KY2 FF: Heartbeats (Chapter 4D updated + NOTE)

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Archana Vinod

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

"Never underestimate the pain of a person, because in all honesty, everyone is struggling. Some people are better at hiding it than others." - Will Smith

Something for Fab5 to remember for a very long time. Especially Manik. 😆

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Roshni S

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Archana_Vinod
"Never underestimate the pain of a person, because in all honesty, everyone is struggling. Some people are better at hiding it than others." - Will Smith
Something for Fab5 to remember for a very long time. Especially Manik. 😆

That is such a true statement! Thanks for the comment...

Will try and update soon😊

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Pooja2899

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

I never want manik & nandini as MANAN in this story.
just throwing an egg at a person or insulting them or showing Ur power to someone else is also very painful for d victim!!!!
I would really not call these PRANKS.
pranks are the things u do with Ur friends...NOT to bully someone or make someone cry.
I still cannot forgive fab5 or manik for whatever they did even in ky2 to others.
they are not fab5 , they are most disgusting 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
if shahid has something for mukti, then he is forced to commit suicide...but manik can always pull & push nandini & do whatever he likes????????
bohot logo ko life mai suffer karna pasta hai, par had koi toh monster nahi ban jata!!!!!
nandini k baare mai puchne me liye bhi they just pushed harshad... agar koi unke upar ek ungli bhi rakhe toh bhi they will make that person's life hell,!!!!!
PLS DONT TAKE THIS AS BASHING OR CRITICIZING, I WROTE WHAT I FEEL & ITS QUITE TRUE .
AGSR KOI SAME FAB5 KE SAATH AISA KARE JAISA UNHONE KIYA, TOH UNHE KAISA LAGEGA?????
CALLING SOMEONE INA WAREHOUSE & PUTTING HANDCUFFS IS DISGUSTING!!!!!
PLS DONT COVER THEIR MISTAKES BY SAYING THEY HAD IT ALL COVERED!!!!!
IM TIRED OF READING STORIES WHERE FAB5 BULLYING OTHERS IS ALWAYS IGNORED & CONSIDERED NO BIG THING. PLS SHOW JUSTICE.
WAITING EAGERLY FOR NXT UPDATE!!!!
CONT SOON.

Edited by Pooja2899 - 8 years ago

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Roshni S

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Pooja2899
I never want manik & nandini as MANAN in this story.
just throwing an egg at a person or insulting them or showing Ur power to someone else is also very painful for d victim!!!!
I would really not call these PRANKS.
pranks are the things u do with Ur friends...NOT to bully someone or make someone cry.
I still cannot forgive fab5 or manik for whatever they did even in ky2 to others.
they are not fab5 , they are most disgusting 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
if shahid has something for mukti, then he is forced to commit suicide...but manik can always pull & push nandini & do whatever he likes????????
bohot logo ko life mai suffer karna pasta hai, par had koi toh monster nahi ban jata!!!!!
nandini k baare mai puchne me liye bhi they just pushed harshad... agar koi unke upar ek ungli bhi rakhe toh bhi they will make that person's life hell,!!!!!
PLS DONT TAKE THIS AS BASHING OR CRITICIZING, I WROTE WHAT I FEEL & ITS QUITE TRUE .
AGSR KOI SAME FAB5 KE SAATH AISA KARE JAISA UNHONE KIYA, TOH UNHE KAISA LAGEGA?????
CALLING SOMEONE INA WAREHOUSE & PUTTING HANDCUFFS IS DISGUSTING!!!!!
PLS DONT COVER THEIR MISTAKES BY SAYING THEY HAD IT ALL COVERED!!!!!
IM TIRED OF READING STORIES WHERE FAB5 BULLYING OTHERS IS ALWAYS IGNORED & CONSIDERED NO BIG THING. PLS SHOW JUSTICE.
WAITING EAGERLY FOR NXT UPDATE!!!!
CONT SOON.

Okay don't worry. I won't take it to my heart as I know you wrote what you felt. And I wanna say that... I have this story planned, like how it'll go, how to execute it.

And I am telling you, the story gets better TRUST ME... I have everything figured out about how the story is going to proceed. I planned writing this Fan Fiction from last year, but not before figuring the story our, at least the basics like the start and the end... So as I said, it took me almost a year to start writing this...

I'm sure you'll like the next update. But my exams start day after tomorrow, so I might take some time to update it...

But thanks for you views anyways😊