Manan OS: Unwanted guest [completed]

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Posted: 9 years ago
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7 45 am

Good morning Mom
A girl said coming towards the kitchen...
Good morning baby. Her mother replied...
Where is dad? She asked while picking up a apple...
He is getting ready for office...
Baby, me and your father have decided something...
Hmm,
Something you may not like
Mom don't scare me,
Pehle se daraa Hua tumhen Kia daraega sweetie!! She said sarcastically...
Vishnu: Kia Tu bhi anju, beta idhar aa men batata hu, her father said from dinning table..
She gave a disappointed look to her mother and went to her father...
Good morning dad... She said hugging him
Vishnu: Good morning baby...
She sat down...
Vishnu: Baby we have decided that a boy is coming here to live with us... Manik Malhotra my best friend raj's son..
No ways dad this won't happen she said angrily
Vishnu: But why baby? He is a nice guy, he is returning from America and top of that is new to city and India... I can't let my friend's son suffer...
And what about me dad?
Vishnu: I know my daughter has a big heart...
Please dad Nandini Murthy isn't going to share a home with a stranger... She said
Anju: He isn't a stranger darling you guys used to play together in childhood...
Nandini: That was our childhood mom its been 10 years we haven't talked, he is a stranger...
Vishnu: Nandini baby listen I know you don't like to be around strangers but baby I have promised my friend that I will take care of his son till he is here,
Please baby

Nandini: Ok but only for you dad...
Vishnu: He will be here in evening and you have to be there...
Nandini: Ok dad...

11 pm

Nandini comes home all tired, while entering the home she saw a land cruzer...

Nandini: To agaya malhotra gar

She came inside, without making any noise she was climbing stairs when

Vishnu: Nandini come here
He never calls her by her name but when he does it means he is giving her order...

Without saying anything she went towards a big lounge where they all were seated...

Nandini: Sorry dad for coming late Wo Aliya ha na

Vishnu: Nandini bad manners there is a guest present here say him hi... He said strictly

Nandini annoyingly said: Hi

He got up and shook his hands with her...

Hi Manik Malhotra...

Nandini Murthy she said

Vishnu: Nandini as you are late for dinner now its your little punishment to show manik him his room...

Nandini: Dad she said complaining...

Vishnu got up and said: Good night see you tomorrow...
While saying this he kept his hand on her head...

Nandini: Come
He follows her to his room...
Nandini: This is your room saying this she turned to go
Manik: Hey listen... He held her hand...
Nandini freed her hand and faced him with a angry face...
Nandini: Hey you Malhotra I behaved nicely in front of my parents that doesn't mean I am going to behave nicely every time understand?
Manik: Tumhen gussa bhi ata ha!
Nandini: Kyun tum men Wo feature nhn ha?
Manik: Men koi robot hu Kia k mujh men features honge, obviously gussa ata ha par jab aata ha to sath toofan laata ha...
Nandini: Haww men dar gae Malhotra!
Manik: Manik
Nandini: Malhotra
She left from there saying this...
Manik: Godd this girl...


To be continued
Edited by LoveyDoveyNeha - 8 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww that was cuteee... Stubborn 'murthy'..
Hahaha why is manik like 'godd this girlll' on the first day, first few mins he met her... Yeah after 10 years but it seems to me that these 2 aren't strangers...
Whatever it is I hope you'll help me know it soon by updating soon :P
This one's nice.. Carry on..
TS or OS??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KYYtoshRCB

Aww that was cuteee... Stubborn 'murthy'..

Hahaha why is manik like 'godd this girlll' on the first day, first few mins he met her... Yeah after 10 years but it seems to me that these 2 aren't strangers...
Whatever it is I hope you'll help me know it soon by updating soon :P
This one's nice.. Carry on..
TS or OS??



Its OS, he was like this because he knows Wo kitni ziddi ha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb starting...
when you'll update next part????
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Is it OS ???
But jo v hain cute one...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohh Os h..
Nice starting.
Waiting for It ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice story. want to read more. continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continue soon luved the OS
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasniya09

Superb starting...
when you'll update next part????




When I decided my ending 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manancraze

Is it OS ???

But jo v hain cute one...😳



Title men to OS hi likha ha 😆

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