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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta6767

Superb update..
MaNan scenes was amazing lovely cute.. 😳
Alya Abhi's sister and Nandini's informar great..
What happened to next 🤔
Update soon



Thank you!! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey cherry,...

pls don't kill me for late comment...u know my situation right now...

a big very ig sorry itna late comment karne ke liye...

and vaise kehne ki to jarurat nahi hai kyunki as usual update bahut mind blowing tha

dheere dheere sab secrets reveal ho rahe hai...

manik is so angry and hurt

and mukti ko bhi sab pata tha already nandu ke baare mein

nandu ke arm mein kya prob hai itna to pata chal gaya hai k uski arm puri tarah se cure nahi hui...

nandu ne bahut ache se handle kiya manik ko...

their moments were a pure bliss...

so alya and dhruv bhi nandu ke saath hai and abhi ko kuch nahi pata ab tak,...

nandini ne aisa kya soch rakha hai ab

ye itna kuch unke b'day pe hi kyu hota hai...

so tk is back

now the real fun will began

very excited to read further

update soon cherry

loved it

update soonish

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 12


Flashback!

Location : Manik House, Manali!

Everyone were sitting and chit chatting having Hot Chocolate when suddenly Abhi asked the most unexpected question from Nandini, "Pari, Where is Alya?" She got choke on her drink and looks at him with horrified face and then at Dadi who was equally horrified. When she didn't replied to him, he nudged her, "Say na? Kaha hai Alya?"

Nandini gulps down her saliva, she starts thinking What she should tell him that where is his little doll, whether she should tell him that his little doll is now her secret informer. She was thinking all this when she received a call from Alya itself. She quickly excused herself saying IMPORTANT CALL. MukBhi and Manik became suspicious and looks at Dadi who passed them small smile and starts playing with Karthik.

Nandini comes in a corner and sighs and receives the call, "Hello!"

Alya : Hello NM! It's me Alya!

Nandini : I know that Alya! Why are you calling me again and again? Any problem?

Alya : Yes! TK is back and tomorrow he is coming to Shakuntla Orphanage for some donation type programme.

Nandini gets shocked after hearing this and speaks loudly gaining everyone attention, "What? You have got kidding me Right? Tomorrow? Orphanage? Are you sure?"

Alya expected this reaction only from her so she spoke, "Calm down NM! Yes information is right and I think Dhruv already informed you about him. So don't react and yeah I have got a surprise for you!" She said last lines happily. Nandini gets confused from her last lines and speaks sarcastically, "Here I am getting tensed thinking about tomorrow and you are talking about surprises. Like seriously!" Everyone present at hall was looking at her each and every reaction but no one disturbed her.

Alya laughs out loud and handovers phone to someone, "Hello Babes!" A different voice came from other side to Nandini. She at once recognized that voice and starts speaking angrily, "What the hell? You donkey, monkey, stupid, idiot, and.. Huh! Forget it! What are you doing in Manali? What are you doing with her? When did you came?" She again said it loud, this time Abhi goes towards her and stood behind her. She saw his reflection on window mirror and shut her eyes tightly on getting caught. She turns around and passes a lame smile to him, but he stares at her with his one eye raised asking What is going on? She nods in No, but he snatches the phone from her and starts talking, "Hello!"

Nandini covers her face and looks at Dadi who was already looking at them horrified, she tried to take her phone back from him, "Abhi? What the hell? Give me my phone back. It's my phone call not yours!" She said loud all this so that she can inform person on other side about Abhi.

Abhi tried to talk but before he can speak further Nandini snatched her phone back and cuts the call. He gets confused by her behavior and asks her, "Kiska call tha? Kya hua? Why are you so horrified? Baat kyu nahi karne di mujhe? Alya kaha hai? Kaun hai Manali mein? Kisse gaaliyan de rahi thi?" He asked her all questions in one go, she gulps her saliva and speaks, "Friends! Abhi friends ka call tha. They don't know about you na so" She tried to cover up but Abhi held her left arm and this time asks her sternly, feeling that she is hiding something, "What is happening Pari? Speak up!" and presses her left arm softly but this results into her shriek in pain. She screams badly and Abhi immediately left her after remembering about her injury, she holds her left arm and sit with thud on floor crying loudly. Abhi gets scared and everyone else rushes to her, her left arm was already dark blue because of Manik hold and now it turned more bluish. After reaching to her Dadi kneels down and took crying Nandini in her arms and asks Kunal to call the doctor soon. Manik and Mukti stood their hell shocked seeing her in that condition, Manik felt guilty and tries to say something but Abhi starts speaking kneeling down in front of Dadi and Nandini, "Oh Shit Pari! I am sorry.. main bhul gaya tha tere injury ke baare mein.. I am so sorry!"

Nandini still in Dadi arms crying, "No need to say sorry Abhi.. it's normal.. thand mein ho jata hai kabhi kabhi I am okay.. it's just that main aaj baarish mein bheeg gayi isliye shayad yeh.. but you don't worry I will be.." she was unable to say more as it started to pain more and she cried more. Dadi sush her saying, "Chup.. bilkul chup kar aur jhoot bolna band kar.. Chal bata kaise lagi?" Nandini smiles still in pain and speaks, "Kya Madhubala? Abhi ke haathon bali chadwani hai kya meri aapko?" Dadi and all others looks at her in disbelief specially Manik after seeing her reacting like this when she was in so much pain. Abhi after hearing all this shouts on her dramatically, "Madhubala! Keh do iss gustaak se hume inse baat nahi karni hai, door ho jaye humari nazron se!" After hearing this Mukti just wanted to bang his head on some wall and Manik in deep shock. Hahahaha poor Manik never saw Abhi's this side, he always had seen him in serious look, never got any chance to look real Abhi but Mukti she always knew about him and his behavior.

Nandini too states dramatically, "Hawww! You.." but fails to say anything further after seeing Manik and Mukti face and shut her mouth. Dadi speaks, "Rabba! Main kya karu inn dono ka? Menu bacha le inn dono se Rabba!" On this Abhi and Nandini makes faces and Mukti starts to laugh and Manik poor soul decided to stay quiet.

After exactly 15 minutes Kunal brought Doctor with him till then Dadi scolded Nandini for being careless towards her left arm. Doctor after examining her left arm, "Ms Mishra.. What happened with your hand? Aapko koi chot lagi thi kya inn dino?" On this she looks at Manik who was already looking at ground, she speaks, "No Doctor! Mujhe koi chot nahi lagi!" Manik immediately looked at her surprised and was about to say something but then doctor asks her confused, "Then? What happened? She continued, "I mean Doctor.. Lagi thi na chot.. Aaj hi lagi thi.. Wo main baarish mein bhaag rahi thi to slip ho gayi thi!"

After listening this Doctor gets angry, "Have you gone mad Ms Mishra? Aap apne left arm ki condition janti hai na? Aaj to bach gaya yeh but aage ka kya? Agar zyada chot lag jati to aap jaanti hai na aapka left arm hume.." Nandini didn't let him complete and speaks sternly, "I know that very well Doctor! Aap yaha mujhe treat karne aaye hai.. Don't act like my guardian. Get it! Aur ab agar aapka kaam ho gaya ho to aap yaha se jaa sakte hai. Dadi pay him!" After saying this Nandini left from there towards her home in anger.

Everyone gets shocked after seeing her reacting like this, well Dadi and Abhi already knew why she reacted like this but it was new for Manik and Mukti. They were surprised, shocked, confused and most of it suspicious that why the hell she was behaving so weirdly. Dadi pays the doctor only after asking him about her medicines. After getting free of him she looks at Nandini and thinks, 'Mat kar yeh sab Puttar.. kuch haasil nahi hoga tujhe yeh sab kar ke.. aakhir mein dard tujhe hi hoga. Rabba! Kuch kar iss kudi ka!"

Screen freezes on Nandini's angry face, Dadi and Abhi's tensed face and Manik-Mukti confused faces.

xxx

Hello everyone!

After a long time updated any story. I don't know whether you remember this story or not but still I will wait for your reviews. Many of you asked me Why Abhi didn't knew about Alya? Well guys I know about that but trust me you will get to know.. As in this part he already asked Nandini about her, very soon I will reveal why he didn't knew anything about Alya whereabouts.

What do you guys think who is new person on board? What that person is doing in Manali? How is that person associated with Nandini? Why Nandini was so angry from that person?

This update according to me is not that up to date but still I will love to hear from you all. Pardon me for any mistake.

Don't be a silent reader!

See ya!


Edited by CinderellaGirl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey princi I have read chap 1... It's beautiful...Will let u know once I finish the story...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wowww awesomeee suprrbbb prt
Nandu ne gaaliyan kisko di...cabir ya harshad...thnx for pm me...manik tujhe kch smj nhi aayega...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Wowww awesomeee suprrbbb prt
Nandu ne gaaliyan kisko di...cabir ya harshad...thnx for pm me...manik tujhe kch smj nhi aayega...lovd it...continue soon



Thank you @dhillon90 i thought koi comment hi nahi karega! Ur words meant a lot to me! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi Cindyy

Good n interesting reading it was. Anyhow was wondering who is Abhi throught the whole piece of updation. From a serial or just a random pick ?? Keep cont'ing. 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: thilss



<font color="#990099">Hi Cindyy</font>

<font color="#990099">Good n interesting reading it was. Anyhow was wondering who is Abhi throught the whole piece of updation. From a serial or just a random pick ?? Keep cont'ing.👏</font>



Thank you teddy!!
I m glad u loved my work! :)
Abhi is nandini cousin! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CinderellaGirl



Thank you teddy!!
I m glad u loved my work! :)
Abhi is nandini cousin! :)



Cindy cindyy I asked from where u found that name ?? Like Shaurya in other stories here this Abhi kahan se mila Cindy?? 🤣 or picked a random name ?? 😆
Edited by thilss - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yippeee...
Update after a lonnnggg time...
Anyways...That was a colorful and neat update...
Good one...
Take care dear...

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