negative person who wants revenge... interesting. Wondering whats the next shade of ravi 😊

Originally posted by: raaz19

Mm. ...interesting twist...my I ask why ravi is negative?

I wanted to write something which is not happening in the show. His character waz shown as a strong and an independent guy but day by day he was shown so weak that he evn had to beg for his love by touching someone's feet. So I wanted to show him more strong in my ff. You ned to wait coz a lot more is coming up