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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: neeju_chinnu



Jii nai...I told you... It's something related to my dream diduu... You will know soon...😉



Your dream?? Accha.. Par yha AB ka kya lena dena hai Dolly 😕
And tum status tak daala tha AB get ready something 😡
Tu kya shaadi karnay waali hai?? In front of AB 😲 Allah!!! Finally meray dolly is going to get hitched 🤣 number game ka advantage ab hoga.. 😈 Congo Shongo Dolly... You naughty girl... Isliyay kal wo question pooch rhi thi naa ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snehasn



Your dream?? Accha.. Par yha AB ka kya lena dena hai Dolly 😕
And tum status tak daala tha AB get ready something 😡
Tu kya shaadi karnay waali hai?? In front of AB 😲 Allah!!! Finally meray dolly is going to get hitched 🤣 number game ka advantage ab hoga.. 😈 Congo Shongo Dolly... You naughty girl... Isliyay kal wo question pooch rhi thi naa ⭐️


diduuu... nai chodungae mai aapko...!!!!! 😡😡😡
mainae isiliyae pucha tha kyun ki mujhae vo rituals nai pata tha and i wanted it for my story... huhh... kuch bhi ... matlab kuch bhi assume kar latae ho aap... had hai Miss. Bhardwaj...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: neeju_chinnu



diduuu... nai chodungae mai aapko...!!!!!😡😡😡
mainae isiliyae pucha tha kyun ki mujhae vo rituals nai pata tha and i wanted it for my story... huhh... kuch bhi ... matlab kuch bhi assume kar latae ho aap... had hai Miss. Bhardwaj...



🤣..🤣...😆😆🤣
Par mennu ki pata dolly... Tumnay hi tou sab start kiya AB ko beech mai laakay ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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For a break I just thought to write and OS.. I know you all are pissed because I left it in a cliff hanger.. but still I just couldn't focus on anything except this OS... and I had very little time so I managed to update this cute story ( according to me ) 😉 ...

hope you all like it... dont forget to hit likes and comment...

Manan OS :


A DREAM COME TRUE...

Part A :

I came out of the washroom after my shower and looked at my HIM who was sleeping peacefully. I was standing in front of the mirror drying my wet hair and I looked at HIM through the mirror. He was still sleeping... arghhh... inko office nai jana kya.. kitta sotae hai yeh.. papa ji inko aaj phir sae daantangae...I started my daily rant and I wore the jewellery. I slowly got up to wake him but suddenly

"nanduuu..." I heard mummy ji calling me and I hurriedly went down and in this time I forgot to wake my patidev jii...

"good morning mummy ji.. good morning papa jii..." I said smiling at both of them and they smiled in return... I was really really lucky to have them as my in-law's .. they treated me just like their own daughter.. life cant be more better than this...

"mummy ji aap baitho... mae breakfast laati hun.." I said when I observed mumma was going to bring breakfast from the kitchen...

"bahu humhari rajini kanth.." papa ji said and winked at me and mummy ji laughed at his comment and I ran into the kitchen...

I brought the breakfast and served both of them when

"aao beta tum bhi humharae saath hi kha lo... tumhara pati kumbhkaran hai.. vo abhi nahi uthaega.." papa jii said in a mocking tone... I pouted and was about to defend my husband when suddenly I heard

"nanduuu... Nanduuu..." ahh.. I was my husband calling me.. he always wanted me to be the first one to see when he openes his eyes... mumma ji started giggling and I went all red and walked towards my room as fast as possible or else he will surely start screaming my name.

"aa gayi jii... chillao toh nai..." I said opening the door and he opened his arms just like a baby does.. I smiled and went towards the bed and sat beside him. He immediately pulled me towards him making me lie on him totally wrapping his hands around my waist and said in his morning husky voice

"kittae baar bolu mae ki ... jab tak mai naa uth jau tum iss kamrae sae bahar nai jana.."

I giggled slightly as he was nuzzling my neck and replied ruffling his hair

"kyun ki mummy ji ko meri help chahiae hoti hai na neechae... isiliyae mai jaati hun.. lekin ab aa gayi hun naa mai aapkae paas..."

"you should be punished for this nandu.." he said naughtily and I very well understood what he meant by this ... and without giving me a chance to reply.. he flipped our positions and sealed my lips with his...

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"bhabhi jii.. neechae aa jao kripaya karkae... humhae bhook lagi hai..." I heard my husbands friends calling me from the dining hall. My patidev was getting ready and I was just sitting and admiring him.

"itna pyaar aa raha hai toh its okay,... I won't mind you can give me a kiss.." he said and winked at me ... I know why he said that just to distract me from his friends... and he succeeded... I blushed and that's it... he came to me in two steps made me stand and kissed me hard... after making me totally breathless he said breaking the kiss

"I love you nandu.." and I just nodded without replying and he sighed and said joining our foreheads

"nahi bolo gi naa tum..." and I again nodded in a NO... how can I tell him that I love him.. yes I do.. more than my life but ... im too shy to say that... I just hugged him tightly to make him understand what I meant and he got what I wanted to tell. He carefully wrapped his hand around my waist and said

"ill wait for that day nandu... ill not force anything on you... Im dying to hear those words from your mouth... please don't delay okay.. warna ill get old and so will you.." and chuckled at his statement.. I hit him on his arm playfully and was about to say something when we heard a knock on the door... he got angry as he knew who it was... he tried to ignore it by holding me more close to him making it difficult for me to breath...

"chodiyae naa... vo lo mujhae bahuth tease karangae baad mae.. chalo jii chaltae hai..." I tried to convince him but he was soo stubborn... he held me more close and said " abhi nahi thodi der baad... please.." he asked me soo cutely that I could do nothing but give in to his cute request. We were lost in each others warmth when the banging on the door increased soo much that unwillingly he left me and I adjusted my hair and my saree and opened the door. And there they were.. my husband's childhood friends

"kya nandu.. itti der laga dii.. kya kar raha tha tumhara pati.. bolo bolo..." they both started teasing me... I was going all red because of their teasing.. and before they could continue my saviour came

"what are you both doing here..??" he asked them in a stern tone making a fake angry face.. and they shrugged their shoulders and said

"tu naa rehanae dae.. shaadi kae baad tu itna badal jayaega... humane socha hi nahi tha..." she said dramatically and hi-fied with other girl and the trio started laughing... My husband was so much fond of his friends and threated them as a part of the family ... we moved together hand in hand... and there were 3 more my hubby's friends waiting to tease me... without giving them a chance to do so I said

"good morning devar jii.. sorry thodi der ho gayi.. mai abhi jakae aapkae liyae garma garam nashta lakae aati hun..." and I made a quick move towards the kitchen...

Everyone ate breakfast and how can I forget... my husband despite getting teased by everyone including mummy jii and papa jii made me eat the breakfast by making me sit in his lap and fed me with his own hands... its not like I don't like it but.. sabkae saamnae... hawww... he makes me eat ice cream like this only.. but only in our room... but aaj kal toh inko koi rok hi nahi paa raha... yeh sabkae saamnae shaitani karate hai... I was about to get up from his lap and I tripped and THUD...!!!

"arae.. nandu dii utho naa... kabsae hum aapko jaga rahae hai..." sameer said helping me to get up... ahh such a lovely dream it was.. I wish my life was the same.. I get this dream very often but I cant remember the faces the moment I wake up.. it annoy's me soo much... like I get the same dream everyday and I cant recollect the faces of the people whom I see.. my chain of thoughts broke when Sameer was shaking me to get my attention. I turned towards me and said

"dii.. maa bula rahi hai aapko.. jaldee neechae aa jao.." and before I could reply he ran away.. I sighed thinking about my weird dream and wishint it to become true I got up to get ready.. I wore a simple kurthi and a matching legging and went down after shower.. maa was sitting there in her office and the moment she saw me her smile grew wider... she gestured me to sit in the chair in front of her and I sat as directed.

"nandu.." she started politely and I waited for her to continue.. she held my both hands in hers and said

"beta.. tarae liyae ek rishta aaya hai... ladka bahuth acchae parivaar ka hai.. tera bahuth acchi tarah sae khayaal rakhaega... teri har khawaish puri karaega ga.. tujhae vo pyaar milaega jis kae liyae tu itnae saal tarsi hai... agar tujhae manzoor hot oh mai unko haan bol dun.." she said every word in a calm tone and I too listened patiently.. don't get surprised... ill tell you my history.. I am Nandini... I am an orphan... and maa is the care taker of this orphanage... she is really sweet and kind hearted person.. she takes care of kids just like her own kids.. and I really love her a lot.. I am 23 now.. and im doing a part time job to support maa for the orphanage...

The thought of marriage again brought goosebumps all over my skin and that wired dream again occupied my thoughts... I looked at maa with blank expression and she understood my inner turmoil and said

"beta darr math.. ladka sach mae bahuth accha hai aur tujhsae bahuth pyaar bhi kartha hai..." and I got confused again... how can some one love me but I didn't knew about it...

"maa.. pyaar.. kaun..??" I asked the first question that crossed my mind... she smiled looking at my confused face and said

"tujhae yaad hai vo charity show jo Malhotra's nae organise kiya tha.. aur wahan marae badlae tu gayi thi..?" I nodded a yes recollecting the event and she continued "haan.. toh wahan Mr&Mrs. Raj Malhotra thae.. aur tu unko bahuth pasand aa gayi.. toh unhonae unkae batae sae tarae baarae mae baath ki aur usko toh tu photo mae hi pasand aa gayi thi.. aur usnae shaadi kae liyae haan bol diya hai.. ab sab kuch tujhpae depend karta hai nandu.. mai tujhae force nahi kar rahi.. lekin ek baar soch iskae barae mae.. ladka bahuth accha hai... wahan cupnoard mae uska photo aur baaki kae details hai.. tu ek baar dekh lae.." maa told me and I was too numb to react... I didn't know what to say,... if maa was insisting on the thing that the guy was good toh he must definitely be one in a million and I totally trust her...

"jaisa aap theek samjho waisae hi karo maa.. aap jo bologae vo mujhae manzoor hoga.." I said after 5 minutes. She got up from her chair and hugged me so tightly and said

"dekhna beta tarae saarae wishes Bappa (Ganesha ) purae karangae... tu unkae ghar bahuth khush rahaegi..." she said and kissed my forehead. I smiled seeing her happiness and turned to go to my room when she again called me

"arae ladkae ka photo toh dekh lae.. tera honae wala pati hai..." she said and I blushed unknowingly and went to the cupboard kept in the corner of the room and took the envelope and went to my room. As soon as I entered my room I locked the door and sat on my bed excitedly. My hands literally started shivering while opening the cover and finally I saw his pic

and my breath stuck in my throat.. he was sooo handsome... he was soo good looking... his eyes.. on my god.. I felt like I was loosing myself... agar photo dekh kae hi yeh haal hai toh agar sach mae dekh liya toh..??? I thought and laughed at my craziness... I turned around and forund his name written on it MANIK MALHOTRA.. so im getting married to Manik Malhotra... I traced the name with my fingers and closed my eyes...

After 15 days...

"vadhu aur var saath pherae kae liyae uthiyae.." pandit jii told and we both stood up for the pherae. And pandit jii told us the meaning and importance of these 7 vows

Groom:
You will offer me food and be helpful in every way. I will cherish you and provide welfare and happiness for you and our children.
Bride:
I am responsible for the home and all household responsibilities.

Groom:
Together we will protect our house and children.
Bride:
I will be by your side as your courage and strength. I will rejoice in your happiness. In return, you will love me solely.

Groom:
May we grow wealthy and prosperous and strive for the education of our children. May our children live long.
Bride:
I will love you solely for the rest of my life, as you are my husband. Every other man in my life will be secondary. I vow to remain chaste.

Groom:
You have brought sacredness into my life, and have completed me. May we be blessed with noble and obedient children.
Bride:
I will shower you with joy, from head to toe. I will strive to please you in every way I can.

Groom: You are my best friend, and staunchest well-wisher. You have come into my life, enriching it. God bless you.
Bride:
I promise to love and cherish you for as long as I live. Your happiness is my happiness, and your sorrow is my sorrow. I will trust and honor you, and will strive to fulfill all your wishes.

Groom:
May you be filled with joy and peace.
Bride:
I will always be by your side.

Groom:
We are now husband and wife, and are one. You are mine and I am yours for eternity.
Bride:
As God is witness, I am now your wife. We will love, honor and cherish each other forever.

During the pherae Manik held my hand so tightly and the look in his eyes meant that he was not just saying.. but he really meant those words.

. And next pandit jii called for kanya daan and tears rolled down my eyes on the mention of my parents who abandoned me right after my birth. Manik held my hand and nodded assuringly when

"bhai kanya daan kar saktae hai naa pandit ji.." cabir came forward to do it.. he was Manik's friend.. right from the first time we met he used to call me his sister and today I was really speechless with his this gesture.. kya bolkae inn sab logon ka shukriyada karu mae...

"jii kyun nahi... bhai kar saktae hai yeh.." pandit jii said and bhai along with his wife Navya bhabhi did my kanya daan and tears didn't stop coming from my eyes looking at the love these people were showering me with. Bhabhi wiped my tears and said "rotae nahi nandini... yeh khushi ka mahual hai.." and kissed my forehead and I nodded my head in a yes and manik wiped my tears smiling all the time.

And next He filled my maang with sindoor and tied the nuptial chain around my neck. So from now I was not just nandini.. I was Nandini Manik Malhotra. I caressed the nuptial chain and smiled looking at manik and he was already looking at me with the same smile.

All the rituals were done and now I was standing in front of Malhotra Mansion.. my home from now.. where I would be living with mom dad and manik... manik's parents were also so loving and caring.. they asked me to call them mom and dad so I did it without a second thought.

Mom placed the kalash in front of my feet and I came in by kicking it with my right leg and then she placed a plate filled with red water and asked me to walk in after dipping my legs in it and I followed it all the time manik was holding my hand. Then we played the game of finding the ring in the milk in which manik made me win by passing the ring to me and said "I don't mind being yours all my life..." and winked at me making me blush to the deepest shade of red and all his friends teased us to the core. And after all this finally mom asked manik's friends Aliya mukthi and navya bhabhi to take me to his room and they followed the same all the time teasing me and telling me about manik;s childhood and their school and college days. They all were soo sweet and lovely people. The left me in the room after making me sit on the bed and covering my face with the veil. After 5 minutes the door got open and manik came in. I trembled as he took steps close to me and finally he sat beside me and uncovered my face and said cupping my face in his big hands

" I LOVE YOU NANDINI"


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i couldnt complete the whole thing in one part... i so wanted to do it but couldnt... next part tomorrow pakka...

those who wanted to know my other works this is my index.. do have a look

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/132286846

hit likes and shower your comments..

hope you all liked the first part...

take care..

keep smiling..

loads of love..

neeraja... 😊

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res dolly 😆

Haa haa kr diya mainy unres.. Ab pout naa kariyo.. Aaj jhamkhay tery taang kheechny waali hu mai😃Elder sister's are for this only.. Kasam hai mujhy meray Shaahid kapoor ki tumko aaj pinky dolly bannaky hi rhungi😉

Okay jee!!! Meray palla kch nhi pada jee teray iss story mai AB ka kya kaam hai jee!!! Ye tou jaisy tumnay kha REAL LIFE waala story hai jee tou ye kiskay story hai dolly jee😛

Mennu tou lag rhi hai kch kch something something types jee😉 Aisy hai kya jee!!! Dasso jee...yeh sab kii ho RHA jee :P
Oh jee!!! Mainy yakeen nhi ho RHA hai jee you wrote LB stuff's...kithnay kam ho gye hoga tomatoes kay rate Bangalore mai jee!!! Tumhary roomie tumko kithey tease kiya jee?? Chaddo jee... Jab mai vaapas aau tab mai kya karny waali ye zaraa dekho jee... Accha jee yeh sab padkay lovey dovey story lg rha hai jee.. Mennu tou bht zyada confusion ho rha hai jee!!!

Nandini ki yaadasht chali wali gyi thi kya jee?
Dream ka kya chakkar hai jee?? And ye Malhotra's ithnay sweet sweet kch hazam nhi ho RHA hai jee!!!! Liked all the situation jee..
Marriage ho bhi gya jee!!!! Ye tou superb tha jee... Matlab innay jaldi wow jee!!! I'm all excited to read further parts jee!!! Will tease you in msgs jee😉 yha nhi dolly jee!!! Vrna tum mery bartha banaakay khaa jaaogy jee!!!

Bbyee jee!!! Take care jee!!!
AB kay view jee... Your mommy is still busy fizzy jee!!!! She'll give in final jee.. 😳
Edited by Snehasn - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Oh my god
Oh my god
Thus is so cute
N so dreamy

Bit y have u made this an os
😕
If nt an ff
May be fs ??
Plz
I Want to read more
If u cn ...

N bdw
I totally loved it
Somehow thEse clich stories attract me the most
N reading them imagining it to be with manan
😳
Continue soon
N thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The part is awesome continue soon please
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So sweet description of nandu's dream and also marriage thing...
Nandu is an orphan...poor baby...
But Manik 's family love her...
But what about the dream...because in your details you told that nandu saw the same dream always...what's that...

Ok ok we will wait till tomorrow...
Please tomorrow update pakka...

Eagerly waiting dear...make it fast...
Hehehe so impatient...I know...

All the best...will see tomorrow...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update..
Luvd it..
Thnkz 4 d pm..
D dream ws cute..
Manik confession..
Cabini bond
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg!! Such a lovely story is this one.
I want to read it fully...

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