MaNan : In Your Love!! Part 4 page 14 - Page 4

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Part 2!

Location : Dhawan House, Mumbai!

Everyone were sitting at pool side and chit chatting when suddenly Manik shouted excitedly, "Guys!!"

Everyone gets scared by his sudden shout and Maddy asks him in anger, "What the hell Manik? Is this the way to scare people around you?"

Manik smiles sheepishly and mouthed a sorry and speakes, "Acha sorry sorry! But guys I have great news to share with you all. My cousin Sagar Singhania, remember?"

He asks everyone on which dhruv speaks, "That sagar which is from ajmer? Your maasi's son?"

Manik speaks joyfully, "Yes dhruv! He is the one. You know all what he is coming to Mumbai to join space. He is very talented and have some knowledge of theatre and play as he did that in his school times. So I was thinking to take him in our DRAMATIC SOCIETY!! What say?"

Cabir after sipping beer from can speaks, "Mindblowing idea bro! I mean we all have sen him acting, he is good in that. Apart from that we all know him very well, he is smart, good looking, and most important knows how to play guitar. I think we should take him in. What say guys?"

Everyone agrees to this on which Manik thanks them and goes aside to call Sagar to inform him about the same.

Location : Camp area, Rishikesh!

Nandini was sitting outside her tent and was watching moon when Navya enters in scene and asks her, "What are you doing here? Its so late. Come let's go inside."

Nandini still looking at moon, "Navu, you know today is full moon night. Moon is looking so beautiful tonight. I wish ye chandni aise hi rahe hamesha!" ["Navu, you know what today is full moon night. Moon is looking so beautiful tonight. I wish this moonlight stays forever like this!"]

Navya gets sad after listening Nandini's statement and speaks, "But nandini, everything has its end after a time na. This moon will too lose his shine with time!"

Nandini speaks, "No navu, moon will never lose his shine. You know why..because he has sun with him from whom he takes much needed light. Sun helps moon to shine! I wish koi mere liye bhi sun ki tarah shine kare!" ["No navu, moon will never lose his shine. You know why..because he has sun with him from whom he takes much needed light. Sun helps moon to shine! I wish someone too shine for me like sun!"]

Navya understood what she wants to say but even she too don't know what to say and feels guilty not able to help her soulie in anyway. Nandini smiles seeing Navya who was trying hard to control her tears but tears has made a way till now. Nandini speaks while wiping Navya's tears and hugging her, "Awww navu!! Shhh.. please don't cry. Pushpaa I hate tears re!!"

Navya chuckles on her statement but cries again and speaks, "I am sorry Nandu, I am not able to stop these stupid tears. I will miss you the most in Mumbai. Agar Dad ne Mukti se kehke mera admission space mein na karaya hota toh main tujhe yuh akela chod ke kabhi nahi jaati. I have to go Nandu. I have to.." ["I am sorry Nandu, I am not able to stop these stupid tears. I will miss you the most in Mumbai. If Dad hadn't told Mukti for my admission in space then trust me I have never left you alone over here and go away. I have to go nandu. i have to.."]

Navya didn't complete her sentence and runs from there. Yes! All were leaving for space with Sagar, Mukti is Navya's cousin and she only suggested Navya's father to send her for higher studies. Manasavi, Gunjan and Rohit were already from Mumbai and were in Ajmer to finish their school. They all informed Nandini this when they reached Rishikesh in evening.

Flashback!

All reached Rishikesh after executing their plan to how to trap Nandini's bodyguard. They reached around 7 p.m. when Navya received call from her father. Navya moves aside to attend her father call because she didn't wanted Nandini to hear anything about moving to Mumbai.

Navya and her father on phone:

Navya's father : Hello navya. How are you beta? Have you reached safely?

Navya : Hello dad. Yes, we reached just now. I am fine.

Navya's father : Oh great beta! Acha beta, Mukti ka phone aaya tha Mumbai se.. and I have got a great news for you. You have got admission in most reputed college of Mumbai in arts SPACE!! Congratulations my love!! ["Oh great dear! By the way baby, I have received call from Mukti from Mumbai.. and I have got a great news for you. You have got admission in most reputed college of Mumbai in arts SPACE!! Congratulations my love!!"]

Navya shouting : Really dad! Wow! I am so happy! Please say its not a dream. This is dream na?

Navya's father : Navya beta! Calm down bache. I know you are not believing but this the truth. I am so happy for you!

Navya was excited but when she saw Nandini she gets sad and talks to her dad.

Navya : Dad! I will not go to Mumbai. Bye. I will talk to you later on.

Navya father understood why she was saying this, so he decides to make her daughter understand and to help her.

Navya's father : One minute Navya. I know bache why you are saying this. But beta try to understand its important for your life beta. You always wanted to join space na?

Navya nods in agreement and just hmm.

Navya's father while continuing : So beta, go for it. Trust me with time everything will fall in place. I will try my level best to make Nandini's father understand. Okay? Now C'mon my love cheer up warna [or else] your soulie will give me some punishment for making you feel guilty sad. And I know you too will not want to make your father go through any of your soulie punishment. Right?

Navya smiles after hearing her father lovable words and his promise of making Nandini's father understand. She speaks after smiling.

Navya : Thank you dad! You are the best! I love you!

Navya's father : Love you too my love! Now enjoy and keep smiling! And don't worry about Nandini's bodyguard I will handle them. Bye my child!

Navya : Bye dad!

After disconnecting the call she saw Nandini and others. She got to know that everyone heard everything especially Nandini. She tried to say something but before that Nandini spoke, "So, when are you leaving for Mumbai?"

Navya in tears : Tintin!

Nandini while wiping her tears, "Batana bhi zaroori nahi samjha apni soulie ko?" ["You did't even bothered to tell anything to your soulie?"]

Navya : Aisa nahi hai! [It's nothing like that!] I always wanted to tell you and to go with you all. But I..I am sorry Tintin!

Nandini while sushing her and hugging her, "Shhh Navu! Never say sorry to me, and why you are saying sorry Navu. You are not in any fault, it is my destiny Navu."

Nandini speaks after breaking the hug and wiping the tears and looking at others who were in tears already, "And guys, its your life. Don't waste it because of me. Never feel guilty because of me guys. You all are my friends and I don't want that my friends suffer because of me. Please guys! For me! And moreover i am very happy for you all! Okay?"

After listening to Nandini, Manasavi was first to come and hug Nandini and says, "You are the best PARI!! I love you Ms BFF!"

Rohit too came saying, "Kya yaar pari, rula diya. But one thing is true you are the bestest!! Love you re!!" ["What yaar pari, you made us all cry. He too joins the hug. But one thing is true you are the bestest!! Love you re!!"]

One by one all comes and shares the group hug and promise to enjoy their last trip to the fullest.

Present!

Navya reaches to her tent and falls on bed and cry. Manasavi and Gunjan who were sitting in Navya's tent saw this and runs to her and asks her, "What happened Navu? Why are you crying? Please say something Navu! Navu?"

On other side, In Sagar & Rohit's tent, Sagar receives call from Manik, when he was playing his guitar and thinking of incident which happened in afternoon. He receives call in one ring and speaks joyfully.

Manik and Sagar phone conversation.

Sagar : Hello Bhai! How are you? You know what I was just thinking about you only.

Manik : Hey champ! Whats up? I am fine. You say?

Sagar : I am toh..what you guys say in Mumbai.. What was that. Yes. ZHAKKAS!! Poor me.. I too belong from same city but don't know their language.. Huh!

Manik laughing : Acha! ZHAKKAS and all ha? Hahaha.. good! Acha I have to tell you something! Don't worry champ, you will learn soon like my Gujju.. hehehe!

Sagar while tuning his guitar : Wo to hai, yes say!

Manik : Guess what? You have been selected for our DRAMATIC SOCIETY! My friends approved you. Congratulations bro!!

Sagar gets super happy and speaks, "Really bhai! Oh my god! I can't believe this! Thank you bhai. Thank you so much! This calls for a treat."

Manik feels happy and speaks, "Yes! It calls for a treat. Tu bas ek baar mumbai aaja fir party karte hai. Maasi is missing you champ!" ["Yes! It calls for a treat. You and Gunjan just come back to Mumbai then we will party. Maasi is missing you champ!"]

After hearing Mumbai, Sagar at once gets sad but doesn't show this and says, "Off course bhai! Jald aauga, abhi toh filhaal main aapki favorite place hu! Guess karo kaha ho sakta hu?" ["Off course bhai! I will come soon, but right now I am at your favorite place! Guess where I am?"]

Manik gets confused at once but later on shouts joyfully, "No..dont tell me. You are in rishikesh!! Damm champ. I miss that place bro. Chal koi na..Enjoy!"

Both Manik and Sagar were talking when Nandini enters in Sagar tent and calls his name, "Sagar?"

Manik hears Nandini's voice and asks Sagar, "Champ? Are you there?"

Sagar on call mouthing Nandini to wait for just two minutes on which she agrees.

Sagar : Yes bhai. I am here only! Bhai if you don't mind can I call you later. My friend needs me. Please!"

Manik agrees and says, "Yeah sure champ. Enjoy. Bye. See you later!"

Sagar : Bye bhai!

Sagar disconnects the call and turns around to see nandini but watches she is already fast asleep and thinks, "I will miss you Pari in Mumbai!!"

Location: Dhawan House, Mumbai!

After disconnecting the call, Manik moves towards poolside to inform his friends about his phone call with sagar but when he reaches there he saw Mukti, Cabir & Harshad usual nok-jhok. So he stops on gate only and thinks, "God! Not again. Why can't they let Mukti in peace. But I love them like this only. Please god! Always keep them like this only."

Screen freezes on Manik's peaceful face, Nandini's sleeping face and Navya's crying face with Manasavi & Gunjan tensed face.

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