ITNI SI BAAT HAI (MANAN FF) part 11 on page 9

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Hellofriends.I am here to write my first ff on our one and only MANAN...and in this ff i will showyou manan marriage life..but but manik is in love (u know attraction ) with someone else...so lets see what happens.. will nandini get her love? will manik is fall in love with nandini? I hope u all like this ff..And pls ignore the mistakes because am writting first time.. 😊😊😊

ITNI SI BAAT HAI

Index

Character sketch (Malhotra Family) : page 1

character sketch : page 1

part 1: page 1

part 2: page 2

part 3 : page 2

part 4 : page 3
part 5 : page 4
part 6: page 4
part 7 : page 5
part 8 : page 6
part 9 : page 8
part 10 : page 8
part 11 : page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character Sketch (Malhotra Family)

hello guys this is my first ff and i hope u will support me and like my ff...

first of all i am giving u character sketch

pls guys if u like it then do comment and like

then i will decide that u like it or not and i will continue.


Manik Malhotra : Handsome, hot, killer.. CEO of MALHOTRA INDUSTRIES.. Married to Nandini Murthy.. Love his family.. mom and dad... and love his friends fab-5...lead singer of fab-5. relationship with aliya saxena...dont love nandini marrying to her because of his parents...


Nandini Murthy : An orphan.. loss her parents at the age of 10.. carving for love..loss her childhoood...works as cabirs secretry.. in malhotra industries...married to Manik Malhotra...knows about manik and aliya...a simple, sweet, cute girl...maniks parents consider her their daughter..love manik...Marrying to manik beacuse manik's parents gives her maink's square..


Raj Malhotra : Owner of Malhotra Industries..married to nyonika..father of manik malhotra.Loves him very much.. very strict when it comes on business.. loves his family...loves nandini like a father...wants nandini to married manik...and it happens...


Nyonika Malhotra : wife of raj malhotra...mother of manik...love him very much..consider nandini her daughter... wants the same that her husband want and think that with nandini manik will be happy..runs ngo's.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept
N nyc character sketch
Update the chapter soon
Please pm me

Keep smiling always
N Stay Blessed

😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character Sketch

hey guys i am here with sencond part of my story i will introduce u all with remaining characters



Cabir Dhawan : Maniks best friend knows him in and out...part of fab-5.plays drums...always plays pranks...and also knows that manik doesn't love aliya it's just a attraction...works in malhotra industries...boyfriend of navya..

Mukti Vardhan : Tom boy, hot, sexy.. all boys droll over her..partner of cabir in pranks...consider manik as his brother...best friend of aliya...love with abhimanyu...part of fab-5 plays guitar.

Aliya Saxena : Fashion diva, beautiful..girlfriend of manik(just attraction).. part of fab-5 plays piano..over protective of manik..

Dhruv Vendant : shy boy of the group..part of fab-5.. plays guitar. buddy of manik..had a feelings for aliya but doesn't open his mouth...

Abhimanyu : boyfriend of mukti..a doctor.. consider nandini as his sister...like to be happy...

Navya Naveli: nandini's best friend, girlfriend of cabir..full packet of bollywood drama queen...a madhubala...knows nandini in and out..RJ..

Shoha Khurana : evil in my story..manik ke piche padi hai..or i can say uski property ke pich...syco type..


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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART ONE______

we can see there was a wedding going on. A handsome guy and a beautiful girl are taking rounds of agni kunda. Then boy fill girls maang from vermillion (sindoor).

And Pandit ji announced that "Aaj se aap dono pati-patni hai"

with this boy and girl take elders blessing.

In boys room @10 pm

Boy enter the room and see that the girl is sitting on the bed. The room is fully decoreted with candles and roses. Boys anger reach a peak and he shouted at the girl"NANDINI how could you I told you first that I had a girlfriend then why you say yes to this marriage. very soon i will leave you. welcome to the HELL of manik malhotra. I don't considere you as my wife did u get that. bhaut jaldi mai tumhe divorse de dunga."

Nandini: Aap ne kyu phir haa ki shaddi ko aap bhi nahi bol sakte the manik.

Maniik: tumse kisne kaha ki question kare and dont call my name form your mouth call me sir did u get that call me sir.waise tumne kyu ha ki..

Nandini: I was bounded with a promise SIR..

with this he pull her from the bed and push her.

She fell down and got hurt on her hand.

Manik: This is your place ab padi raho yaha...

with this he goes to washroom.

Nandini to herself: (she is crying badly) Why why aaiappa always me sab mujhe chod ke chale jate hai. Pehale Aama and Aapa aur ab Manik bhi. agar is baar koi mujhe chod ke chala gaya toh mai jee nahi paungi. Mai toh unse pyar karti hu par wo tho nafarat karte hai. ab mai kya karungi.

Her chain is broke by the voice of the door. Manik came and sleeps on the bed. And turn off the lights. There was darkness all over the room as well as ln nandini's life also.

Nandini sleeps on the coach.

CHAPTER END...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing c.s...
Manan's married...but manik luvs Aliya...
But nandini luvs manik...
Sounds damn interesting...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Excellent update...
Manan got married...
But manik was so rude to nandini...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing.
Feeling bad for nandini.
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc start dear...
Feeling bad for nandu
Hope Manik understands her love soon
Eagerly waiting for next update

Keep smiling always 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 2

Next Morning:

Nandini open her eyes with the sunrays falling on her eyes. She saw manik is sleeping peacefully hugging his pillow tightly.

she got ready and kept manik's things on the bed and went downstairs to her her mother-in-law.

In Kitchen

Nandini: Good morning maa

Nyo: Good morning baacha how are you?

Nandini: I am good maa laiye main aap ki madat kar deti hoon.

Nyo: ok (she sees her wound) waise yeh chot kaise lagi manik ne kuch kiya kya ruko main usse choungdi nahi..

Nan: nahi nahi unahone kuch nahi kiya washroom ka door lag gaya..

Nyo: thik hai..dhyan se beta kaji jyada lag jati toh..

Nan: sorry mom

with that they prepared breakfast and went to dining table and see Raj has already present there.

Raj: good morning nandu

Nan: good morinig papa.

raj kissed her temple. and then only manik came downstairs and nandini sees that he is not wearing that cloths with nandini selected he wears other cloths.Nandini is hurt by his behiavoure

he came with mom and dad.

Man: mom i am going i have some work.

Nyo: are par nasta toh karke jao nandini ne pehale baar banaya hai

Man: (seeing at her with angry eyes) no thanks mujhe bhuk nahi hai.

tears comes in nandinis eyes. manik left form there.

Manik came out of the house and his sell phone ring it was aliya..

Aliya : hey baby how are you ? chalo na aaj shoping pe chalte hai..

Nandini came out of the house and manik sees her

Man: ok babay i am coming we will spend full day together. see you love you.

Aliya : (more than ready to sepend time with manik) yeee thank you so much manik love you..come soon

they ended the call and nandini heae that and she thougt "manik sir are saying right i came between him and aliya.. its all my fault i am bad luck for manik sir's life"

Nandini came to manik and asked him " man... sir aap raat ke khane mai kya kayehe" with beautiful sime on face.

Man: I dont want anyting i am eating outside.(with rudely)

with that manik sit in the car left from there.

When manik left from there nandini also went outside and complete the house hold work.

when manik left from there he called alya.

Man: hello alya we cant go out today i have a some important work

ALy: but manik i am ready pls chalo na...

Man : sorry alya aaj nahi bye.

with that he cut the call.

manik is sitting in his cabin lost in his thoughts.

Manik Pov..

why i cant see her sad why. kya nandini itni matter karti hai ki maine uske liye alya ko aaj na bol diya. main uske aabkhon main aasu kyu nahi dekh sakta. jab manie subah breakfast table pe uske aankhon main aasu dekhe tab mujhe aacha kyu nahi laga?

end.

when manik is lost in his thoughts at that time cabir enter in the cabin and saw that manik is lost in thoughts with small smile is playing on his face. he thought to tease her.

cab: manik kiske baare main soch raha hai...

Man: (lost in his thoughts) uske baare main...

cab: tho tujhe use pyar ho hi gaya..

man: (again lost in his thoughts) haa. ...kya cabir tu kab aaya aur ye kya bol raha hai..

cab: main tho jab tu uske khayalomain khoya hua tah tab aaya.

man: main nandini ke khayalo main nahi tha

cab: main toh nandini ka naam bhi nahi liya.

man: (embarrassed) wo...wo... tu bata tu kyu aaya hi yaha?

cab: wo sab chod tu bata kaise hai meri bhabhi..aur kab se join kar rahi hai

man: mujhe kaise pata..

cab: kyu tum dono ki toh saadhi ho gayi hai na phir

man: are yaar cabir tu janta hai na main alya se pyar karta hu toh i dont care about her.

cab: tu alya se pyar karta hi manik ab tho aankhe khol yaar tera ye sirf attraction hai maan meri baat teri aankho main saaf saaf dhikayi deta hai ke tu alya se pyar nahi karta...U DONT LOVE ALYA IT"S JUST ATTRACTION..bas ITNI SI BAAT HAi ke samaj nahi raha...main chalta hu think about it...

manik pov

kya cabir sach keh raha hai main alya se pyar nahi karta.. its just a mere attraction aur what.. aur mujhe bura kyu laha jab cabir ne "meri bhabhi" kaha wo aise kaise keh sakta hai she is mine only mine..what what i just said mine no manik tu cabir ke baaton ko chod aur kaam kar aaahhh nandini...

end..



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