ITNI SI BAAT HAI (MANAN FF) part 11 on page 9 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Manik is feeling something for Nandini 😳
Hope he understands it soon...
Eagerly waiting for next update
Cont soon...
Please pm me

Keep smiling always
N Stay Blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read it now only nice story continue soon waiting eagerly take care 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 3

@ night

Manik reach home at night 10:30 pm and saw nandini is waiting for him. As soon as nandini saw manik she question him " kaha the aap sir aapko pata hai main kitna pareshan ho gayi thi..kam se kam ek phone call toh kar lete."

Manik is seeing at her like he saw a ghost. He is really shocked. With her behiavour.

Man: why should I answer your question? (angryly)

Nan: (realized her mistake ) I am sorry.(cutely )

With that nandini run towards her room. And manik is also goes. With that they slept thinking and fighting about their feelings.

Days passed like a air. And it has been 15 days since manan marriage happened. Nandini also joinded office. And she is taking care of manik like everyday she bought coffee for manik then she keep his cloths and other things on the bed everyday. She wait for him in night . manik is liking all this slowely, slowely and he not at all beheaving with her rudely. They are talking on random topics also.. but not that much. On 16 day morning...

Nan: sir, your breakfast is ready pls have it..

Actually manik is studying a file very important meeting is there that's why.

Man: no, nandini I cant mujhe abhi bohat kaam hai.

Nan: okay main upar le kar aati hoon aapka breakfast.

Before manik could say no to her she is already gone. After good 5 min nandini came back and sat infront of manik.

Nan: ab toh kha ligiye.

Man: no

Nan: aacha aap apna mooh open kijiye main khilati hoon.

unknowingly manik open his mouth and nandini feed him morsal. with that they had cute small eye-locks. its looking like a school boy is late for his school and his mother his feeding him.

then they both goes to office (in 15 days nandini came with manik in office and goes before him )

nan: all the best. for meeting

man: thanks.

nandini goes towards the her cabin and manik goes for meeting.

After two hours.

can: nandini pls being the file from manik of kapoor's project.

nan: yes.

nandini goes towars the maniks cabin and she knock but no one opens the door. So she push door and sees that manik is sitting on his chair and his eyes are closed he is looking tired.

so she went close to him generally started massaging of his shoulders.

manik open his eyes to see who is there and again close his eyes enjoying her massage.

nan: tired.

man: hhmmm.

Suddenly the door got open with a bang and the person come inside is and seeing him manik and nandini both are shocked and the person is also shocked seeing the scene infront of hm.



Bang the door got open and alya shouted "baby I am back"...


seeing her manik and nandini both are shocked. manik got up from his seat and " alya tum yaha kya kart rahi ho?"


Actually alya is on trip for 10 days and she came back. alya sees manik and nandini both and she is also shocked . she thought what are they doing together.


She shouted at nandini " hey you commener what are you doing in my boyfriends cabin?


nan: wo...wo main file laine aai thi.


alya: (shouted) oh really I can saw you and manik what are you doing?


nan: (with tears) no its not like that wo toh sir is feeling tired toh I was giving him massage. that's it.


alya: you get out from here right now you are not maniks secretry you are cabirs secretry remember that.

man:(angrily) enough alya

(sees nandini she is crying Manik felt sad for her) she is saying all true.

alya: manik because of that commener girl you are shouting at me. I will not leave her.

man: she is not commener she is my wife THE Manik Malhotra's wife did you get that.

(nandini's eyes shot open she is really shocked on what just manik said. she even didn't thought in her dreams that manik is consider her his wife.

alya: manik she came between you and me and you are shouting at me.

Man: st..

Nan: (cut him off) sorry mam I know I came between you two I am really sorry I won't come between you again.

With that she goes from there. and alya also moves from there. Manik is really angry on alya that because of she nandini has to hear all this. with this manik started his work again but his mind is occupied by nandini's thoughts.

On the other side.

Nandini's pov..

I left from there and came to my cabin. I am really hurt by alya's words. I am crying and only crying my tears are flowing like a river. Manik alos love someone else. Am I not worthy for anyone love? why aaiappa mere saath hi aisa kyu hota hai koi , mujhse pyar nahi karta. aur manik Sir bhi mujhse pyar nahi karange kyu ki I am looking ugly I know god my cubby cheeks and pouty lips and big eyes , my dressing style also not good like alya Mam. manik sir ko toh Hot, sexy girls pasand hogi. bas bahot ho gaya mai ab manik sir aur alya mam ke beech nahi aaungi. Jaise hi hamari shaddi ko 6 months complete ho jayange main unse divorse le lungi..

end...

Nandinis thoughts inputted by knock on the cabin. she saw cabir is coming so she wipe her tears. and compose herself.

cab: arey nandini you are here and I am scearching you in all office wo file kaha hai.

Nan: wo actually cabir main lana bhul gayi sorry

cab: its ok koi nahi (cabir noticed her red eyes)

cab: nandini kuch hua hia kya?

nan: kuc..kuch bhi toh nahi hua kyu?

cab: no just asking

Nan: ok

cab: tho main aaj jaldi jane wala hoon pls sambhal lena sab ok.

nan: thick hai tum jao main sab sambhal lungi.

with that cabir left. and nandini remuse her work again. and today is Saturday so half day for all employees so after half day all employees are gone to their home and only manik and nandini remain. manik is working on his important project and nandini also completing her work because he was on leave for her marriage.

@ 7:30 Pm..

nandini complete her work and come out her cabin and sees no one is there. But she saw only manik's cabin light is on. she goes towards his cabin and knock

Nan: may I come in sir?

man: yes, (he didn't saw up who is there because he is really busy)

nan: sir can I go home?

Man: (he recognized nandini's voice and look up) first thought come to his mind on seeing her that "she must be crying so much that's why her eyes are swallon'

man: (come out from his thoughts) arey ruko na hum dono saath main chale jayange.

Nan: no sir I will go bye.

she without listing to him run out.

Man pov

she without listing my reply run out. I am sure she is hurt because what alya said to her. its not her fault at all. that's why she is ignoring me. but I am Manik Malhotra how can she ignore me I will see her she have to fall for my charm. Get ready Mrs. Manik Malhotra.

with that manik smirked and close his laptop to go home.

On the other side nandini is walking on the road because she didn't got any taxi there is a strike of taxi and in lonely road she is walking. After some time she noticed some boys are following her.

nan pov..

I was so lost in my thoughts that I couldn't realized that some boys are following me. when I saw them I was scared and first name came in my mind is manik and I took out my mobile but my bad luck my battery is dead. shit shit what should I do now. I saw back and they are coming close to me. now I am really scared I am going to run when one boy caught my hand tightly. I shouted " leave me help" boy " not so easily baby, come with me for this night" I " no leave me" I am struggling to free my hand but no his grip was so tight. then other boy come towards me and tore left my sleeves I am crying badly and he is going to kiss me I close my eyes tightly but no after some time I didn't fell anything so I open my eyes sees manik is beating them with full anger. I only took one name "Maanikkk"

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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
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Edited by 27022001 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Excellent updates...
Manik was so rude with nandini...
But...he's changing...
Manan's relationship is improving...
Manik strtd hvng feelings for nandini...
Infact he took stand 4 nandini wen alya insulted her...
Protective Manik's so cute...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
wow this story is so awesome
ur writing is really good
and the story line is really amazing
but one thing is that ur taking this story so fast
u should go a bit slow with manan equation
and create more masala n complications
then it will be really fun to read it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
PART 4

manik pov...

I come out from the office and sees that no one is on the road and suddenly I remember that today is strike of taxi and I am stupid I let her go like this ab kaha hogi and I scearched on the road then what I saw from my eyes that's enough to boil my blood the boy is going to kiss nandini . bloody I will not leave them and I came towards them and started beating them. after some time I heard my name "MANIKKK" I intestinally stop beating and saw her she is numb. for the first time I am hearing my name when she call me for I felt so special.

end.

manik come toward nandini and cover her with his jacket he is very shock to seeing her condition. manik saw in her eyes and he can see that she is going through so much pain. Unknowingly he pull her in his embrace she is when she feel maniks hands around her body she broke down she is crying really hard. she only said "ma...man...manik mu...mujhe ga,,,ghar jana hai."

manik : ok chalo.

with this manik pick her in his arms and went towards his car he is making her in passenger seat then he strart the car and drive towards home. and ya nyonika and raj are not in the india they are in London for some work. so no one in home .Manik stop the infront the malhotra mansion. he sees his other side sees her sleeping. for the first time manik is noticing her face so closely.

Manik pov..

I sees her and I can see in her eyes that she is really scared I think she is afraid of something. for the first time I am seeing her so closely. she has beautiful eyes, pouty lips, cubby cheeks, long hairs. she is indeed beautiful. my chain thoughts break when watchman came and I pick up nandini in my arms and went towards our room before saying butler to bring our dinner to our room.

end.

manik put nandini on the bed but her sleep break and she woke up

Man: Nandini are you ok?

nan: ye..yes..

and goes in the washroom.

In washroom...

Nandini came towards mirror and sees her arm and wrist there was marks of that boys she is crying and saying to herself " why aaiappa why me. app mere saath he aisa kyu karte hai. but thanks to manik sir unhanone meri jaan bachaye. par maine toh decide kiya tha ki main unshe dur rahungi ya right I have stay away from him. because of me he has to suffer and because of me he cant marry to his love. I have to do this but main toh unse dur kaise rahungi I LOVE HIM..na chate bhi mujhe pyar ho gaya hai unse...I LOVE YOU MANIK THAT MUCH KI I CAN LET U GO...for your happiness.

outside the manik is really worried for nandini. from the past 15 min nandini is inside so finally manik decided to knock on the door

KNOCK KNOCK..

man: nandini u okay..bahar aao

nan: aayi sir bas 2 min..

man: (to himself) fir se sir...iski toh main kya ye mujhe mere naam se nahi bual sakti..kya? but maine hi tho use kaha that ki call me sir.. aur ab main hi use mera naam kehane ko kahunga. jab usne mera naam liya toh mujhe mera naam bahut aacha lagnane laga hai..

nandini came out from the washroom and saw manik is lost in his thoughts. so she is came towards him "sir what happen, aap kya soch rahe hai.."

man: why?

nan: sorry bas aise hi pucha.

man: u ok..

nan: ya (with the fake smile)

man: ok come and have a dinner

nan: no sir I am not hungry..

man: no no u have to eat something then u can sleep I am really hungry come

nan: aap ne dinner nahi kiya (shocked face)

Man; nahi aao na jaldi..

nan: nahi aap kha lijiye main baad main kha lingi

man; kyu tume mere saath nahi kahana:

nan: main aap ke saath kaise nahi.

she turned to go but manik held her hand and pull her on the bed

man: chup chap khao.

nan with cute pout and pleading face stared to eat.. manik is only observing her.

man: will you be my friend?

nan: (shocked face ) kya?

man: I am asking will you be my friend?

nan: (how could I no its not right here I am thinking how to stay away from him and he is making difficult for me )

man: ans me

nan:ok sir

and manik is super happy so and thought " yes ab kaise ignore karogi" with his special smik on his face.

man: so we are friends now right so don't call me sir call me MANIK

nan: what

manik came towards her they are standing..when manik step forward nandini step backward. soon she is pinned in between manik and the wall..

man: (slowly catch her waist) yes call me on my name.

nan: sir no how could i

man: we are friends so u have to call me from my name

with this he came towards her face she is breathing heavily.

nan: please

man: call me please (with puppy face)

nan: MA..MANIK

man: aur ak baar

nan: manik.

manik smile fully and kissed nandini's forehead. and back off.

nan: good night and ran on the couch to sleep and cover her with duvet.

manik smile on her cuteness and ruffles his hairs.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Update fast plz I have read ur story just now it's awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Excellent update...
Manik protected nandini 4m d goons...
Manan's convo was cute...
Nandini wants to go away 4m manik...
But manik strtd feeling 4 nandini...
Wow!!! manan became frnds...
Totally luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
PART 5


Next morning...

Nandini open her eyes first and sees that manik is sleeping peacefully. Nandini recalled their yesterday moment and blush how manik kissed her first time, touched her first time. she is smiling and got ready. went downstairs and prepared manik's coffee. and come to the room and wake up manik

manik : good morning

Nan; good morning Manik.

manik got happy when he hears his name from his lips.

man: this is the best morning. u know why?

nan: why?

man: because u called my name first in the morning.

nandini blushed and went downstairs.

after some time manik came down. they are having breakfast.

man: waise nandini mom-dad kab aane wale hai.

nan: wo meri subah hi baat hui wo 5 din baad aane wale hai.

man: ok , so today is Sunday so no office lets go out somewhere.

nan: but main

man: offo nandini please we are friends now so we can go out chalo ready ho jao..don't scared form me now.

nan: ok, I will get ready.

with that nandini goes towards the room.she got ready and come down . manik is already waiting for her. but when she is coming down.

alya enter the house and hug .

alya: good morning baby.

manik is not liking that alya is calling her baby in front of nandini. and he wanted to go out with nandini.

Man: (with fake smile) good morning alya.

alya: (sees nandini and) hey u get the coffee for me

nan: (look down) yes..

she is going but manik held her hand. "she is not going anywhere:"

alya: oh manik today is Sunday so lets go out that's why I came here chalo na baby.

man: not today I am going with nandini

alya: (with angry) I wanted to talk to you ( to nandini)

and held her hand went In a room. manik is trying to stop them but alya lock the door.

inside the room

alya: I told you that stay away from my manik.

nan: sorry but manik decided that's why we are going out alya.

alya: shouted : just shut up I am giving you last warning stay away from him he is gone to leave you and come to me because he loves me did you get that HE WIIL LEAVE YOU

nandini is crying on her fate now because she know that what is alya is saying is all true. and alya went outside and nadini came out wiping her tears.

man: alya what the hell what are you talking

alya: nothing girls talk.

n an: manik actually I am not feeling well so will you please go with alya.

alya: ya baby lets go na

man: no I am not anywhere with you alya.

alya: (angrily) why u have to manik u are my boyfriend right because of her u r not coming right.

nan: manik pls chale jayeye na she is ur girlfriend pls

man: are par nandini

cutted by nandini : pls mere liye.

man: (angrily) fine.

alya: oh thanks manik lets go.

nan: wo main aaj navya ke ghar jaa sakti hu kya.?

man: ha kyu nahi. chalo main tume drop kar deta hu.

alya: ha chalo itna to hum kar hi sakte hai.

they come out and manik opens the door for nandini because she is coming towards him so but alya came and sit on the passenger seat and nandini with no option sit back.

manik took driver sit and start the car. he stops the car near the navya's apartement and nandini came down and going but manik stops her.

man: nandini wait

nan: ha ( with sad face)

man: I will come to pick you in the evening ?

nan: no I will come u don't take tension u only enjoy with alya. bye.

man: (hold her hand) nandini why are you ignoring me I said na I will come

nan: pls manik no I will come (her eyes become moist)

and she goes from there.

man: to herself: why she is doing this I am talking to her but she is ignoring me I cant like it. but she is also right alya is my girlfriend but I don't want to be with her. kya cabir sahi keh raka yeh sirf attraction hai kya. don't know cluck it .

alya called him : manik lets go na?

maniK : ya coming

with that alya and manik left from there for their so called day out. in the full day manik is present there but his soul and mind is wirth nandini. he is thinking only about nandini. and @ 7:00 pm manik drop alya to home and come to Malhotra Mansion. When he come home he got shock that nandini hadn't come yet back .

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Done with the update...

HAWWW think guys where is nandini she hadn't come home yet...

bye...

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