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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

he is starting it again...

indirectly hurting...

i will not accept manik forgiveness that easily..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Amazing n emotional update..
Manik's breakdown..
It really hurts to see Manik like dis.. 😭
His past..
His dad also hates him.. 😕
N now Nandini is also leaving him..
He is so broken.. 😔
Dey talk abt their excitement for their baby..
I thought everything will be sorted now..
Bt Nandini she is dragging dis..
She should be wid Manik in his tough phase..
She is also hurt bt he needs her..
Hope she understands dis soon..
Der convo in last part was well written yaar..
Even she cant stand if he is avoiding..
Plz dont make dem suffer so much..
Thanks for d pm..
Continue soon..
Waiting eagerly.. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
poor manik..
sad to hear manik's history...
plz unite manan...
waiting for their happy movement...
no manan romance frm last many episodes...
waiting for that.
update soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
I m back after agesss.!!!! Read 5 updates in a go .!! & trust me i loved the chaps till tht night whn manan fought.!! I was like fight ha it wud b fine after some days but NO.!!! WHAT KIND OF LOVE IS THIS.??!! WHAT HAPPENED TO THOSE PROMISES.?!!! And most imp this is NOT nandini we knew.!!! I knw wht manik did was wrong but things wud go thisss far.??!! DIVORCE.??!! They r matured ppl..nandini is more matured amngst d 2.??! & she speaking this way is like What the.??!!

I really really LOVED the chap till that night epi..!! I really applaud u for writing such beilliantly.!! Itss wowww how u hv written..!! Most imp is u hv so many scenes in 1 update..so many chatacters u carry at a tym..so many dialogs..!! And u r so clear in conveying each thing we never guesedd confused with anything & also ur updates are hilarious & unique.!! Every scenes is unexpected.!!! Hats off to for writing so sooo GOOD.!!

BUT...i m not liking d recent chaps.!! Idk why.!!! Marriage is no game..!!! Manik slapped & even nandni had punched him before..!! & here toh manik has tranfered his property on her name..asked for forgivness nth times.!!! & yet nandini is stuck on only 1 thing.??! He opened up his past which he never did to anyone.!! & still nandini.?!! She wud hv asked for sometym BUT DIVORCE is really not d way..its childish.!!! There r ups & downs in life..in anger ppl say terrible words..& here toh nandini knws maniks anger & also no guy ask for forgivness to this level unless he loves her i agree to wht Arya said.!! Abd the only thing i wud say is nandini is not nandini we knew..she is wierd now.!!!
Keep writing.!!! Good job!!
God Bless you

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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Boomchelesa

I m back after agesss.!!!! Read 5 updates in a go .!! & trust me i loved the chaps till tht night whn manan fought.!! I was like fight ha it wud b fine after some days but NO.!!! WHAT KIND OF LOVE IS THIS.??!! WHAT HAPPENED TO THOSE PROMISES.?!!! And most imp this is NOT nandini we knew.!!! I knw wht manik did was wrong but things wud go thisss far.??!! DIVORCE.??!! They r matured ppl..nandini is more matured amngst d 2.??! & she speaking this way is like What the.??!!

I really really LOVED the chap till that night epi..!! I really applaud u for writing such beilliantly.!! Itss wowww how u hv written..!! Most imp is u hv so many scenes in 1 update..so many chatacters u carry at a tym..so many dialogs..!! And u r so clear in conveying each thing we never guesedd confused with anything & also ur updates are hilarious & unique.!! Every scenes is unexpected.!!! Hats off to for writing so sooo GOOD.!!

BUT...i m not liking d recent chaps.!! Idk why.!!! Marriage is no game..!!! Manik slapped & even nandni had punched him before..!! & here toh manik has tranfered his property on her name..asked for forgivness nth times.!!! & yet nandini is stuck on only 1 thing.??! He opened up his past which he never did to anyone.!! & still nandini.?!! She wud hv asked for sometym BUT DIVORCE is really not d way..its childish.!!! There r ups & downs in life..in anger ppl say terrible words..& here toh nandini knws maniks anger & also no guy ask for forgivness to this level unless he loves her i agree to wht Arya said.!! Abd the only thing i wud say is nandini is not nandini we knew..she is wierd now.!!!
Keep writing.!!! Good job!!
God Bless you


Thank you so much for the long reply! I love long comments! And I know what you mean about nandhini but I have to create drama and suspense to keep everyone hooked. Eventually as the story progresses and manik gives up nandhini will realize that this is actually happening and is no joke. But tbh domestic violence is no joke, like I would never forgive! But this is a story and we all know manik's anger lol. I took the story this way to highlight a very important issue but also show that something like this could also be accidental.
Anyways thank you so much for your lovely praises for my writing. I try to keep the entire freinds group involved just like a continuation of the show (with Kabir of course, hate that they killed him in the show). I try to give the story equal drama, comedy and romance (I can't do action lol)

Keep reading and you will get all your answers about nandhini's behavior
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47



Thanks for pm.dear

Awesome very interesting chapter. ..

Looking forward to seeing next. ..

Beautiful song. ..





Thanks.





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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Thanks for the pm
It was an emotional update
But to be honest I totally loved it to the core
It was simply amazing
Already waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
hey i dont understand how the chapters actually are ????
here u hav posted chapter 19 n 20
n in 1st thread u hav posted today again chapter 20


plz expain i didnt get it ????
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Now this is getting insaner by the moment.
God such confused souls. Gotta give it to Manik, he knows she'll come back and he is just gonna wait now.
That scene on the stair was great anf refreshing but this fight between them is too all consuming and something deciding needs to happen soon.
Manik really needs to set his priorities straight. I don't know if telling his story was an agenda but then asking her whether she forgives him is total asshole behaviour. So I'm kind of hating Manik right now

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