Manan OS: Unwanted guest [completed] - Page 4

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

<font color="#6600FF">wow what a fabulous update 😳
superb story loved all updates
update last part soon
thanks for pm 😊</font>

Thanks

Sorry sorry sorry so sorry guys
Actually I am stuck somewhere
Family problems you know, I didn't
Feel like leaving this story incomplete
This is the most beautiful story I have
Written till the time, wrote this part in an
Urgency so please forgive if its not good..


Last part:



3 days passed by manik tried to manofy nandini but she was adamant he tried every possible way like making smile face on her coffee cup standing outside her college for hours sending her flowers but everything failed.
And one day Aliya came to him and told him that one thing can melt nandini's anger. Manik planned a surprise along with aliya for nandini..

At night

Nandini came home she opened the door and it was all dark there.

Nandini: Mom dad where are you? M-ma-manik kahan ho?

Lights came Manik was sitting on a chair holding a guitar he looked up to nandini and started singing...

Mere bina main, Rehne laga hoon,
Teri hawa mein, Behne laga hu,
Jaane main kaise, Tera hua hu ...!

Mujhe toh lagta hay,
Main shayad tere dil ki,
Dua hoon,

Tujhko jo paya, toh jeena aya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaye tham jaye,
Bas jaaye hum dono ke darmiyaan ...2x

Pehle se zyada, main jee raha hoon
Jabse main tere, dil se juda hu
Raahon pe teri, main toh chala hu
Tu meri manzil hay tere kadmon pe,
Bas rukne laga hoon haan ...!

Tujhko jo paaya, toh jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye tham jaaye,
Bas jaaye hum dono ke darmiyaan...2x

Teri nazar mein naayi si adaa hai
Naya sa nasha bhi ghulaa hay,
Kayi dino se bandha tha baadal jo
Tere hee baalon me khula hay..!

Teri hadon mein meri bassar hai
Ab tujhe bhi, janu kidhar hay
Jaa rahe tu main woh jahan hoon
Jise jiye tu main woh samma hoon
Teri waja se naya naya hoon

Pehle kaha na maine ab yeh,
Tumse kehne laga hun

Tujhko jo paaya, toh jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye tham jaaye,
Bas jaaye hum dono ke darmiyaan...2x

Nandini was having tears in her eyes, as he ended the song he stood up and opened his arms for her she ran to him and hugged him everyone clapped for them, he whispered in her ear I love you. In return she hugged him tightly, after some time they broke the hug still she was having tears
Manik said whipping her tears: Ab to muskra de Tera hero aa gaya ha

What a heart touching story it was!! So so beautiful!!!

awesome os
loved it
i already thought that manan may knew each other
the way he was teasing her
so NM was the thing she was hiding😉
and her parents knew their lovestory
and approved their son in law

nice os

it was lovely story my friend
write more stories
keep it up

Originally posted by: KYYtoshRCB

What a heart touching story it was!! So so beautiful!!!

So NM are childhood besties.. Lovers.. The garden scene was so so so damn beautiful!!

Loved it!!

Loved all the teasing and roothna-manana of MaNan.. Flirting with alya lol.. The party.. I love these man.. Malhotra & Murthy rocked it

Loved it.. Too beautifully written!

Thank you so much 😛

Originally posted by: shoana

awesome os
loved it
i already thought that manan may knew each other
the way he was teasing her
so NM was the thing she was hiding😉
and her parents knew their lovestory
and approved their son in law

nice os

Thanks 😛

Originally posted by: ps_angel

Awesmmmeee

Thank you 😛