MANAN TS WHO IS SHE????

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Guys today only this plot hit my mind with a blow...so I thought why shouldn't I make it an os for my readers...have a happy reading...waiting for ur likes and comments...
PROLOGUE
Manik's provo:
We all know marriage is a scared bond between two people...better to say two hearts...but as we know in india marriages are conducted according to our parents...aur meri bhi halat kuch waise hi hai...
Suddenly we hear a voice...
Manik...manik...
Manik's provo: and yeh hai meri maa jo mere saadi karwane ke picche padi hai...
Manik's mom's entry...
Mom: manik I have talked to them...you r going to meet the girl today...
Manik: but mom...
Mom: no arguments...I said means we are going...
Manik's provo: ab toh jana hi padhe ga...lets see...
Waise mom kehe rahithi ki woh hamare business mein bahut help kar sakte hai...(noding his head saying no) no no manik...u cant consider business between marriage...

So guys this was the condition of manik...lets she koun hai woh ladki...aur kissse hagi manik ki saadhi...
Waise twists toh bahut ayenge lekin I am sure u all will enjoy it...

CHARACTERS
MANIK MALHOTRA

NANDINI MURTY

MAIRA TENEJA -

MANIK'S MOTHER- MRS JANVI MALHOTRA


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting...
Thanks for pm.
But CS a bit confusing...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: manancraze

Interesting...

Thanks for pm.
But CS a bit confusing...

I want to inform u that...the girl maira is the one with whom manik's marriage is fixed...and for more updates u need to read the chapter...thanks all for comments
Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Okiee start is nice.
m curious to read more.
let's see kya hoga.

Waiting for it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Plot is nice.. Business mein help.. Anything his here?
Beautiful banner! Love it
Update soon n thnx for the pm :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting plot.
Continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.
Take care.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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👍🏼Awesome start

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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER -1
Hello readers...hey do u remember me...I am ur dear writer...acha suno...achha lage toh comment aur like jarur karna...kya he na ap ke liye mein kya kya nahi kar rahi huin.
So u all must be thinking where are we ...so I am standing out of a danger jone...
Can't understand... So we are standing nefore malhotra mansion...
Man: ae ...u girl...who the hell are you...and why r u standing here...
Me( ur writer): sir... I am a writer...from india forums...
Man: so can I know wht r u doing here...
Me: sir mein apki family ka ek introduction chahata huin...meri story ke liye...
Man: Tej malhotra kisi ko apni family ka sceret nahi batata...
Me: sir plz...mere readers wait kar rahe hai...plz sir...khali members ke baare mein bata dijiye...
Tej: ok...
Member no 1: janvi malhotra: meri wife...full on modern...or waiski baat koi kate woh usse pasand nahi...
Showing janvi...
Janvi: servant...servant...
Servant: ye..yes mam...
Janvi: isse coffee mein sugar thik kuin nahi hai...
Servant:sry mam...
Janki stood up...
Janki: mujhe kisi chig mein koi galti nahi chahiye...aur galti ki toh saza milti hai...
Ab tumne galti ki hai toh saza toh milegi...you are fired...
Servant: sorry mam...
Janki: guards take him away...
Malhotra mansion mein koi bhi galti karega toh kuch aisa hi hoga...
Coming back to tej and author talks...
Me: (I was little bit scared..) sir ap unsse darte hai...
Tej: kya batayo beta...mujhe toh woh kuch bolne hi nahi deti...hamase shut up shut up karke mujhe hamesha ke liye shut kar deti hai...
Me: sir apki condition toh bahit kharap hai...
Tej: chal...age mera beta manik...
Manik's introduction...
Location: in office...in meeting...
Manik: malhotra industries mein apka swagat hai...
So hear our project starts...
Taj: woh toh bahut achha hai...sweet simple...par maa ke age uski ek nahi calti...
We now she janvi calling manik...
Manik: hello...yes mom
Janvi: what the hell you are doing in the office manik...
U have to go to see the girl tomorrow...
Manik: mom mein nikal gaya huon bas pahuch gaya...
Janvi: better...
Tej: aur jo meri bahu banane wali hai...maira taneja...mr taneja ki ek hi ladiki...
Maira's introduction...
Maira is sitting at the room with loud music...her mom came...
Mom: maira kal tumhe ladka dekhne aa raha hai...tum so kuin nahi hati kal jaldi uthh ke jana hai...
Maira:oh god...jaldi uthna hai...no ways...
Mom:uthna toh padega...
Maira: oh god...mom ap abhi jao aur nandini ko bol dena mujhe subha utha de...
Mom:, nandini nandini...
Nandini coming upstairs...with a haldi dhudh...
Nandini: maira...yeh lo tumhara haldi dudh...
Maira: mujhe nahi peeni...
Nandini: peni toh padegi...chalo khatam karo...
Maira drinks all the milk...
Maira: accha nandini kal subhe mujhe utha dena...mujhe jana hai...uss ladke se milne...
Nandini: accha thik hai baba ab so jayo...
Maira sleeps as a cute girl...
Coming back to talks...
Tej: ab jan liya...beta ab yaha se jayo...agar janvi ne dekh liya toh tumhare story suru hone se pehle hi khatam ho jayegi...
Me: accha thik hai uncle...
Author: so guys ap ne dekha hamare sare namuno ko...dekhte hai subha kya hota hai...
In the morning...maira is getting ready for manik and all are ready to go...manik has sent the following attire for maira...and she will recognise maira by dresss...



Malhotra mansion...
Janvi is ready ...
Manik is standing ...
Janvi: manik yeh kya low grade attire u have wore...ewww...ridiculous...
Common I will give u ur attire...
Janvi made manik ready by following attire...



Ab thik hai lets go...
Manik: yes mom...
There in the restaurant...maira is looking at the dress...
Nandini came there...
Nandini: arre dress ko aise kuin dekh rahe ho...
Maira: yeh mujhe fit nahi aa raha hai...
Ek kam karo nandini tum isse pehen lo...
Nandini:par mein kaise...
Maira:aare agar tumhe fit aa jayega toh tum rakh lena...
Ab jayo...mein ja kar mom ko batati huin...
Nandini goes in side the washroom...
And comes out wearing that dresss...at the same time malhotra family reached the place...
Janvi: manik ...maira is in room 12B...go and meet her...jaldi decision karna...
Manik: ok mom...
Manik work out for room 12 B...after searching he finally got the room...
He opened the room to see nandini standing there with the same dress which he had send for maira...
At first when manik saw nandini ...wind started blowing...manik eyes got stuck...his eyelashes couldnot stop manik from looking at the sweet cute face...
Nandini turning around and being conscious that someone was there...
Manik: hi...mein yaha tumse hi milne aya tha...
Nandini is confused...
Nandini: par ap hai koun ...aur mujhsse milna kuin chhate hai...
Manik: ab ap mujhse aise mat baat kijiye jaise ap kuch janti nahi...
Nandini: par mein...
Suddenly manik phone rang...
Manik picked up his phone...
Manik: hello ...yes mom...
Janvi: ab jaldi.bahar aayo...
Manik kept the phone back...
Manik: ab mujhe jana hoga.n..meet u soon...
Nandini: arre par suno...
Manik ran out...
Janvi: manik tumhe maira kaisi lagi...
Manik: mom I like her...she is awesome...
Janvi: mujhe pata hai mera beta mera pasand abhi raject nahi kar sakta...
Manik gives. A smile...
At the room...nandini is standing thinking...
Maira came...
Maira:kya hua nandini...
Nandini: koi ladka aaya tha...pata nahi kya bol raha tha...
Maira: let it be...any ways ab tak woh ladka nahi aya so iam going...

Nandini: pata nahi ussne kya sochha hoga...
Maira screams: nandini come...
Nandini: coming...
Nandini ran away...
Guys I am chaging it into a three shot story...beacuse it will be very long...

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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sorry i dint comment on its prologue.
so i am commenting first for this first chapter
teja malhotra is awesome and writer too😉
i am afraid becoz manik is very obedient to his mother
he misunderstand nandu as maira😆

he said nandu is awesome

superb update

continye soon..

Edited by PILU123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow awesome

what an update

d way u narrated d story, that wad unique and so freshening..really appreciated..

and manik mistakenly thought nandini as maira..wow mistake be bana di lovestory

that black dress was so pretty and manila suitvwas also stylish

loved d update

plz update soon

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