Manan FF: marriage! Part3-pg3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I will post the first part in some hours... I have been writing on wattpad and. Now thought of posting it here too! Pls give good response! Please!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The story starts after the talent hunt time! 4 yrs after that!



Manik Malhotra: character same as the show... In love with Nandini.. Gonna get married in a few days now and she will be his forever... Owner of ManBir industries...



Nandini Murthy/Malhotra: character same as show... Loves Manik to infinity... Soon to be Mrs Manik Malhotra... Is a gynaecologist



Cabir Dhawan: same character as the show... The prankster with the biggest aim in life to tease the hell out of every couple.. Cannot be defeated by anyone... Co-owner of ManBir industries... Lives with Navya(not married to her)Father of Navyas daughter PriTi



Navya Naveli:same as in show... Black and white Madhubala... Has a daughter named PriTi whom she is very proud of... Works as an interior designer and also does some playback singing for movies...



PriTi Naveli: Navyas daughter... Nature is just the same as Navya... Total drama queen... Going to turn four now... Sees her dad in Cabir and hence calls him dad... Loves two people the most in her life-Manik and Nandini... Always arguing with just one person - Mukti



Mukti Vardhan: same as in show... Evil twin of Cabir... Loves Nandini a lot... Can't bear any harm on her family. In live in relation with abhi... Lead singer of a girl band



Abhimanyu Thakkar: cousin of Nandini... Loves Mukti a lot... Still has cancer but under treatment... Makes everyone happy all the time... Can't bear a tear in anyone's eye...works as a web designer in a huge multinational company



More characters might come in as the story proceeds
(I haven't included Dhruv and aliya in the story right now if any Drulya fan then I am sorry...they are both busy in their own lives and have left fab 5 way behind)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Our MaNan are sleeping peacefully, both having a serene smile on their faces, forgetting the world and enveloped in each other's arms these two love birds are not in a mood to get woken up but but how can they have a peaceful life when there is the great Cabira in the same house...



The sun rays begin to peak in through the curtains and slowly Manik opens his eyes to see his life in his arms with the most beautiful adorning her lips... After gazing her for like a decade he decided to wake her up
Manik(M): Nandu, Jaan good morning...
Nandini(N): umm.. Let me sleep na Manik last night also you didn't let me
M: oh come on I just wanted to discuss about our wedding... Thank god I did that otherwise I would never even know your wishes for it...
N(wakes up with a jerk): will you really fulfill all my wishes???!!?!! I mean even the last one...
M: of course baby I can do anything for you
N: I love you
M: I know...
N(getting angry): Manik!!!!!
M: ok fine love you too baby
N: now mani let me go and get ready
M: first my morning dose
N; Manik no we are already very late look at the time.. What if Priti wakes up
M: pls na Nandu(making a cute pout)
He pulls her towards him. With a jerk and lifts her chin with his fingers.. He inches closer to her lips and gives a sweet peck on her nose. Nandu who had till now closed her eyes opens them and looks at him in confusion.. But as soon as she opens them Manik slams his lips with hers for a romantic morning kiss while kissing he lies on the bed with Nandu above him and pulls the duvet over them totally unaware of the surroundings ... At the same time Cabira who has been calling them and knocking the door since 10 mins now just enters the room without permission to see the lovers inside the duvet getting all romantic... He secretly takes a pic of them and then moves out... He bangs the door from outside and now Manan has heard them they get back to normal and Cabir enters in...
Cabir(C): what the hell were you guyz so busy in that you could neither your phone nor my bangs since the last 15 mins huh?? Nandini don't tell me you were so loud that both of you couldn't hear anything else at all... Manik yaar be soft on her na!!
Our Nandini starts blushing blood red and Manik as usual glares at him and
M; Cabir, shut up!!
C: oye monster you shut up and be ready with an excuse as your princess Priti is awake and you broke your promise of making breakfast for her..
M: oh shit Cabir Pehle nahi utha sakta tha Kya????
C; what the... Now it's my fault huh?? Bhalai ka zamana hi nahi raha ja raha hu main ready ho aur neeche aa
(Opens the door to go out but quickly comes back in and..)
C: aur please have a shower fast and alone( stressing the word alone) otherwise Priti would go to school and come back too till you would have your shower...
M: Cabir, get out yaar!!
( Cabir runs away)
M: so Nandu let me go and freshen up them I will make breakfast for my two Jaans okay??
N: hmm love you
M: love you too

Manik goes for a bath gets ready and goes to the kitchen for making breakfast(Yes... The Manik Malhotra has learnt cooking only for his princess Priti and let me tell you he cooks great stuff)




As he comes down, he sees his princess sitting on the dining table with a super angry pout and a fluffed up mouth he smiles at her cuteness and goes towards her...




M: hi my princess good morning
Priti(P): hmmm
M: princess will not talk to me ha?
P: hmmm
M: ok toh Phir aaj joh Maine special breakfast cook kiya hai for her I will give that to Cabir only...
P: what breakfast mamu( Priti calls her mamu as Navya n Manik are like siblings)
M: I have made only chocolate waffles with strawberries and cheese parathas for my princess but if you are angry then it's ok I should get punishment.. You don't eat it let Cabir n Mukti have it only


P: (shouts) no mamu no no I will only have it pls pls
M: ok my princess it's all for you only, enjoy!
P: I love you mamu!! Thank you

By this time Nandini comes down after getting ready for hospital and admires the cute bonding between her two stars



Manik sees her standing at the stairs and goes towards her
M: looking beautiful my star!
She blushed and said a thank you
N: so Manik Malhotra where is my breakfast??
M: (presenting a plate in front of her)special red hot pasta for my Jaan



N: awww mani I love you it's delicious!!
Good morning my Priti baby!! Where is Mukti abhi Cabir and Navya ???
P: good morning masi! Abhi chachu has gone for walk, dad and mom are in room sleeping
N: and what about Mukti
P: Mukti chachi as usual she woke me up early and then we had fight so I don't know
Mukti(Mu): hi Nandu good morning and good morning Manik hope your night and morning was good as this was your last night with Nandini now separate rooms for a week
N: good morning Mukti
M: thank you for reminding this Mukti but what is the need of all this I mean kaun karta hai yeh Sab these days ??
Mu: oh ho Manju just a week yaar
N: leave that n tell me why did you guys fight today
P: chachi put water on me to wake me up!! How can she do that
N: Mukti
Mu: oh hello I just sprinkled a few drops of water I her and what did she do huh? She went in the bathroom and after 5 mins she started shouting for me I got worried and rushed in and the next moment I was in the bathtub with all water with soap shampoo and toothpaste over me and this mini pataka started laughing on me...(angrily glaring at Priti)
Manik and Nandini on hearing this couldn't control their laughter at all and burst out laughing increasing the anger of the red bull Mukti
As soon as they both stopped both received a msg on their mobiles which when they opened they both were shocked and their eyes popped out of the sockets as the msg was sent in the group of friends


(How do I add pictures here?? I have no idea! Pls help)


This was posted by the great Cabir with a caption
(It was a picture of Manan under the blanket, kissing each other)
Good morning everyone
This is what we call Maniks GOOD morning

Nandus cheeks turned beet red by blushing and Manik Malhotra was speechless even he started blushing after seeing muktis expressions he said " Mukti pls no teasing " she smirked and said "oh ho lover boy ok no teasing but kuch der toh control Kar leta Khud ko aur shaadi ke baad lock the door properly warna Kya pata aur Kya Kya pictures mil Kaye " he turned redder and nandu rushed out of the house saying she had to go to the hospital leaving Manik alone to handle the evil twins...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's amazing..Good start dear..Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful story, are you on wattpad?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's awesome and amazing. I love the cute nok jhok of MaNan... Cabira teased the sh*t out of them. Now he took pic of MaNan... Woh v uss haal mai...haww...loved it dear. Good that u decided to cont in IF too.
Welcome.🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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For uploading pics:
1.Search imgur.com on it browser.
2. Then on the top of right side u will see ur upload button. Click there.
3. Then u will upload ur pic.
4. After uploading u will see a bar(in the left side) where link will be written. Click there and u will get some code.
5. Click BBCode. After that copy the link and paste where u wanted.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anyta

beautiful story, are you on wattpad?




Thank you and Yes... my ID is manan_lover0312
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: manancraze

For uploading pics:

1.Search imgur.com on it browser.
2. Then on the top of right side u will see ur upload button. Click there.
3. Then u will upload ur pic.
4. After uploading u will see a bar(in the left side) where link will be written. Click there and u will get some code.
5. Click BBCode. After that copy the link and paste where u wanted.



Ok thanks I will try doing that for next update!
And I am glad you liked it! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Cabir and Navya came together and started coming down the stairs, Cabir with an evil smirk on his face and Navya with a teasing smile... On seeing himself surrounded by the evils Mukti, Cabir and Navya Manik thought of just running away... So
M: come Priti let's leave for school na
P: but mamu my school is at 1 and there is still 3 hours to it
M: (stammering)nnn nno no Priti we should always be early to school
C: abey oye aaj tak Khud ek lecture attend nahi kiya aur use seekh de raha hai to be 3 hrs early, Khud bachne ke liye ye Sab!!! Usse acha aisi harkatein Kar hi mat...
M: Cabir pls
C: Kya pls.. Yaar just one week Baaki hai shaadi ko... Shaadi ke Pehle toh control fir Teri suhagraat aur honeymoon par hum nahi aanewale tab besharam jo chahe karlena
M: Cabir shut up yaar, Priti is also here aur tu aisi baatein kar raha hai??!
N: oh hello Sab Karo tum aur bachne ke liye Meri beti ka Sahara loge ha?
P: mumma Manik mamu ne Kya kiya
C: beta aap unse pucho unhone Nandu se Kya Kya karvaya... She was so tired today
P: (cutely)mamu what did you do with masi? Why was she tired? She did not have good sleep??
Mu: arey Priti baby you know your mamu have so much work to Nandu that she could not sleep only!

Here, Manik Malhotra had nothing to say except standing there and blushing and shooting angry glares to everyone to hide that blush
M: shut up yaar guyz we did nothing like that what you all are thinking ok so just give a break to your imagination
And now let's get ready for our works, chalo

Soon everyone left and got ready and left for their respective works that is ManBir for their business and Mukti left to practice with her girl band and abhi too drops Mukti n leaves for his work...

In Nandinis cabin in the hospital,



She was blushing like hell remembering the morning incident and was caressing their pic on her phone with a sweet smile on her face... After like a century of staring she received a msg from her monster
M: stop staring at the photo Nandu we can do that live whenever you want to and you know I would love to do that...
Love,
Yours and only yours monster Manik

She smiled hugely at how well he knew her and thought of giving a bold reply so she smirked and then typed
N: oh I would love to experience that daily too whenever you wish...
Love
Your Nandu

Manik saw this msg and smirked to himself

Someone knocked on nandus cabin and she permitted him to enter... The guy was aman her assistant
Ar: good morning ma'am
It's time for your rounds in the children's ward so can we go
N: ya I will be there in a minute

As Aman left Nandu took out some stuff from her drawers stuffed it her coats pocket and left
She entered the ward to see half of them still sleeping cutely and some of them cribbing for not having medicines and some were just waiting for their Nandu di to come
She first woke up all the sleeping children as it was time for their breakfast, all woke up immediately with a huge smile on their faces on seeing Nandu the first person in the morning
She went to others and have them their medicines n all children took it without cribbing just cause it was Nandu... Next she moved to her favourite child.. Her name was Neha, she has been in the hospital since the last 3 months... Her parents had left her coz she can't walk.. She is very attached to Nandu and shows all her tantrums to only Nandu and she treats Neha like her daughter...
N: good morning Neha, Subha Subha why so much gussa??
Neha(Ne): Nandu di you promised to give me chocolates today if I had my breakfast but you were not there only you broke your promise so I am very very gussa on you...
N: sorry Neha but see now am here n I have got 2 chocolates for you, only for you no one else, am sorry, pls forgive your di na
Ne: ok but I have one condition!
N: what now??
Ne: I want you to bring my rockstar tomorrow with you
N: ok done
Now medicines time
Ne: di no!!!!
N: Neha you have to have your medicines to get alright na baby pls have them

Neha has all the medicines given to her and Nandu leaves after tucking her in the bed properly

She comes back to her cabin and is going through files of other patients. Actually she is a gynaecologist but once during her internship she had visited the children's ward and since that day all children want only her as their incharge so she handles both the duties... And needless to say she is the most efficient doctor making her family proud of her achievements...

At ManBir industries,
Manik and Cabir are sitting for a conference.. Both knew that this deal could add to the stars of their company and had tried their best to win it...
After long three hours meeting... Manik had his usual winning smirk plaster on his face which was the indication that he got the deal... As everyone left he hugged Cabir and then they both say together discussing new projects,etc

At muktis place,
Mukti is a part of a girl band... She plays the guitar and sings as well... After fab 5 broke ManBir lost their interest in performances, concerts, bands, etc but Mukti didn't lose her music, she was very passionate about it and after humongous lot of self arguments she decided to join a girl band, they are all very famous all over the world and have concerts every two weeks and have also launched many albums... All of them are too pretty close to her but still not as close as fab 5

At abhis office,
Abhi is working as a web designer for a huge multinational company... He had many colleagues at work and has made some really thick friends too... He is the favourite of his boss due to his sincerity and punctuality and responsible attitude... But there is just one problem that his boss is a lady who is really attracted to him and Mukti knows this n is hell jealous of it.. Every time she meets his boss, they have a war of taunts and cussing in their brains but he has to deal with them both and he can do it efficiently by showing Mukti his love and impressing the boss by his work only...

As for Navya,
She works for the top interior designing company in India and has got many famous people lined up for her talent... She is the most famous in that company and has also featured in many magazines... She just works part time as she has to look after Priti too and she loves her job as a mother the most...

So, this is their everyday life and now starts the wedding preparations
Precap: Manan engagement preparations begins...

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