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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
awesome part..
loved it..
waiting for the next eagerly...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Whenever I get a reply I go to first page
And i check itna acha likha ha Kia 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
That was sweet.
kinda cute.

continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Nice start..
Looking forward to it...
Pls update...
Luved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Hello people 😛 so thank you for liking and replying dears

Part 2 A


1 month passed by, nandini kept avoiding Manik all the time she leaves the home early morning and tries to return late in the night...

Saturday 10 pm
Nandini came to home she saw Manik and Vishnu in lounge watching tv Vishnu is facing her back while Manik is sitting on parallel settee... Manik notice her coming and clears his throat she looks towards him and puts her index finger on lips asking him to keep quiet... She removes her sandals takes them in hand and starts to climb stairs...

Vishnu: Nandini
Nandini slapped her forehead and went towards him... She glared Manik and sat beside Vishnu...
Nandini: Hi dad
Vishnu: Where are you coming from? I am noticing since many weeks you aren't coming home on time...
Nandini: Dad Wo aliya
Vishnu: Lagta ha Aliya ke parents se bat karni paregi...
He said still looking towards tv...
Nandini: Mom look what is dad saying, dad you won't do this to me...
Vishnu: Acha?
Nandini: Acha leave all this tomorrow is a surprise birthday party at Aliya's house for navya and mukhti...
Vishnu: Mukhti and Navya?
Nandini: My another two best friends the twin sisters remember?
Vishnu: Okay...
Nandini: Good night dad
She stood up to go...
Vishnu: Baby, Manik is new to this city take him with you, woh bhi kuch dekh lega...
Nandini: Dad---- this isn't fair... She turned and said
Vishnu: He is a nice company sweetheart, right Manik?
Manik: Obviously uncle... He said smiling...

Next day 10 pm
Manik wall all ready for the party and was waiting for Nandini since 2 hours...

Manik to himself: Godd why do girls take too much time in getting ready, I think she is gonna take 2 hours more. Lets play guitar for sometime...

He started playing guitar, he playing with eyes closed and a cute smile on face...

While anju came and sat beside him after finishing as he opened his eyes he saw anju...

Manik: Aunty!! Ap kab ae?
Anju: Jab tum itni beautiful tune play kar Rae the...
Manik: Thank you for the compliment aunty...
Anju: Are Han men ye batane ae the k Aliya called me, gusse men lag Rae the...
Manik: Men to kabse ready hu aunty par apki beti, why you girls take that much time...
Anju: Hahaha manik tum bilkul nhn badle... Now go and check on nandini...
Manik: Ok...
Manik came to nandini room, Nandini was standing in front of dressing table applying eye liner when he came in...
As he came in he was taken aback for a moment when he saw her bare back... After composing himself he cleared his throat to reveal his presence in room she saw him in mirror and turned back in an instant putting her hairs on back...

Nandini: Can't you knock before coming into a girl's room?? She said glaring him...

Manik came towards her and whispered in her ear: Backless pehne men sharam nhn ati par dikhane men bohat sharam ati ha Han...

Nandini: Listen maintain your distance ok... Saying this she pushed him...

While smirking manik said: Time to itna le Rae ho jese friends ki birthday party Pe nhn mere sath date Pe ja Rae ho...

Nandini: In your dreams Malhotra!!

After a little Tu Tu men men they headed towards Aliya mansion...

Nandini went inside while manik parked the car...

As nandini came inside Aliya came towards her...

Aliya: Nandini where were you? Do you have any idea how much I needed you here!;

Nandini: Sorry Aliya Wo I was damn confused what to wear...

Aliya: Well you look gorgeous, but itni hi problem ho Rae thi to yahan ake ready hojati...

Manik: Agar aisa hota to party aj nhn kal dupahir hoti.. He said sarcastically...

Aliya: Who is this hottie, she said looking him from top to bottom?

As nandini was about to answer manik jumped in between...
Manik: Manik Malhotra Nam to suna hi hoga... Saying this he took her hand and kissed it...

Nandini who was till now making whatever look, now watching him kissing her hand boiled her in anger...

Nandini: Listen you Malhotra how dare you to flirt with my best friend Wo bhe in front of me...

Manik: If you have problem Murthy then turn around hum tumhari back PE hi flirt kar lenge...
He said turning her...

She angrily turned back and said: I swear Aliya I am going to tell this whole flirting session to dhruv

Aliya: No you won't Nandini.
Nandini: Yes I will Aliya...
Aliya: Sorry manik actually dhruv is my husband, never mind..
Manik: It's ok Aliya... He gave her a smile...
After surprising Mukhti and Navya they did the cake cutting and then Aliya introduced Manik to dhruv Abhi Mukhti's fiance and Cabir navya's husband...
Manik looked Nandini she was talking with her friends and smirked to himself...
Suddenly lights went off, Manik came on stage a light hit Manik no one could see him because everyone was facing his back...

Oh girl You're mine
Oh girl You're mine

Tere ishq mein hadh se guzar jaaun
Oh girl You're mine
Oh girl You're mine

Oh tere ishq mein hadd se guzar jaaun
Main jhooth kahoon toh
Kahoon toh kahoon toh mar jaaun
Oh girl You're mine
Oh girl You're mine
Sab tere hawale kar jaaun
Main jhooth kahoon toh
Kahoon toh kahoon toh mar jaaun
Oh girl You're mine
Oh girl You're mine

He turned back and started dancing along with singing...

All the lights came back...

Ek duje se hum door ho
Milne se kabhi majboor ho
Yeh sochon bhi toh
Main kabhi toh kabhi toh darr jaaun
Oh girl You're mine
Oh girl You're mine

Dhruv came along with Abhi and cabir and started dancing...

Tere ishq mein hadd se guzar jaaun
Main jhooth kahoon toh
Kahoon toh kahoon toh mar jaaun
Oh boy you're mine
Oh boy you're mine
Oh girl You're mine
Oh girl you're mine

Mukhti came on stage and joined them...

Baahon mein bharke meri jaanejaan
De doon tujhe main dil ka jahaan
Har lamha tera hi khayaal hai
Tere bina hai raahat kahaan
Banda tujh pe qurbaan hai
Iss baat se tu anjaan hai
Banda tujh pe qurbaan hai
Iss baat se tu anjaan hai
Sach kehta hoon main jhoot kahoon toh
Kahoon toh marr jaaun
Oh girl You're mine
Oh girl you're mine
Oh girl You're mine
Oh girl you're mine

Manik looked at nandini while singing this...


Tere ishq mein hadd se guzar jaaun
Main jhooth kahoon toh
Kahoon toh kahoon toh mar jaaun
Oh boy You're mine
Oh boy you're mine
Oh girl You're mine
Oh girl you're mine

Mukhti abhi cabir dhruv and manik danced together...

La la la hi ya yo
La la la hi ya yo

La la la hi ya yo
La la la hi ya yo

Haan zindagi hai tere hi waaste
Tu meri sasson ke kareeb hai
Tujhse jude hain mere raaste
Tu mere khwaabon ka naseeb hai

Aa mera daaman tham le
Karoon pyaar mein sab ke saamne
Aa mera daaman tham le
Karoon pyaar mein sab ke saamne
Main sach kehti hoon jhooth kahoon toh
Kahoon toh mar jaaun
Oh girl You're mine
Oh girl you're mine
Oh girl You're mine
Oh girl you're mine

Cabir went to navya and twirled her around... Cabir came back on stage and they again started dancing

Tere ishq mein hadd se guzar jaaun
Main jhooth kahoon toh
Kahoon toh kahoon toh mar jaaun
Oh boy you're mine
Oh boy you're mine
Boy...mine
Girl...mine
Boy...mine
Girl...

Manik finished the song winking at Nandini.. Nandini in response opened her eyes wide while he smirked...


Next will be last update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
U r so chaluuu!!!! Koi aide point pe chodta hai kya?? This is sooo awesomeee!!!!!!! Backless pehen ne mein sharm nhi aayi par dikhane bohot sharm aayi hai han.. Damn I love malhotra and murthy a lot!!!
I'm so so excited!!!!!
Next update plz jaldi dena han :D
Nandu ka reaction would be... Plz disclose it soon!!
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
funny update...

manan nok jhok was hilarious...
loved it

cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KYYtoshRCB

U r so chaluuu!!!! Koi aide point pe chodta hai kya?? This is sooo awesomeee!!!!!!! Backless pehen ne mein sharm nhi aayi par dikhane bohot sharm aayi hai han.. Damn I love malhotra and murthy a lot!!!

I'm so so excited!!!!!
Next update plz jaldi dena han :D
Nandu ka reaction would be... Plz disclose it soon!!
Loved it



Blushing blushing 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Wow beautiful update...
Nandu is soo annoyed with Manik...
Manik I guess is falling for her..
Luved jealous Nandu...
Waiting for next...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Hahaha..
shoo cute update.
I seriously love it..
loved manan moments.
Will wait for next.

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