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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja
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What an update Yaar... The story looks really really Intresting
U've penned every phase perfectly
Loving the concept n the story

Thanxx for the PM

Keep smiling
Stay blessed

Thank you @mehak_ahuja!!😛

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Cindy_Daisy

@Cindy_Daisy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Part 3!

Next day in Rishikesh!

Nandini woked up and rubbed her eyes and looks around to register the surroundings. She stood up after realising that she slept in Sagar's tent on his bed and he was no where to be seen, not even Rohit. So she decides to move out and to find others. She reached her tent and saw there too was no one. She at once got confused that where all went all of a sudden.

Location : Space, Mumbai.

Everyone were present in canteen and were discussing on upcoming project. When Cabir asks Manik suddenly, " Arre manik ek baat bata..Humara next play ka title kya rakhega?" ["Ah Manik tell us one thing.. What will be our next play tile?"]

Everyone too asks him the same question. Manik smiles on this and speaks, "IN YOUR LOVE!!"

After listening to this everyone starts saying.

Mukti : Wow manik! Awesome title!

Aliya : Hayye! In your love!! So romantic!

Dhruv : Manik baba ki jai ho!

Cabir : So cheesy dude, But acha hai!

Abhi : It's nice manik!

Maddy : Hmm. In Your Love! Dude what cooking, why achanak se love shov? hmmm? [Hmm. In Your Love! Dude what cooking, why suddenly love shov? Hmm?]

Manik who till now was smiling listening to all stops smiling and looks at Maddy surprisingly. But straightens himself and speak in his as usual Manikish tone, "What do you mean achanak se? It was always planned!"

Maddy smirking, "Really?"

Manik sternly, "Yes, Mr Madhyam Singhania! Kyu aapko koi problem hai?" ["Yes, Mr Madhyam Singhania! Why do you have any problem?"]

Maddy raising his hands, "NO way bro, no problem! Your life your rules."

Manik smiles seeing Maddy accepting his defeat. Alya after reading some lines about character speaks, "Wo sab to theek hai Manik, but yeh Naina ka character kya hai?" ["That all is cool manik, but what is this Naina's character dude?"]

Mukti who was sipping coke asks her, "Why? What happened Alya?"

Alya : Dekho na guys, Naina aisi ladki hai jo apne khwaabo ki duniya mein.. [See guys, Naina is girl who always stays in her dreamland..]

Manik didn't let her complete and starts speaking by himself, "Ek aisi ladki jo hamesha khush rehna chahti hai, hawa mein udna chahti hai, khul ke zindagi jeena chahti hai, bina kisi bandisho ke, bina kisi sawalo ke bas udna chahti hai!" [She is a girl who always wants to be happy, who wants to fly, wants to live her life to the fullest without any conditions and questions!]

Manik smiles after saying all this and stops for a second and again speaks, "Naina.. Ek aisi ladki jisse kisi ka intezaar hai jo uske khwaabo ko poora karne mein uski madad karega, usse iss duniya ki saari bandisho se door leja kar zindagi jeena sikhayega, ek aisi duniya jaha pe koi nahi hoga..bas hoge to wo aur uske khwaab aur unko poore karne ki himmat. Ek aisi ladki jisse yakeen hai sache pyaar pe aur uski taakat par. Ek aisi ladki jo jhoomti hai apne hi masti mein, naachti hai khud ke liye aur gaati hai khud ki khushi ke liye..par wo yeh sab kar sabko yeh dikhana chahti hai ki dekho sab main wo nahi jo tum sab samajh rahe ho main wo hu jo sab mujhe dekh rahe ho. Yes! Let me grow, let me shine! Let me do whatever I want to do!" ["Naina.. A girl who is waiting for that one person who will help her in fulfilling all her dreams, who will take her away from all the conditions and questions of this world, who will teach her to live her life the way she wants to lives, who will take her to that life where there will be no one.. except her and her dreams and strength to fulfill those dreams. She is a girl who believes on true love and on its power. She is a girl who lives in her own world, dances for her self satisfaction and who sings for her happiness.. and after doing all this she wants to make everyone show that look people this is what i am and not what you people had thought of me. Yes! Let me grow, let me shine! Let me do whatever I want to do!"]

Manik stops and smiles widely. Everyone after listening to this goes in shock and in shock Cabir speaks, "Dude, ye naina ladki hai ya koi pari?" ["Dude, this girl Naina is some human or some fairy?"]

Manik smiles on this and comes near Cabir, looks into his eyes and says, "Naina.. Cabir Naina sirf Naina hai, tum chaho usse Pari bulao ya fir koi khuda ka koi farishta. Wo jo bhi hai meri inspiration hai. Humare play ki main lead hai aur hume aisi ek ladki ko iss play ke liye dhoondna hai!" ["Naina.. Cabir Naina is just Naina, now it's up to you whether you call her Pari or god's beautiful creation, but whatever she is, she is my inspiration and she is new lead for our next play, and for her character we have to find a girl suitable for her"]

Cabir after listening to this smiles widely and says, "Wow dude! I am in love with this character, hats off to you mere sher. Kya character likha hai.. Wah! Maza aa gaya! What say guys?"

But what they sees is that all their group members were lying on floor in front of manik holding their hands and looking at him as if they have seen some god, in short they were in Manik Tussi Great Ho wala mode.. hehehe!

[A/N : This is what my friends do when I gave them solution to their problems..hehe]

Manik gets shock and asks them to stand but no one moves and Harshad still in that mode speaks, "Aap dhanya hai manik baba! Kaha se laate hai aap aise ideas? Aaj main aapka fan..na na fan nahi cooler, AC, freeze sab ban gaya hu. Baba kripa karke mujhe apne sharan mein le lo baba!"

[A/n : I will not translate this as it will kill the feeling of moment.. hehehe]

Manik shocked, "What? Harshad stand up please, what are you doing? Guys please stand up, please..its so embarrasing. Please guys! Cabir kuch bolna yaar? [Cabir say something bro]. Guys please!"

Mukti : No Manik, Harshad is saying true! Tu humara friend nahi dude, humara love guru hai! [No Manik, Harshad is saying true! You are not our friend dude, you are our Love philoshper!]

Alya : Yes manik! Aww manik.. I too loved Naina's character!

Manik getting embarrased, "Guys please! Stand up guys or else main..ha main na Naina ka character badal duga! Ha main badal duga!" ["Guys please! Stand up guys or else I.. Yes I will change Naina's character! Yes I will do it!"]

After listening to this everyone at once stood up and shouts in unison, "NO WAY DUDE!"

Cabir laughs hysterically and speaks, "Hahaha..Manik teri dhamki kaam kar gayi! Bro, you are best! Hahahaha...just look at your faces guys!" ["Hahaha.. Manik bro your threat worked! Bro, you are best! Hahhahaha..just look at your faces guys!"]

Manik more embarrased, "Cabirrr...shut up! Guys it's just a character why you all reacting like this?"

Abhi : Are you serious Manik? Tu yeh puch raha hai that why we are reacting like this? Dude, college ate waqt sir pe kahi chot vot lag gayi thi kya? [Are you serious Manik? You are asking this question that why are we reacting like this? Dude, while coming to college did you got hit on your head

Manik gets confused from Abhi words and asks him, "What are you trying to say man?"

Maddy speaks, "Manik baba! Abhi wants to say that look at you man, these lines doesn't suits your personality. I mean who will say looking at you that this guy can write all this who.."

Mukti speaks in between, "Who don't have any girlfriends..who stays 5 ft. away from each girl.."

Alya speaks, "Jiske pass girlfriends ke naam pe sirf do best friends hai.. jo ki ussi ke best friends ki girlfriend hai!" ["Who have girlfriend in name of his 2 best friends, who are not forget to mention that who are already his best friends girlfriends!!"]

Manik listening to this makes bad face and speaks in babyish tone making puppy face, "What guys? Again that stupid topic! I hate this all please!"

All shouts in unison, "We know that Manik Baba! Isliye to hum kehte hai Manik Baba ki jai ho!"

All laughs and shares group hug shouting, "All for one, one for all always and forever!"

But no one from them knew that Manik's inspiration is soon going to come in front of him in form of Nandini. Manik didn't knew that destiny has already planned everything for him. All Manik wants to do now is to wait for that moment when destiny will bring his inspiration in front of him!

Location : Outside girls tent, Rishikesh

When Nandini didn't found anyone she decided to get freshen up so she moves towards her tent but stops when she listens some voice from her tent.

In tent, Sagar was trying hard to make Navya understand to not to feel bad for Nandini.

Sagar : Navya! Please try to understand na, tere dad ne kaha hai na ki wo pari ke dad se call karke unhe samjhayge! Tu kyu nahi samjh rahi hai yaar, you know what tere karan yeh poora last trip hum logo ka maza kharab kar degi! Navya please understand for god sake! [Navya! Please try to understand na, your dad told you right that he will make pari's dad understand everything! Why are you not getting it dammit, you know what just because of you, this our last trip will get ruined! Navya please understand gor god sake!]

Sagar lost his temper and started shouting on her. On other hand Nandini starts crying silently listening to this and runs from there crying.

Whereas in tent Navya too lost her temper and starts shouting on Sagar, "Stop shouting Sagar Singhania! Aur agar tujhe mujhse koi problem hai to bol de, I will leave from here right away!" ["Stop shouting Sagar Singhania! And if you are having so much problem from my side then tell me, I will leave from here right away!"

Manasavi shouts on this, "Have you gone nuts Navya? Tujhe pata hai ki tu kya bol rahi hai? Navya, Sagar is not shouting on you, he is just trying to make you understand! Bas!" ["Have you gone nuts Navya? Do you even know what are you saying? Navya, Sagar is not shouting on you, he is just trying to make you understand! That's it!"]

Navya shouts again, "What do you mean by trying to make me understand? Am I mad or something?"

Rohit who was sitting quietly till now speaks in stern voice, "Yes Miss Navya Naveli or even better Navya Rai, you have gone mad! That's why you are not understanding this small thing. Navya, we don't want to make Pari sad before leaving! This is our last trip Navya with Pari, please baby try to control your sadness dear!"

In end Rohit too accepts the defeat when he saw Navya leaving without saying anything.

Gunjan speaks after Navya left, "Guys, this is wrong! I am afraid what Navya will do now! What we will do now?"

Sagar sitting on bed ruffing his hair frustrated, "I don't know yaar! Navya is not understanding!"

Manasavi keeps hand on sagar's shoulder and says, "Guys, lets freshen up! Burry this topic here now..Sagar go to your tent, check if Pari woked up or not! Aaj hum sabko Rishikesh ka small tour lene jana hai! Go now! Rohit go with him. Gunjan chal hum bhi freshen up ho jaate hai!" ["Guys, lets freshen up! Burry this topic here now..Sagar go to your tent, check if Pari woked up or not! Today we all have to go for Rishikesh small tour! Go now! Rohit go with him. Gunjan let's leave, we too get freshen up!"]

When Sagar & Rohit left, Manasavi picks up her phone and starts to dial a number. Gunjan Notices this and asks her, "Manu, What are you doing?"

Manasavi gets scared but controls herself and says, "Gunjan! You scared me..wo main I am dialling Sneha Aunty's number so that she can make Navya understand to control her feelings!" ["Gunjan! You scared me.. I was just diallingSneha Aunty's number so that she can make Navya understand to control her feelings!"]

Gunjan : But Manu, agar Navu ko pata chala toh..she will feel bad na! [But Manu, if navu gets to know then she will fill bad na!]

Manasavi : I know Gujju, but we don't left with any other option ! I have to do this..but you promise you wont tell anyone not even to Sagar & Rohit. Promise?

Manasavi forwards her hand in front of Gunjan. Gunjan after thinking for a minute accepts her hand and says, "Promise. Just only for Pari!"

Manasavi hugs Gunjan in happiness and thinks, "Rab ji! Please, help me that I can make aunty understand about this situation!"

Manasavi still hugging, "Thank you Gujju! Love you my baby!"

Gunjan too says, "Love you too bebo!"

Hey there!

Guys here is the update. Enjoy reading!

Pardon me for any mistake.

Don't be silent reader!

See ya! :)

Edited by CinderellaGirl - 8 years ago