MANAN- Guarding The Moon (CHAPTER 4 - Pg no.4)(25.2.2017)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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GLIMPSE -

Two brothers fall in love with the same girl.
One is her boss and another is the brother of her boss.
Who will the girl choose?
Will she make a right choice?
Will she find true love?
Or will she regret her decision the whole life?
Stay tuned to find out...





INDEX:

Prologue - Pg no.1
Chapter-1 - Pg no.2
Chapter-2 - Pg no.3
Chapter-3 - Pg no.3
Chapter-4 - Pg no.4
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE-

A girl decked up in a bridal attire descended the stairs and went to the Mandap where the love of her life, her future husband was waiting for her.
She seemed to be the happiest soul in the whole world.
Finally the day had arrived which for which she had been eagerly waiting for.
She was too excited and nervous at the same time.

Everyone present there was happy seeing the two of them getting married except for one person.

That person has plastered a smile hiding all the pain behind his fake smile. He had to go through the pain of seeing his love, his life getting married to someone else in front of his eyes.

But he had to bear that immense pain as the girl was getting married to his own brother for whom he could even sacrifice his life without thinking even for a second.

Who was the bride and the groom?

Who was the groom's brother?

To know more, stay tuned...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey gal, congrats for the new story..
hmm interesting prologue...So Nandu loves Manik's BRO and Manik is in love with her..

they are getting married,Manik is ..ohhh such an intense one...

will wait for the things to unveil...

thank you for the new story...all the best 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey it seems interesting story dear...
Such an intense one..
Excited to read the further parts...
Plzzz do pm me whenever u update the story dear..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its an interesting concept. want to read more. please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey.. new conceot
Amazing.. loved the idea
Will be definatly waiting for u to conti

:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting prologue
waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey guys...

I present you the first chapter of this story.

CHAPTER-1:

Night time(around 2a.m)

Location- Some room in a huge Mansion.

Manik was sleeping peacefully on his king size bed when the sudden ringing of his mobile broke his sleep.

He picked up the call immediately on seeing the caller name.

The person on the other side- Hello Bhai... I m badly stuck here. Please save me...

Manik- Dhruv... Kaha hai tu????

(The person was none other than Dhruv)

Dhruv- X's club. Bhai please come fast...

Manik- Coming Dhruv. Will be there in 15.

Saying this Manik in a jiffy changed his clothes as he was in his vest and tracks.

He took his mobile and car keys and rushed to his car and drove to his destination .

He drove the car so fast that he reached there in 10 min.

Manik went inside the X's club and directly went to the private area of the club where he saw Dhruv with his friends which included few girls in drunk state.

Manik- Dhruv kya hua ? What's the matter???

Mai batata hoon...

The club manager said this and Manik turned towards the person.

Manager-

Mr. Manik Malhotra, ye jo tumhara bhai hai jante ho isne kya kia?

He is caught having drugs in our club which is illegal.

And i am sorry to say that we have to hand him over to the cops.

Manik looked at Dhruv who made the most innocent face he could and denied the manager's allegation.

Dhruv- Bhai ye jhoot bolraha hai. Aapko lagta hai mai aisa kuch kar sakta hoon. Never Bhai...

Manik- I know Dhruv that you can't do any such thing. Dont worry i will handle it. You guys just leave.

Dhruv- Thanks Bhai you are the best.

Saying this Dhruv hugged Manik and left the club with his friends.

Manik then turned to the manager and said- Mr. Manager ,I am 100% sure that Dhruv cannot do any such thing. So agli baar uspe aise allegations lagane ki sochna bhi mat. I know ke ye saare false allegations kis liye lagaye jarahe hai. Don't worry subah tak apko apke paise miljayenge.

Saying this Manik adjusted the collar of the manager's shirt.

Manager- Mr. Malhotra... Aap galat samaj rahe hai. Ye sab humne paison ke liye nahi kia. Aapka Bhai such me drugs...

Manik didn't let him complete and said in a stern voice- Enough... Bahut hogaya... I won't tolerate it anymore. Aur ye baat yahi par end hojani chahiye . Agar ye baat bahar nikli to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.

The manager had heard about Manik's anger and didn't want to be his next target.

Saying this Manik left saying- Apko apke paise miljayenge.

After Manik left , the manager heaved a sigh of relief and said to himself-

Ek Bhai hai ki galat kaam karta hai. Aur doosra bhai uspar parda dalta hai. Beech me har baar hum log phas jaate hai.

Pata nahi ye jaan boojh kar apne bhai ki galtiyo ki chupata hai ya he blindly trusts his brother.
Jo bhi ho mujhe kya?

Saying this he went away.

Some of the media spotted Manik getting out of the club clicked few pictures and even gathered information from the staff of the nightclub.

The staff had overheard bits and pieces of the Manik-Manager convo.

The media cooked up their own story and published the news that -

Manik Malhotra, the leading youngest business tycoon of the country spotted having drugs at X's club and beats up the manager .

The news spread like wild fire and within no time it was being telecasted in every news channels the next morning.

Manik read the news and thought that the club manager has got the news published so he called his lawyer and asked him to sue the manager.

The manager had no clue about the information being leaked by his staff.

In orderto save himself and the reputation of the club he got the news withdrawn from the newspapers and news channels along with an apology to Manik.

But the damage was already done. Almost the entire city had seen the news.

Dhruv who had seen the news came to Manik's room.

Manik was getting ready to go to office .

Manik- Dhruv... Acha hua tu khud hi aagaya. I need to talk to you.

Dhruv- Bhai . I am really sorry for whatever happened . Meri wajah se apki reputation kharab hogayi.

Manik-

Pagal hai kya ...

Do you think i care?

I give a damn to all such useless stuff.

What matters to me is you and your happiness. That's it and nothing else.

And haan next time se careful rehna.

Don't fall in any kind of traps like this.

I trust you more than anything else and i know that you will never break my trust.

Dhruv- Ji Bhai. I will be careful . And thanks again.

Manik- Good. Ab ye thanks bolna bandh kar aur chalke breakfast karle.

Dhruv- Bhai aap chaliye mai ek call karke aata hoon.

Manik nodded and left.

Dhruv dialled a number and said- Baal baal bach gaya yaar Rocky...Bhai ko bilkul bhi shaq nahi hua ke we were actually taking drugs last night.

Rocky- Lucky hai tu jo tujhe aisa bhai mila hai. Kaash mera bhi koi aisa bhai hota.

Dhruv- Lucky to mai hoon but sun next time se we have to think of something else. Us club me dobara gaye to phas jayenge.

Rocky- Tu tension na le. Maine sab plan kar lia hai next time ke liye. Tu jaldi se college pahuch mai batata hoon.

Dhruv- Ok. Chal bye.

With this Dhruv went and joined Manik for breakfast after which Manik left for his office and Dhruv went to college.

Meanwhile on the otherside of the city-

A girl of around 20 years was having her breakfast when her friend shouted-

Nanduuu... Jaldi aa . Dekh news me kya dikha rahe hai???

The girl was none other than our very own Nandini Murthy...

Nandini stuffed her mouth with the idli she was having and went to her friend who had her eyes glued to the television screen.

Nandini- Kya hai Navvu kyu chilla rahi hai?

Aisa kya dekh liya TV pe?

(Nandini's friend was none other than Navya Kapoor)

Navya- Dekh to... Ranbir Kapoor ki movie ka box office collection.
It has broken all his previous records.

Saying this Navya started dancing like a maniac.

Nandini rolled her eyes on Navya's crazyness for Ranbir Kapoor.

Nandini- Tu aur tera Ranbir Kapoor ka pagalpan meri samajse to bilkul pare hai.

Ab leave all this and get ready we are getting late for work.

Saying this Nandini switched off the Television.

Navya made a sad face and said- Ok. Chal but shaam ko hum ye movie dekhne jayenge na. Last time bhi tumne mana kar dia tha. But is time mana mat karna plz plzzz.

Nandini- Ok baba fine. Ab chal warna wo khadoos fir se daantega.

With this both of them got ready and went to their work.
(Both of them worked in the same office but in different departments.)




Done with the first chapter.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

I have skipped the C.S. as it was not required.

But if you want it please let me know.

And please guys give a chance to this story as well like you did for all my other works.










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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesomeee amazinggg prt
Manik dhruv pr itna blindly trust krta hai...baad mein use pachtana na pade...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Intresting start darling...
Looking Frwd for the next update
U r writing it
Story definatly has to be Intresting
:))

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