|MaNanBir Joint FF| - DREAMERS (Chap 10 by Prats Pg 34) , 24 August - Page 22

Originally posted by: kirtimakhija11

Nirvi ... uh just chnged the equation babe... i just loved the chapter coz this times the turned uh gave to story is,uncommendable baby
.. i thorughly enjoyed,,, i,alwys wanted to write manik as a dark,person... but this tym i,regret my decision.,, but koi nahi... i loved the part.,, and yeah rahul make it more dark in,your part ... waiting for teju to write next.,,,, 😊

Thank you so much kirti.. .
I'm glad that you liked it. .. 😊


NISHU

Originally posted by: devilkhushi

Awesome update loved it

So manik played with nandini's is it so or truth is something less that he did said just to stop the fight between siblings

If manik did just to play around then he is highly mistaken because he is actual in love with nandini n now after this he won't be able to get his ladylove back

Nandini will hate him n that manik malohtra definitely deserve n regarding Cabir let get his true love in r

Let manik get pain n hurt by staying away from nandini let nandini leave everything n go do well in life become rich then let nandini ignore n hate n jealous manik to the core when he actually will be in hopelessly in love with nandini

Continue soon

Rahul can it will be possible for u to pm me always whenever u guys get a update in this story

Thank you so much dear. ..
Nd wow tumne to bahot sari lines dedi story k liye but now it's not in my hands as next writer will mold the story by them..
But thanks for suggestions. .. 😊



NISHU

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Omggg.. Yeh Kya kr diya .. Me Abhi bhi shock me hu sachiii..

Kya mind blowing twist hai Yaar... I'm like shocked .. Ni.. Ni.. Super shocked more than shocked..

But Sachi it was just too good.. Poori k poori story hi palat k rakh Di...

Next writer ki toh band bjne wali hai..heheh...

This story now after ur update has become my favt sachiii...

Thank u for this update

N sabke biggg wala thank u for actually starting this concept

This twist was epic .. Girl I've become a fan❤️

Hey thank you very very much mehak.. .
Dear your comments always make me feel like on cloud nine.. .really. ..
I mean you are my first fan.. .awww... 😊
Haha.. . 😆

Nd thanks for liking this story. ..
Nd I'm sure my other writer friends will give more twist in the story.. ..nd you will love it more by ever update.. .


Keep smiling


NISHU

Originally posted by: Tejamanaswini

Di I want to kill you

no I want to kill myself.

Kya bana diya storyline.

Oh gosh.

Anyways it was awesome update.

I so loved manan moments.

I loved everything about this.

Sorry for late comment.

Hwww...teju.. .
Tu aur prats dono meko marne me kyu lage ho.. .
I'm a good girl. ..
I will cry if you will kill me. .. 😭

Any ways thank you teju.. .for liking it. ..


NISHU

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Oh god..
It turned all 360 degree...
Manik became a bad guy...
Cabini shocked Manik rocked...
Waiting for next...
Luved it..
Thnx for pm..
Update soon..

Thank you very much pari.. .
For liking our joint story and the update. ..


NISHU

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Ye to pura turning point..
oh god.

m totally shocked ...
I don't like this bad manik..
But kya twist h boss..
Nandini is so hurt baby.
aww..
Cabir is also shocked.

waiting for next Update eagerly.
thanks for pm...
Keep Smiling ..

Thank you for liking our joint ff and the update. ..
Stay tuned for next updates.. .


NISHU

Originally posted by: nirvisha

Hey thank you very very much mehak.. .
Dear your comments always make me feel like on cloud nine.. .really. ..
I mean you are my first fan.. .awww... 😊
Haha.. . 😆

Nd thanks for liking this story. ..
Nd I'm sure my other writer friends will give more twist in the story.. ..nd you will love it more by ever update.. .


Keep smiling


NISHU

Originally posted by: nirvisha

T
Awww.. .. 😊
Thank you baby.. .
😊


NISHU

Originally posted by: nirvisha

Hwww...teju.. .
Tu aur prats dono meko marne me kyu lage ho.. .
I'm a good girl. ..
I will cry if you will kill me. .. 😭

Any ways thank you teju.. .for liking it. ..


NISHU