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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Amazing
I m sooo excited yr

U really got amazing talent in thinking n writing dear

Plzzz do pm me next part pretty plzzz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 3 PART B
me: hello everyone...arre mujhe pehchana ki bhul gaye...mujhe pata hai ki mein apko yaad toh hungi...accha jayda batein na karke sidha topic pe atte hai...
Ek second...topic se yaad yaha...wahi wahi ...uss janvi ke bachhi ki bajah se mein manik se nahi mil payi thi uss din...aja hatth ayi hai wo janvi...sochiye jab yeh sab janvi ko pata chalega toh kya pahad girega manik pe...unka obedient pyaara sa nanha munha sa beta kya gul khila raha hai jab unhhe pata chalega toh kya hoga...pata chalega bhi ya nahi...chalo jyada der na karte hue...dekhte hai kya bomb phodenge hamare manan aja...
Chapter starts...
Manik and nandini are slowly moving towards maira's room...
Slowly ...slowly...dhire dhire...and finally they got off to their destination...maira's room...both manik and nandini hanged on the door one after other...they are searching for something...
Manik: nandini mil gaya...
Nandini: mil gaya lekin kya ...
Manik(betting nandini's head): duffer...hum jiske liye yahan aye the...wahan dekhi bed pe...
(Me: cholo hum bhi dekhte hai yeh namune yaha kuin aye hai...whattt...bed pe toh phone hai...yani yeh log maira ka phone curane aye hai...haai...chor kahinke)
Manik: nandini...lag jao mission pe...
Nandini nodes yes ...she slowly puts her feet inside and with pin drop silence she started moving towards the bed...nandini was about to pick up phone when maira comes out of washroom...
Maira: nandini...
Nandini got conscious of Maira's presence..nandini turned towards maira...she just pasted a smile on her gaping nervousness...
Manik: heh bhagwan...ye kahan se chali ayi...nandini ko bachana bhagwan...
Maira: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho nandini...
Nandini: woh mein...woh...ammm...woh
And suddenly manik jumps up for nandini's help...
Maira turns to see who is there...
Maira: manik tum yaha kya kar rahe ho...
Manik: woh kya hei na mein tumhe sry bolne aya tha...
Manik looks at nandini and and...( me: oh ho isaron isaron mein batein...par yeh manik nandini ko keh kya raha hai...oh accha toh hamare manik sahab nandini ko phone lene ke liye kehe rahe hai jab tak woh maira se baat kar ke usse uljhaye rakhte hain...)
Nandini understood...she silently picked up the phone...
Manik was looking at nandini...
Maira: I know manik ki tumhe meri bahut tension hey...
Manik looks at maira: han han bahut tension hai...
Nandini was leaving...
Maira felt shy and was about to turn to nandini...when manik hold maira's hand and made her turn towards him...
Manik: tum...tum.meri taraf dekho...
Manik then again signs nandini to get out immediately...and so our nandini did...
(Me : are bah nikal gaye...tabhi toh yeh dono hai siyappa king and queen)
Plot change...
In manik's room...
Nandini is roaming hear and there ...holding the phone...
(Me: arre duffer phone pakadke khadi kya hai...check toh kar...)
Manik comes to the room...
Nandini: arre kaha the tumm...
Manik: tum toh nikal aye...mujhe chod diya,waha...pata hai kitne muskil see picha chudaya...ab khadi kya ho check karo...
Nandini: han han...
Nandini opens maira's call list...
Manik: time that 8-00 oclock...
Nandini: aath baje toh yeh ek number hai...unknown number. .
Manik: dikhayo. ...
Manik dials the number in his phone and calls on it...
Manik: hello...
On the other side one man is standing holding the phone in his hand in a dark room.
Man: hello...
Manik: mein maira ke bare mein tumse kuch baat karna chahata huin...
Man: par tum ho koun...
Manik: mein manik hui...tum...
Man: vivek...vivek sarna...
Manik: mein tumhe address sms kar raha huin...waha aa jana...
Vivek: done...
Manik cuts the phone...
Nandini: ho gaya kam..
Nandini manik both got happy...on there happy moment...nandini unknowingly hugged manik which was also shared by manik. ...after realisation...nandini broke the hug...
(Me: arre bah suru ho gaya...continue...continue...yahi dekhne ke liye toh hum baethe hain)...
Manik: ab hum karwange maira ki saddi...
Suddenly we hear the sound of dracula...I mean janvi...
Jamvi: manik...manik...
Manik and nandini both came down...
Janvi: manik I just wanted to inform u that...aj ka roka hum kal sangeet ke saath karenge...taneja's hamarw business mein hume bahut help karenge issilye we shouldn't late...
Manik: but mom. ...
Janvi: tum mere decision ke upara bolna kar sikh gaye Manik...
Manik: sorry mom...nt do it again...
Janvi: better...
Nandini looks at manik...and maniks looks at nandini...
Cholo at least manik kuch toh bola...hala ki janvi ne uski bolti band kar de par phir bhi...
Toh cholo guys ab hum directly jump karte hain sangeet ki raat ko...
NEW ENTRY..
MAIRA'S BOYFRIEND...

NANDINI'S ATTIRE

VIVEK SARNA(MAIRA'S BF) ATTIRE

Ballay ballay ni dor punjaban di(are bah punjabi song...pujabiyon ki saadi mein...I just love it..par isme dance kaun karega)
Ho ballay ballay ni dor punjaban di
Ho jutti khal di marona naio chal di dor punjaban di
Ho jutti khal di marona naio chhal di dor punjaban di
Ho balle balle!


Raat ki rangini dekho (arre yeh toh hamari nandu hai...)
Kya rang laai hai
Haathon ki mehendi bhi jaise
Khil-khil aai hai (x2)




Mastiyon ne aankh yun kholi
O.. jhoomti dhadkan yahi boli


Balle balle..
Ho balle balle nache hai ye bawra jiya
Balle balle le jayega sanwra piya
Jale jale naino mein jaise pyar ka diya
Ballay ballay nache hai ye bawre jiya
Ballay ballay le jayega sanwra piya


Jee bhar ke aaj naach le(arre arre ab yeh ladka kaun hai...yeh hamare manan ka kaisa plan hai kuch samjh mein nahi aa raha hai...)
Aa saari raat naach le(aur yeh ladke ko dekh kar maira ke chehere ka rang kuin ud gaya hai...)
Sharmana chhod naach le
Naach le.. oye, oye!

Chahne lage dil jise ussi pe addh jaaye(yeh manik nandini ko approval kuin dikha raha hai...arre yeh chal kya raha hai...mujhe koi batayega)
Door na rahe yaar se aankh jab lad jaaye
Ho jahan bhi ho raasta wahin ko mud jaaye
Koi pyaar ka raag sa badan mein chhid jaaye



Khwaab aankhon mein sajayega piya ke sang re
Gin gin gin gin ke ab din aaye wo piya ke sang

O balle balle..
O balle balle nache hai ye bawra jiya
Balle balle le jayega sanwra piya
Jale jale naino mein jaise pyar ka diya
Ballay ballay naache hai ye bawre jiya
Ballay ballay le jayega sanwra piya


Acha song toh khatam ho gaya aur dance bhi...ab dekhte hai kya hota gai...
Janvi: nandini...who's this guy????
Nandini: mein ap sab ko batane hi wali thi...yeh hai mera boyfriend...vivek sarna...
Maira stands up...
KYA...
arre ab isse kya ho gaya...sab ke sab pagal hai...
Manik: kya hua maira...anything serious...
Maira(trying to smile) nothing
Manik(giggling) ok..ok...sit down...
Maira: tum ek minute ruko mein abhi ati huin...
Manik: kaha ga rahi ho...
Maira: washroom...
Manik: okk...
Maira nikal gayi...aur mujhe yeh vivek kahin nahi dikh raha hai...apko dikh raha hai kya...nahi na...aur hamre dono planning guru bhi kahi dhik nahi rahe hai...mein bol rahi huin ap logo ko kuch toh gadbad hai.han han pata hai yeh acp pradumun ka dialogue hai...par mujhe bada pasand hai...ap mess koi ahar samjh paye kya chal raha hai...plz mujhe batana...waiting...

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Read it in one go
loved it
such lite hearted and beautiful
manik ki to band baj gayi 😆
he thought nandini to be maira
then manan's planning...acha hua maira ka bf hai..manan k loye rasta khul gaya

Now janvi ki bolti band hogi
loved it



Thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
hey i hav read tgis one on wattpad alsoo
But its toll 3a part only
Woll u show all parts here

Do pm me please

Vidhi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Heyyy yr
I ust saw part 3b
It was Amazzzoiinggg yr
Chato atleast manik tried talking to his mum
He he
Fattoo

I m really excited to knw wat happen agee agee

Do pm me

Vidhi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Hi dear,mene abhi tak yeh story nehi parhi,isiliye comment nehi kar payi par ab har ek chapter ke liye comment karungi.Thankyou for the PM.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
lovely

manan ki planning..hilarious..

awesome videos..apt for the update

loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
CHAPTER 3 C
han toh hum kaha the...pehele toh itne late update ke liye sorry...par ab aa gayi huin ...aja iss story ka the end ho gayega...
par hum to dekh rahe the ki maira kahin dikh nahi rahi hai aur hamarevivek ji bhi kahin dikh nahi rahe hai...
main baat toh yeh hai ki hamare dono planning master gayab hai...arre cholo cholo hum bhi dekhte hai...
hume bhi dekhna hai...
...
arre arre yeh kya chal raha hai...maira aur vivek talks kar rahe hai...aur hamari dono planning master chup chup ke unki bataein sun rahe hai...aww..chuperustum...very bad...cholo hum bhi sunte hain kya baatein chal rahe hai...
maira: whats all this vivek...kya chal raha hai yeh...bola tha na yaha mat ana...
vivek:chill yar...mujhe invitation tha...aur mein nahi aa raha tha woh to...
maira:kisne tumhe bulayaa...
vivek:meri girlfriend ne...
maira:wht nonsense...meine nahi bulaya...
vivek:tum nahi...meri nayi gf...tumhari behen...nandini...
kya...nandini ne iss vivek ko bf bana liya...bechara manik...par yeh kya yeh manik aur nandini batisi kuin dikha rahe hai...kya chal raha hai...koi clear karo yaar...
maira: what...nayi gf...tumne mujhe bhula diya...itni jaldi...
vivek: tumne hi bolo ki hamare bich mein kuch nahi raha...so i moved on...
maira: moved on...moved on...kuch ghanto mrin...
vivek: sorry maira...saddi mubarak ho...
vivek moved towards manik and nandini...
cholo cholo...in tino ko follow karte hai...
in nandini's room...
manik: plan successful...
arre bhai details mein bolo...
nandini: pehele humne maira ki phone s evivek ko call karke milne ke liye bulaya...
vivek: aur phir inhone mujhe samjhaya ki maira mujhse pyaar karti hai...aur yahi pyaar usse qubool karni hai...
manik: aur phir bana plan ...jealousy...sabase best way...
oho...ab samjhe ap log...kya kya kiya hai in logo ne...mein toh kehti huin ki inhe marriage beauro kholni chahiye...apko kya lagata hai...
nandini: time ho gaya hai last part execute karna hai...
manik: cholo nichhe...
nicche...ab nichhe ka kya plan hai...mere dimag ki sari nmerves band ho gayi hai...in pagalon ke bicch...
downstairs...maira is sitting silently with taers in her eyes...she isbounded by love of her parents...
vivek: helllo ladies and gentlemen... i have a announcement to make...
maira gets up...her eyes was filled with tears and shock...wht is going to be the announcement...
vivek: mein nandini ko stage par bulana cahata huin...come nandini join me...
manik: jao nandini...hamari plan ka last part...ab toh success yah failure...
nandini nodes and moves to the stage...
maira started crying...
vivek: mein aja ap sabko batane ja raha huin ki mujhe meri perfect life partner milchuki hai jo mujhse saccha wala pyaar karti hai...so aga mein usse kehene ja raha huin...i love you...
manik looks on with crossed fingers...
mair: ek minute...
maira ran to the stage...and starts hitting vivek...
arre usse mar kuin rahi hai...bechara tujhse litna pyaar karti hai...
maira: tumhari himaat kaise huin mujhe bhulake kisis aur se pyaar karne ki...
all the guests look on in ashock...
manik's papa: what the hell is this...
maira: tum shrif mere ho...tum aur kisi ki nahi ho sakte
janvi: whtz all this...mr kapoor kya apne hume yeh sunsne ke liye bulaya tha...
mr kapoor: sry sry...dekhte hain ...
maira yeh kya bol rahi ho...
maira: i love you vivek...
diya...bo diya maira ne...yes plan successful...
janvi: yaha hamara insult hai...mere beta ka kya haoga...listen mr kapooor hum apka business barbad kar denge...
mr kapoor: nahi nahi...smhan ji...abhi bhi ek rasta hai...
jo hum dodno ko beejati se baccha sakta hai...
javi: what...
mr kapoor:meri beti nandini hai na...woh karegi saadi...kuin nandini...
kyaaa...yeh toh manik ki loutry lag gayi...bah bah manik...ek teer se do nishan...very good...
manik glares at nandini...nandini too looks at manik...
mr kapoor: kya hua beta...karogi ya nahi...
nandini: papa mein inse saddi...
a silence atmosphere ...manik ne pehele se hi naa sunnne ke liye tayar hai...
nandini: tayar huin...
yeahhh...howling from the crowd ...a smile spread on maanik's face...nandini too gifted him a smile...
manik: yeh kaise ho gay...nandini se puchta huin...
manik moves to nandini
manik: mujhe lga tum man kar dogii..
nandini: kuin mana karti...i love you...
manik: kya...kuch sunai nahi diya...jor se bolo...
nandini: dumbo...i lovvve you...
manik: same here...wiase jo hume karne wale the woh toh hamare family ne kar diya...
nandini: kya...
manik: hamari saadi...
nandini smiles...
maira:congo..manan...
manik and nandini: manan...
maira: combined form of manik and nandini...
manik: accha hai...congo to u both also...
story ends with manik nandini and maira vivek completing there love story...

khatam ho gayi story...apna apna comments send karo...aur stories ke liyewait karo...bye chalti huin..exam ke liye padhna hai...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
superb
All the best ur exam
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
nice update

happy ending

bt those pov lines in between d update were quite troublesome.

anyways liked this happy ending

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