MANAN TS WHO IS SHE???? - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
amazing
poor manik
what will he do now?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 3 (PART A)
Me: yeh kya ho gaya...
Manik ne ye kya kiya...
Ab kaise karega nandini se saddi...
Pata nahi...par manik ka toh pura chop ban gaya ...matlab ap sab hi sochiye manik ke situation mein agar ap hote toh kya karte...mein toh directly bata deti maira kobki mein usse pyaar nahi karte...
Actually manik ne bhi kuch aisa hi kiya...
Chaliye dekhte hain...
Chapter goes on like this...
Manik proves: mein abhi tak yakin nahi kar sakta...mere saath kya ho gaya...
Cabir: yakin kar le...
Manik literally hets shocked ...seeing cabir...
Manik: cabir ...mein yeh nahi kar sakta...
Cabir: kya nahi kar sakta...
Manik: yeh roka...
Cabir:, tera dimag toh thik hai...
Manik: mein luch nahi janta mein ja raha huin maira ke paz...usse mein sab sach sach batadunga...
Manik walks...
Cabir: are manik rukh...sun toh...
After searching for sometime manik doesnt het maira...so he walks to his mom for asking about maira...
Janvi: so mrs kapoor...meine suna he ki apki bahu ne saddi cancel kar di...omg...what a big insult...
Mrs kapoor was looking sad and embarrassed too...
Manik: mom where is maira...
Janvi: she has gone out...may be u will find her outside...
Manik: oh thanks mom...
Manik moves outside ...after few minutes manik again comes inside...he was looking tensed...God knows what had happened outside...
After manik maira also came inside...
And the announcement...
The roka ceremony is going to start...manik and maira are requested to come up the stage...
Nandini prepares the shagun plate for maira and handed it to janvi...
Manik and maira both got sitted in there respective places...
Janvi moved up...
She handed the shagun to maira...maira was also looking distracted...
Now manik and maira both stand for the ring ceremony...
Manik has to put the ring to maira first...
Manik took the ring in his hand...he looked at nandini...she was busy talking with guests...manik was about to make maira wear the ring when we observe that something was wrong with manik...and suddenly manik falls down...the ring slipped from his hand...
Janvi shouted manik...
Tej shouted manik beta...
Nandini comes there...
Crowd gather...
All of then make manik lie down inthe sofa...
Janvi: sry...mrs taneja...aja roka nahi ho sakta...hum sangeet ke din hi roka kar lenge...now my first priority is my son...
Mrs taneja: ok mrs malhotra...
Janvi(turing towards the guests) sry ...aja roka nahi ho skata...ap sab ja sakte hai...
And we see manik openong his eyes and giving acute smile at this decision of his mom...and he again closes his eyes and this was noticed by nandini...
Nandiniproves:, acha bacchu...acting...mere behen ke saath cheating...not good...tumhe toh mein...
Janvi: take manik to his room and let him rest...
Nandini proves: achha hai...abhi room mein ja kar isski khabar leti huin...
Manik is taken to his room...he is made lie down on his bed...
And all the people who were present in the room left the room...after they left mnik woke up from his acting and started jumping like jungli on his bed and shouting ...yes..maine kar diya...yeh...hhheee...and suddenly nandini enters...
Manik laughters are converted into terrors...nandini started shooting dagar at manik through her eyes...
Manik turned himself away from nandini...
Nandini: tumhari himat kaise hui mere behen ke saath aisa karne ki...tumne ek baar bhi usske bare mein nahi socha...
Manik:meri baat toh suno...
Nandini: kya sunnu...kuch sunne ko baki rakha hai tumne...
Main abhi ja kar sab ko tumhari sacchai batati huin...
Manik: arre ruko...
Manik drags nandini and both of them fall on the bed ...one upon another...and they share a eyelock...same situation with manik...again wind started blowing...and this time nandini hairs started touching manik's face...Manik was busy looking at nandini while nandini getsup...
Nandini: achha chalo batao kya batana hai...
Manik: thank god...meine yeh sab issiliye kiya kuinki mujhe pata chal gaya ki tumhari behen ka koi boyfriend hai...woh ussise pyaar karti hai...lekin family ke bajah se mukhesse saadi kar rahi hai...
Nandini: chi chi chi...kitna jhut bologe tum...
Manik: mein jhut nanhi bol raha huin...jab mein maira ko dhundte huai bahar gaya tha tab meine usse apni bf se baat karte hua suna tha...meine ussa ka video recording vi kiya tha taki tum mujhpe trust karo...
Manik played the video...
Maira: meine tumhe kitni bar mana kiya hai mujhe phone mat karo...I had broke up with you...meri saddi hone ja rahi hai...
...afterAfter that the man at that side said something...
Maira: sorry...ab kuch nahi ho sakta...we r surely not made to be together...
She cuts the phone...
Maira in tears: I am sorry...meine shrif tumse hi pyaar kiya hai...lekin meine mere parents ki yakin ko nahi tod sakti...I am sorry...
And video ends...nandini still can't believe in her eyes...she was stunned and shocked too...
Nandini: maira ne isske bare mein mujhe kuin nahi bataya...ab kya kare...
Manik: hume inn dono ko milana hoga...
Nandini(thinking): kiase...
Manik : suno...
Manik whispers something in nandini's ear...
After the plan ...nandini smiles and shows a uproval to manik...
Both of them smile...
Me: hey bhagwan...ab yeh dono ne kya socha hai...
Ap sab ko toh pata hai manik ka plan kaisa hota hai...toh ready ho jayiye...isse gadbad ghotale mein ghusnne ke liye...manik...kuch iasa wais mat kardena...aur hain ap sab ko kaisa laga jarur batana...I am waiting

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
u know whom in this story i liked the most.
writer,s character.she had a very gud sense of humour.😆
manik tho roka se bach gaya
i liked him very much
innocent nandini wo apni behen se bahut pyr karti hain
nice update
continue soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Manik is so so cute yaar!! I remember him dancing on his bed wen he cane to kno k dhruv moved on from nandu... Monster bana Majnu :D
Nandu k pyaar mein cabira ki suna nhi yeh xD
Maura's story is sad. One side u wanna marry d one u love and other side u don't wanna let ur parents down.. This is worse than anything ;( Hope manik ka idea successful ho..
Nandu will fall for Manik within this time kya ? ;)
Your style of writing is vry good dear :D
Keep writing :)
Update soon and thnx for the PM :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
hilarious... ur style of story narration is too hilarious..

I literally imagined manik dancing like no one watching...

wow table turned..maira loves smone else..too good

I hope nandini ko planning planning me manik se pyaar ho jaye

waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
hehehe what a planning yaar awesome update👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
superb
eagerly waiting for next part

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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Wonderful story dear...
Poor Manik..
What will happen next!?
Excited to know...
Thnxxx for the pm..
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read the further parts..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
looks like it is about arranged marriage... looking forward to it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
This is a wonderful update dear...
Manik couldn't understand what was going on!?
But thn when he registered everything,he couldn't just accept it...
Cherry on the cake was the love of maira...
Nandini doesn't know anything...
Let's see what happens next!
Thnxxx for the pm...
Continue soon..

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