MANAN OS - NAFRAT KA PYAAR

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Posted: 8 years ago
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MANAN OS - NAFRAT KA PYAAR
Guys are u ready for diwali dhamaka...agar ready na ho to chalo phata phat READy ho gayo Diwali dhamaka ke liye...acha mujhe batana mat bhulna ki yeh plot kaisa laga...actually mujhe ne aye plot sochne mein mujhe bahut time laga...
PROLOGUE..
A girl is standing in the kitchen...she is making haldi dhudh...her eyes have became red...she looks very distracted...After that she saw the boling milk and in her verge of anger she dropped her hands in the boiling milk...but see...she doesnt felt the pain of her hands burning...it seems that she is going through more pain at this time...tears rolled down her eyes...when suddenly her eyes fall on a small bottle kept at the cupboard...she brought that bottle...oh my god...it was none other than a poison bottle...she poured the milk...mixed haldi in it...she opened the poison bottle and poured it completely...she kept the glass in the plate...and walks to the room...
In the room...
A man is getting dressed ...with a black leather jacket and a blue fancy jeans...he is looking like a rock star...in his hand a bracelet in which it is written MANIK...
Now the girl enters the room with the glass of milk...
Girl: yeh lo...pi lo...
The man took the glass in his hand...he took the glass towards hi mouth...a smile spread on the face of the girl...
Suddenly he stopped...
Manik: tumhe kya ladta hai nandini...tum mujhe zeher dogi aur mein khusi khusi pi lunga... Mein aisa karunga lekin jab tak tum khud mujhe marne ke liye nahi kehe deti...
Manik handed over the glass again to nandini without drinking it...
Manik walks from there...
Nandini: tumhari nafrat par bhi luta di zindagi humne
Agar tumse mohabaat karte toh socho hum kya karte...
Manik gives a painfull look to nandini that shows all his shades of love but it remained unnoticed by nandini...
Manik walks out of the house for his concert...
In the verge of anger nandini throws the glass on the floor...the glass breaks into pieces...with tears rolling down from her eyes nandini walked out on the same pieces of glass which continuously hurt her feet leading to a blood lose...but nandini seem to give very less importance to the pain...
Nandini's blood remain splited all over the house...
Why is nandini doing so???
Where has this hatred born in nandini for manik????
What is the past...the present and the future...???

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Posted: 8 years ago
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OK THIS IS AWESOME...Nandini manik ko marna chati hain?Manik ne kuch bohot galat kiya kya?Jo bhi ho,i loved it...Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: KYYtoshRCB

This crazily interesting!!




😡 it was my turn to reply 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Now this is something really interesting
Curious to know the reason behind nandini
Behavior, I really needed a story to read
Thanks for this 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ha ek baat to bhul hi gayi manan shaadi shuda hain.Main abtak soch rahi hun ke manik itna kya bura kiya.Thank you for this diwali dhamaka..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice beginning
i like painful stories but want happy ending
if you r not planning to end it happily,inform me earlier
but i like its beginning very very much 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKHIAWAL

Ha ek baat to bhul hi gayi manan shaadi shuda hain.Main abtak soch rahi hun ke manik itna kya bura kiya.Thank you for this diwali dhamaka..


Manik has done something ...but it was having a reason which nandini didn't know...it is a very beautiful story...agar bata diya toh sari surprise bekar...just wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: PILU123

nice beginning
i like painful stories but want happy ending
if you r not planning to end it happily,inform me earlier
but i like its beginning very very much 😛

No it is having a happy and impressive ending...u will like it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: MadhusmitaMm

No it is having a happy and impressive ending...u will like it


if it so i will be the happiest😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Pls update soon
Seems rally interesting

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