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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: thilss



<font color="#990099">Cindy cindyyI asked from where u found that name ?? Like Shaurya in other stories here this Abhi kahan se mila Cindy??🤣or picked a random name ??😆</font>



I know teddy what u asked.. But I don't know what I replied.. Actually Abhi is a character in this show just like Shaurya in ZKM! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago


Thank you! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: keerthupranu

Yippeee...

Update after a lonnnggg time...
Anyways...That was a colorful and neat update...
Good one...
Take care dear...



Thank you @keerthu baby!! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks for pm
nice up
waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
after a long time update...
awsome update...
i think its harshad whom she is saying idiot n all...
manik is so much confuse to c nandini n her behavior...
i think abhi will come to knw abt alya...
its beautifully written...
loved d update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
will be back after reading
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: navla

after a long time update...
awsome update...
i think its harshad whom she is saying idiot n all...
manik is so much confuse to c nandini n her behavior...
i think abhi will come to knw abt alya...
its beautifully written...
loved d update...


Thank you @navla! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Confusion he confusion story bottom line pata nahi
New people keep coming in the scene
What will happen next u cant predict
Apart from the written no one can write this story
This story is awesome
Continue soon
Dont separate manan abe when they will meet
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devilkhushi

Confusion he confusion story bottom line pata nahi

New people keep coming in the scene
What will happen next u cant predict
Apart from the written no one can write this story
This story is awesome
Continue soon
Dont separate manan abe when they will meet



Even i m confused that what i m doing with this story😆
I know i can only writer this confusing story just like confusing soul like me🤣
On serious note thank you for my tareef😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 13!


Flashback!

Location : Manik's Quarters, Manali!

After Nandini leaves, Manik slowly comes towards Dadi and calls her, "Emm.. Dadi? Dadi gets scared with sudden call but composes herself and speaks, "Yes!" Manik was about to ask her something but Abhi started to scream horrified, "Dadi.. Pari.. She went out.. Alone.. TK is in town.. Oh My God!" and he runs out from there. Everyone were so shocked that they forgot that Nandini went all alone, Manik & Mukti too ran out behind Abhi leaving Dadi with kids and asks her to not to worry, they will be fine and will bring Nandini back as soon as possible, Dadi first denied but when Manik told her that if she will too come along with them then who will take care of kids.. they will get scared, Dadi understood his perception and agreed to stay back and told them to take care of themselves as its hilly area.. anything can happen here within seconds and to bring Nandini back safely.

Here Abhi reached towards Nandini's house and found it locked, he got tensed and thought Where she can go? In the meantime, Manik & Mukti too reached there and they too gets scared seeing lock at her house. Mukti speaks after seeing lock, "Oh Freak! Where she can go?"

Manik looking around, "I don't know! May be Orphanage? What do you say Abhi?" He looked at him who was lost in his own thoughts seeing Murthy's burnt house.

"Abhi.. Whenever you want to find me, then look for me in those hills.. Main tumhe waha mil jaugi!"

"Abhi.. I love those hills, they are my peace!"

Manik seeing Abhi lost in thoughts calls him, "Abhi?" Due to sudden call, Abhi trance gets broke and he looks at Manik and speaks, "Hills.." Manik gets confused from this, "Hills? Hills what Abhi?"

Abhi after taking deep breath looks towards opposite side and points towards a way which goes towards hills and speaks, "She went to those Hills.. They are her peace. Pari ko jab bhi akele rehna hota tha to wo waha chali jati thi.. And I am damm sure.. Today also she might have went there!" Manik looked at those hills where Abhi was poiting out and thinks that it can be possible, because for very first time he saw her there only. Mukti looks towards the path and speaks, "Are you sure Abhi? I mean this way is very dangerous and moreover its so dark out there. I think.." she was cut off by Manik, "Why not Mukti? She can go, after all its her hometown.. I think we should go and check over there. Do one thing, you go back to Dadi and kids.. While I and Abhi will go and search for her" He said all this looking at that lone and dark way which leads towards mountain areas. Abhi supported him, "Yes Mukti.. He is right, you go to Dadi and take care of her and kids, we will contact to you and don't worry we will be careful and will come soon taking Pari back. You go!"

On this Mukti refuses them, "No way Guys! I am coming with you.. I won't leave you guys alone.. got it!" and after saying this she makes a move towards that path but to be stopped by angry and frustrated Abhi who held her wrists and prevents her from moving and pulls her with a jerk and speaks sternly looking in her eyes, "Have you gone nuts Officer Mukti Vardhan? Why don't you understand? You can not come with us.. its dangerous out there for you. You will not be able to walk on this path. You don't have any idea about this place. So keep your mouth shut and go back to Dadi. Understood?" and leaves her with jerk and turns around to calm himself.

Mukti & Manik gets shock after seeing Abhi's this side for the very first time in all these 3 years, Mukti for the first time gets scared from Abhi and his actions and doesn't speak further and leaves towards quarters after looking at Abhi and Manik. He [Manik] assures her that they will be OK by blinking his eyes, she after getting assured leaves from there. After Mukti left, Abhi turns and hugs Manik tightly speaking, "I am sorry Manik for hurting her.. I am so sorry!"

Manik smiles on this and thinks, 'God! Why me always?' and hugs back him and says, "It's okay Abhi! Sometimes it happens dude.. Now come on, let's leave.. we have to find Nandini. Come!" Abhi broke the hug and speaks, "Thanks Manik for understanding. Let's go!" And after saying this, they both starts walking in that dark path in search of Nandini, by calling out her name and by dialing her phone again and again.

Here on other side, after leaving Manik's quarter Nandini starts moving towards Hilly areas in anger, forgetting that she is not well and on top of that TK is back in town, she in anger kept moving and after exactly 10 minutes realizes that what she is doing is wrong and should move back, but she in anger walked so fast that she lost her way and now she didn't know her way back towards her home, she takes out her phone but there was no network available. She curses herself for being so careless and gets frustrated and in frustration punches nearby tree with her left arm resulting more pain in her arm. She screams loudly on getting hurt and sit on ground holding her arm and speaks in anger, "Damm! Why? Why? Why? Why I have to be so angry? Aiyappa.. I am so stupid.. Now where should I go? What should I do now? Why it always happens with me? Dammm you Nandini!" After cursing her she stands up again with difficulty taking support of nearby tree and starts walking slowly in hope to find someone from whom she can take some help.

Location : Unknown Cottage, Manali!

A guy in his late 20's was sitting and was continuously trying to call someone but it seems that call was not reachable. He was getting tensed by each passing second on not getting the call connected and in tension and frustration throws the phone on nearby wall. Due to this, two person came out from another room and asks, "What happened?"

That guy speaks sitting back on sofa hiding his face, "Her phone is unreachable.. I don't

know where she went! God! I don't know what to do!"

On this those two other person smiles and among one of them come towards that guy and kneels down in front of him and speaks, "Don't worry Bhai.. She is NM.. Officer NM, Famous Intelligence Officer.. she knows her way out. Hmm!"

That guy smiles on this but gets worried again thinking what if she didn't came back and stood up and starts to leave. Seeing that guy leaving suddenly, same person from behind asks him, "Where are you going Bhai?"

That guy after wearing his jacket speaks, "To find her. I can't take risk or else Dad will kill me! Abhi too went out in search of her, I should go and find her before them.. and Please For God Sake don't say that.. Bhai this is not right.. You cannot leave like this.. This is not safe and blah blah blah.. Because Alya Baby this is my hometown too and i know this place very well and off course before leaving this place I want to meet her once, because as far as I know her she won't allow me to stay here for long so its necessary for me to meet her and moreover I don't want to waste time thinking that she will come and meet me because I know she won't.. And moreover I don't want to sit here and worry about her.. so its better for me to leave and to search her. I want to see her and to gave her this!" That guy spoke last line showing them a small little box wrapped in gift wrapping paper and leaves the cottage. Alya gets tensed and speaks, "Freak! Dhruv.. Stop him! Agar Di ko pata chala ki humne Bhai ko akele jaane dia to she will kill both of us after knowing that TK is back and its dangerous for him too to be alone at this hour!"

Yes! Those two persons were none other than Alya and Dhruv and the unknown cottage was their hideout. Dhruv too speaks wearing his jacket, "You are right! You know what.. You wait here... I'll go behind him. you just wait here and call Dadi and inform her about him. Okay? And yeah.. Don't open door to any stranger. I will be back.. Call me if you find something odd. Okay?"

Alya nods in yes and tells him to be careful, after Dhruv leaves, she closes the cottage doors and calls Dadi to inform about that guy.

Location : Manik's Quarters, Manali!

Mukti comes back to quarters crying thinking about Abhi's behavior and in Nandini tension. Dadi saw her coming and thinks that they found Nandini so she went to her running to ask her that they found her or not? But when she saw that Mukti is crying and is lost in her own world, she gets more worried and holds her from shoulders and asks her softly, "Mukti? Kya hua bache? Kyu ro rahi hai tu? Nandini mil gayi na? Abhi aur Manik kaha hai? Puttar bol na sab theek hai na? Nandini mil gayi na?"

Mukti comes out from her thoughts and realizes that she came back to quarters and is standing in front of Dadi who got more worried after seeing her condition she decides to calm her down, so she quickly wipes her tears and speaks, "Dadi.. Dadi.. Dadi calm down. Sab theek hai.. nandini nahi mili hai ab tak.. Par aap chinta mat karo.. Abhi aur Manik gaye hai usse dhoondne.. Wo log usse dhoond lege.. Aap rest kariye Please.. Aaiye andar chalte hai. Jab tak wo sab wapas nahi aa jate hume hi sabka dhyaan rakhna hoga.. Aaiye andar chalte hai!" Mukti tried to make Dadi understand but she denies and starts to moves out to find Nandini all alone but stops when she heard phone ringing, both Dadi and Mukti thought that it must be Nandini's call and she must be trying to contact with them, so they rushed inside to attend the call. Dadi receives the call without seeing Caller ID and gets more shock after hearing that HARSHAD BHAI IS IN MANALI AND HE WENT OUT TO SEARCH NANDINI DI IN HILLS!

Yes that guy was none other than Harshad Saxena, who came from Canada to Manali, just to meet Nandini on her birthday. He came here without informing her, just to surprise her, but he got surprised from Nandini only. That was Alya call to Dadi who called her to inform about Harshad being in Manali, after hearing to this Dadi speaks in shock, "What?" and starts feeling dizzy and in this she drops the phone. Mukti saw this and runs to her and holds her in time and prevents her from falling, she calls out all others to help her in making Dadi lay down on sofa.

Mukti after laying Dadi down on sofa, picks up her[Dadi] phone to find out that what Dadi heard due to which she fainted, but to her bad luck call got disconnected but she managed to save the number in her own mobile. She then asks Juhi to bring water and asks Kunal to bring something to eat from kitchen and also first aid box from drawers. She starts rubbing Dadi's hands and legs thinking that Whose call it might be? What Dadi heard on phone due to which she fainted? She was thinking all this when Juhi brought water to her, she took it from her quickly and sprinkle little water on Dadi's face to make her conscious.

Here on other side, Alya gets worried due to sudden chaos and cuts the call and moves out from cottage towards Manik quarter's to check on Dadi thinking about her, not before informing Dhruv about this.

Here on other side, Manki and Abhi continues there search mission for Nandini where Abhi after every 5 minutes call out her with different name like PARI, TINTIN, SUGAR, MICKEY, NANDU, TANNA... Manik every time smiles on this and asks him, "Abhi? Dude.. Bas kar yaar, kitne naam de rakhe hai tune apni behen ko?" Abhi smiles on this and speaks, "These names are not given by me Manik, these names are given by BIRA and HARSH to her.. I just call her Pari!" Manik gets confuse hearing this and asks him, "Who is BIRA and HARSH?" Abhi stops and looks at him and speaks, "Pari's Boyfriend!" Manik gets shock and speaks loudly, "What?" Seeing him reacting like this.. Abhi starts laughing loud and speaks, "Hahahahahaha Oh God! Manik.. Hahahahaha your reaction Hahahaha.. Dude they are her best friends Hahahahaha!" Manik stares at him angrily and runs behind him to teach a lesson but stops when they hear sound of gun being fired. They both gets shock and runs towards that direction from where that sound came.

Present!

After hearing his name HARSH from Manik.. Harshad chokes on his drink which he was having and starts to cough. Manik looks at him and rubs his back saying, "What happened Officer? You Ok?" Harshad closes his eyes and thinks, 'Freak! Abhi told him my name before.. God! Please Manik ko mere baare mein itni jaldi yaad na aa jaye.. Please God Please!' and after praying, he speaks, "Yeah Sir.. I am fine! You continue.. I will be good!" Manik just hmm on this and continues, "Hmm! After that Officer.. We both ran towards that direction only to see that... "

The end!

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Cliffhanger! Ouch! Hahahaha.. I so love it to end this part here only Hehehehe. Hello Amigos! How are you all? I hope you enjoyed this part.. NO? Bwahahahahah! *evil laugh*

Keep thinking What will happen next? Will they find Nandini? Who shot gun? How they will find Nandini? Will Mukti able to know about Alya and that phone call? Think.. Think.. And let me know! *wink wink*

This update is dedicated to @manan_eku! Thank you so much bacha for your constant support.. Love you!

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See ya!


Edited by CinderellaGirl - 8 years ago

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