#2 Manan- Unacceptable Relation(Chapter 104 on pg no.42)(23-8-2017) - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago
cute one
haha manik n his naughtiness have
been transfered to his babies
can't wait to know
what thy hv been
thinking???
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awsm
eagerly waiting for next part
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Awesome update .
Continue soon .
Take care .😊
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Hi guys...

I present you with another chapter of this Story.


CHAPTER -81

All four of them agreed and went to their respective rooms to finish the task and then come back to meet at the swimming pool.

Manik received a message from Arjun with to meet at the pool in 5 min but not to tell Nandini about it.


Manik agreed and said to Nandini -

Nandini mujhe ek important call karna hai aur yahan pe network nahi milraha hai.

Mai bahar Jake try karta hoon.

Tum ye sab manage karlogi na.

Nandini bought his excuse and allowed Manik to leave.

Nandini - Ok fine. Mai karlungi.

Manik and Arjun met at the swimming pool.

Manik - So... What's the plan?

Arjun - Maine thode se arrangements to kiye hai.

Arjun drew Manik's attention to the arrangements.




Manik - Great.

Arjun -But I need your help ...

Manik - Kaisi help?

Arjun - Actually mai Pia ke liye kuch special karna chah raha tha. And she loves music. But mujhe to music play karni nahi aata. If you don't mind can you...

Manik - Hmm... Not a bad idea.
Isme mind karne wali kya baat hai.
Mai abhi guitar lekar aata hoon.

Arjun - Don't worry about that. Mai already lekar aaya hoon.

Manik - Ok fine.

In the meantime, Nandini and Pia finished the packing and came out of their respective rooms.

Nandini selfthought - Ye Manik kaha chale gaye. Bolkar gaye the ki important call karna hai. To itni der kyu lagrahi hai unhe aane me?

While Nandini was walking towards the swimming pool lost in her thoughts, she bumped into Pia.

Pia - Ouch!!! Nandu tu kya kar rahi hai. Sambhal ke...

Nandini - So sorry Di. Mai to bas Manik ko dhoondh rahi thi.

Pia - Dhoondh rahi thi Matlab. Don't tell me ke Jiju bhi gayab hai. Aur Wahan Arjun bhi pata nahi kaha chala gaya. Mujhe to Lagta hai ki dono milkar Kuch plan kar rahe hai.

Nandini - What plan Di?

Pia- Wo to mujhe nahi maloom. Chal dekhte hai.

Both Pia and Nandini went to the poolside and were surprised to see Arjun standing on the other side of the swimming pool .

Pia - Lo tum yahan ho. Aur mai kabse dhoondh rahi hu tumhe.

Nandini - Jiju Manik kaha hai?

Arjun - Omg. Aate hi tum dono ne sawalo ki baarish start kardi. Have some patience girls. Pehle aaram se waha chairs pe baith jao. Aur batao ki arrangements Kaisi lagi tum dono ko.

Nandini and Pia looked around and were so happy with the arrangements.

Nandini - Wow Jiju... Ye to bahut hi beautiful hai. Haina Di?

Pia - Haan. Very beautiful. Kisne Kia ye sab?

Arjun - Fir se sawal. Chup chap se waha baitho.

Pia and Nandini occupied the seats.

Nandini- Di Arjun Jiju ne ye sab aapke liye Kia hai.
How romantic Di!!!

Pia Looked at Arjun and blushed.
While Nandini and Pia were busy in a conversation , Arjun signalled Manik to start the song.

Manik strummed the guitar and started the song.

Tu paas itne mere jaise tera dil
Dil ko mere chu raha apni ungliyo se
(Arjun pretended to sing the song for Pia and placed his hand on his heart.)

Likhde mere naam tu ab khwaab saare
Raaton ki siyahi se nazar ki parchhiyon pe
(Arjun made signs in the air as if writing something)

Us orey tu is orey main
Aur ishq hi ishq darmiyan
(Arjun showed the distance between him and Pia by gestures)

(Nandini and Pia by now had understood that it was Manik who was singing and not Arjun)

Sun yaara dildar ve
Mar jawan tere pyaar pe
Tere sadke meri jaan meri jaan..(3x)
(Pia was so happy with the efforts put in by Arjun. She ran upto him and hugged him tightly)

(Manik came out from the hiding and walked towards Nandini )

Tu mujhse main bhi to tujhse
Yun judde hum ke kya bataye
Jaise do dil mil jaye
Lag jaaye jaise duaa ye, yaara

(Manik kept his guitar aside and sang the lines looking into Nandini's eyes)

Puche bina dil ki razaa
Yeh ishq toh hone laga
(Manik forwarded his hand towards Nandini for a dance and Nandini took it happily)

Sunn yara dildar ve
Marjawan tere pyaar pe
Tere sadke meri jaan meri jaan..(3x)
(Pia and Arjun too joined Manik and Nandini for a dance)

O baaton mein meri baaton mein
Jab jab tera zikr aaye
Chun chun ke lafz wo laun
Jo baya tujh ko kar paye, yaara
( Arjun and Manik took a round of Pia and Nandini respectively )

Padhle kabhi inn aankon mein
Taarif tu apni zaraa
(Both the girls looked into their respective husband's eyes)

Sunn yaara dildar ve
Mar jawan tere pyar pe
Tere sadke meri jaan meri jaan..(3x)

Sun yaara ve..
(Manik held Nandini's hand and turned her around and both of them danced to the music with their eyes closed and Manik rested his chin over Nandini's shoulder)
(Meanwhile Pia and Arjun too were lost in each other. Arjun bent down and kissed Pia on her lips and Pia too responded equally.)

As Manik and Nandini were in their own world, the open display of affection of Pia and Arjun went unnoticed.



Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any .

And guys, since the couples have come so close to the swimming pool how many of you want me to utilise the opportunity and create some fireworks in the pool.

I want your suggestions on how to make the most of the pool as I m seriously out of ideas.

Awaiting your response...



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Posted: 8 years ago
Aray fireworks toh bantey hi hai,
toh ho jaaye,
please please continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing
Beautiful
Both arjun & Manik r so romantic
Piya & nandini were enjoying
Sooo cute & lovely chapter
Waiting for the next chapter
Plz update soon
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amazing update and dance also super




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Hi guys...

Presenting you with a new chapter of this story.

Note - A bit bold stuff ahead. Viewers discretion is advised.

CHAPTER -82

Manik, Nandini, Pia and Arjun occupied their seats by the pool side.

After talking for a few minutes, the four of them decided to do something fun.

Arjun suggested - Let's play a game "I love strawberries".

Guys vs Girls.

The team which finishes the strawberries first wins the game.

But there's a catch, you cannot use your hand to eat the strawberries.

If we boys win, then the girls will have to do anything which we tell. And if you girls win then we will do whatever you ask for as a punishment.

It will be fun. What say???

Manik - Not a bad idea... I m in.

Pia and Nandini looked at each other and gestured a no to each other through eyes.

Arjun brought two bowls of strawberries and placed them on a table and said - Comeon girls... Kya soch rahi ho. Dar gayi kya???
Let's start the game.

Pia - Nahi to ... Hum kyu darenge? Hum kisise nahi darte. Let's go for it then.

Nandini - Di... aap kya bol rahi ho? Dekho to kitne saare strawberries hai. How are we gonna eat them?

Manik in a teasing manner- I think you are right Nandini. You don't have to eat the strawberries.

I have a better option for you.
Just accept your defeat.

Isse tumhe strawberries khana bhi nahi padega aur time bhi save hojayega.

Pia - No... Hum haar nahi manenge.

Nandu don't worry.

Ye game hum hi jeetenge. Atleast we can try it.

Aise Pehle hi haar kaise maan sakti ho tum?

Nandini - Ok Di... Agar aap kehti ho to mai maanleti hoon.

Manik - Ok then let's start.

Manik and Arjun sat on one side of the table whereas Nandini and Pia sat on the other side of the table infront of their respective partners.

With this all 4 of them began eating the strawberries one by one from their respective bowls.

Arjun and Manik were quick enough to finish all the strawberries in just 5 minutes.

Whereas Nandini and Pia struggled to eat even half the strawberries in that time.

Manik and Arjun high-fived each other celebrating their victory.

Arjun - Yesss... We won...

Nandini to Pia- Di Maine bola tha na ke hum nahi karpayenge.
Ab Dekha hum haargaye na.
Pata nahi wo dono kya karwayenge humse.

Pia- It's Ok Nandu. It's just a game. I really enjoyed it.

Nandini looked at Manik who had a victory smirk on his face.

Nandini selfthought - Oh God. Please save me.

Manik Kuch to shaitani karenge.

Manik- So girls ready for the punishment???

Nandini - Kya karna hoga Hume?

Arjun - Pia and Nandini tumhari punishment ye hai ki you have to kiss your respective partners right here right now.

Pia and Nandini's eyes widened in shock on hearing this.

Pia- What punishment??? Aise kaise demand karsakte ho Arjun tum. Hum aisa kuch nahi karne wale. We are not going to do it.
Chalo Nandu let's go.

Saying this Pia held Nandini's hand and tried to escape from there.

Arjun came infront of them and said - Oh hello... Kaha jarahi ho? Ab tum dono ko double punishment milegi. So get ready for it.

Pia - Double Punishment???

Arjun - Haan double punishment.

Nandini - Ab wo kya hai?

Manik - You have to join me in the pool.

Arjun to Pia -And you have to join me .

Pia - Bas itni si baat. Ok. I don't mind.

Nandini - But Di...

Pia - Don't worry Nandu... Bas pool me hi to jaana hai na. We can do it.

But on one condition.

Arjun - Kya???

Pia - Hum double punishment nahi lenge. Bas swimming pool hi theek hai. Bolo manzoor hai???

Arjun - Ok. Condition accepted. First punishment cancel.

But fir bhi theek se Sonchlo... Then you can't back out.

Pia- Soch lia. We won't back out now. Haina Nandu???

Nandini - Haan Di.

Manik forwarded his hand and said- Ok then let's get in.

Nandini was about to take Manik's hand but he stopped her.

Manik - On second thoughts, mai soch raha tha ki yeh dress appropriate nahi hai swimming pool ke liye.

Don't you have any swimwear?

Arjun - Yes girls... go and get changed fast. Don't waste time.

Arjun to Pia - Jaldi aana. I m waiting.

Saying this he winked at her.

Pia blushed and said - Let's go Nandu.

Nandini and Pia went inside to wear swimsuit.

In the meantime,

Arjun and Manik decided to take a dip in the pool

Both of them took out their shirts and jumped into the pool.

As they went in,
Nandini said - Di mere paas to swimwear hai hi nahi.
So what will i wear?

Pia - Nandu tu bhi na... Bahut hi bhullakad hai.
Tere paas swimwear hai. Nyonika Aunty ne diya to tha. Bhoolgayi kya?

Nandini tried to come up with thousands of excuses. But Pia didn't listen to any of those.

Infact she forced Nandini to wear the swimwear by literally pushing her in her room.

Both the girls got ready and came out of their rooms.

Nandini - Di ye bahut hi revealing hai. Mai sabke saamne kaise jaungi aise?

Pia - Sab kaun hai Nandu? We are all family right. To tum itna stress kyu le rahi ho?

Nandini was still hesitant.

Pia - Ab zyada socho mat. Ok fine . Take this.

Pia handed Nandini a cloth to tie around the waist to cover her exposed legs .

Nandini took it and tied around her waist.

Pia - Perfect... Now let's go.

With this both of them came to the swimming pool.

Manik and Arjun looked at Nandini and Pia respectively and got mesmerised by the beauty of their wives.

Manik ran his hands in his hair and looked at Nandini from top to bottom.

Nandini tried to hide behind Pia to escape Manik's piercing gaze but Pia moved towards Arjun.

Arjun forwarded his hand to Pia and helped her to get into the pool.

Nandini was left alone.

She was fidgeting with her fingers with her head lowered.

Manik looked at Pia and Arjun who were already lost in each other.

Then he gestured Nandini with his eyes to get into the pool as soon as their eyes met.

But Nandini nodded her head in a no.

Manik pleaded with his eyes to which Nandini melted and came forward to step into the pool by taking Manik's hand.

Manik - You are looking so hot in this swimwear.

Nandini blushed and moved away from Manik.

The water was too cold and Nandini shivered but Manik held her by her waist and bent down to kiss her.

But Nandini moved back. Manik again tried to kiss her but Nandini moved a step back.


Manik - What???

Nandini gestured towards Pia and Arjun.

Manik -
Nandini come on yaar stop making excuses.

Just let them be. They are having a good time.

Stop staring at them.

Instead focus on me.

Saying this Manik sealed their lips and kissed her passionately giving Nandini enough time to breath in between the kiss.

Nandini ran her fingers in Manik's hair and pulled him more towards her.


Manik in the heat of passion, lifted Nandini's leg and started rubbing (or rather massaging) her thigh slowly and then increased the speed.

Nandini's breath hitched for a second with this sudden act of Manik.

She let out a moan in his mouth.

This attracted Pia and Arjun's attention.

Arjun and Pia looked at Manik and Nandini who were kissing each other without caring about their surroundings.

Pia closed Arjun's eyes with one hand and said- Dekh kya rahe ho? Let's go inside before the scene turns out to be more Hot and things get out of control.

Arjun- Ok lets go inside. But it doesn't mean that you are saved. Aaj tumhe koi nahi bacha sakta mujhse.

Pia held Arjun's collar and pulled him towards her.

Pia seductively said- Bachna bhi kaun chahta hai janeman?

With this both of them laughed.

Arjun and Pia came out of the pool and Pia sneezed and coughed to get Manik and Nandini's attention.

Nandini on hearing Pia cough immediately broke the kiss and looked at Pia and Arjun.

Nandini came out of the pool and rushed to Pia and said- Kya hua Di??? Aapki tabiyat to theek hai na.

Pia - Mai theek hoon. Bas thodi si sardi hogayi hai. Bahut thand haina yahan.

Nandini - Yes Di. Let's go inside. Mai apko medicine deti hoon.

Pia - Nahi... I mean Arjun hai na mere sath. Mai thoda rest karungi to theek hojaungi. You don't worry.

Nandini - Di mai kaise worry na karoon.

Arjun - Nandini relax... Mai hoon na Pia ke saath.

Chalo Pia let's go.

Saying this Pia and Arjun went inside leaving Nandini and Manik behind.

Nandini looked at Manik with a worried face.

Manik was still in the pool and he understood that Pia and Arjun were just pretending and Pia was perfectly fine.

Manik came out and said - Nandini... Pia is completely fine. Don't worry. She was just pretending.

Nandini - Pretending??? But why???

Manik didn't want to scare Nandini by saying that maybe Pia and Arjun had seen them kissing.

Manik - Ab why ka jawab to mere paas nahi hai. Bas aise samajhlo ki Pia and Arjun are together so Arjun will take care of her.

Nandini nodded her head in a yes .

Manik - So where were we?

Nandini remembered about the kiss and blushed hard.

Manik looked at the strawberries and smirked as he got some evil plan.

Manik - Waise Nandini tumne strawberries to khayi hi nahi. Competition na sahi but tum aise bhi to kha sakti ho.

Nandini - No Manik Mujhe aur nahi khani strawberries. I m already full.

Manik picked up a strawberry and offered it to Nandini and said- For me. Please...

Nandini - Ok. But just one.

Nandini was about to take the strawberry from Manik's hand but Manik pulled it back.

Nandini gave a questioning look at Manik.

Manik- Aise nahi. Lemme show you how.

Saying this he placed half of the strawberry in his mouth and asked Nandini to eat the other half from his mouth.

Nandini obliged to Manik and took a bite from the strawberry.

Manik taking this opportunity captured Nandini's lips without warning.

The juice from the strawberry started dripping down the chin from their mouths but they didn't care as both were so lost in each other.

While kissing, Nandini's leg slipped and both of them fell in the pool.

This didn't affect the passionate moment of MANAN.

Nandini while kissing left scratches on Manik's shoulder with her nails as the kiss was getting more and more wild.

Manik's hand trembled as he touched his thumb to the thudding pulse in her neck, a beat he had to taste under his tongue while he reminded himself, go slow, don't rush this..."

Nandini was out of breath so Manik left her lips and lifted her up and Nandini held Manik's shoulders for support.


Manik's eyes fell on Nandini's exposed tummy and he left a trail of kisses on her tummy.

Nandini felt ecstatic with each and every touch of Manik.

Nandini closed her eyes and Manik put her down.

Manik removed the strap of Nandini's swimsuit off her shoulder and placed open mouth kisses on her neck and turned her around.

Nandini - Manik... Please Stop...

Manik hugged Nandini from back and whispered huskily in her ear - Nandini... You have taken away my sanity. I don't have control over myself. I just can't wait to claim you once again.

Saying this Manik bit her earlobe which aroused Nandini.

Even she wanted Manik to take away all her sanity.

Manik for a couple of seconds waited for Nandini's reply.

On not getting any response from Nandini, Manik said - Should I take your silence as a yes? Bolo na Nandini...

Nandini in a low voice said- Yes.

That was it for Manik.

He lifted Nandini in his arms and came out of the pool and walked into the house straight into their room.

He closed the door behind and very carefully placed Nandini on the bed and came above her.

Manik placed a number of kisses on Nandini's forehead and eyes.

Then he reached Nandini's lips without breaking the contact of his lips with her skin.

Manik sucked and kissed Nandini till her lips were swollen.

Nandini just surrendered herself moaning his name .

Manik tore Nandini's swimwear and undressed himself and pulled the duvet over themselves.

He entered Nandini and both of them went into a world of pleasure as the room filled with the moans of Nandini and Manik's groans.




Phewww...

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.



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Posted: 8 years ago
manik arjun so naughty awesome update and manik so romantic




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Posted: 8 years ago
May be it was hot. but it was still inappropriate to kiss in front of pia n arjun


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