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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta6767

Awesome and also funny update
Poor Cabir...gabber banne chala tha aur ghost samjh ker pit gya 🤣

Thanks...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manan_eku



Your welcome .

And you deserve it an done than this. ..!:)

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Posted: 9 years ago
when you will update,, eagerly waiting to read further, please update soon,
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kavitamoolimani

when you will update,, eagerly waiting to read further, please update soon,

I WILL...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry wala sorry guys...but I m really busy with my tests...papa won't allow me to touch my laptop...😭😭...that's why I m being irregular...U guys can SUE me for this...😭😭Anyway let's move on to story...😃

CHAPTER 12

It was the day of baby's naming ceremony and we were heading towards Dhruv's place. I glanced at Nandu who was staring outsideManik:her nose was sticked to the window and giggling over the scenes outside

Manik: " Nandu hoh gaya...itna chipko mat...log kya kahenge
I muttered while she turned to me and showed her teeths

Nandu: Kuch toh log kahenge...logo ka kaam hai kehna
She sang and I blinked my eyes at her in horror...😲😲From where did she learned all this...must be Cabir or...I don't know...

I parked my car outside his house and hopped out. I walked and opened the door for her while she exclaimed thank you and swing her green gown around.

NANDINI'S GOWN

I entered inside holding her and everyone greeted me with full smile while I just nodded as always. Dhruv and Alya came towards us with their baby and greeted us with full grace

" Manik...who is she..." Alya asked staring at Nandu who hid behind me immediately clutching my blazer tight

Manik:" She's Nandini...yeh meri
I stopped in mid scratching my head while they waited for my answer

Nandu: Girlfriend...mai Manik ko girlfriend hu
She mumbled smiling at me while I coughed for a moment and Dhruv n Alya smiled at me...they left winking at me while I turned to her with frown expression

Nandu: Ghoor kyu rahe hoh...Cabir nai bola...ushne kaha agar koi bhi puche ki who are you then bolna Manik ki girlfriend hu...
She mumbled while I wanted to rip off Cabir's head right there...😡

The Ceremony was about to start.we were seated in respective places. Suddenly my eyes felled on a fatty figure. Ohh no...😲what the hell that fatty Monty is doing here...😡😡I turned to Dhruv and shooted a sharp glare to him

Manik: " Woh aadmi koh jaanta hai tu 😡
I asked and he shrugged and told that Fatty was one of his relative. I cursed something beneath my breathe and as expected his eyes felled upon us and he waved his hands on Nandu...

Nandu: Ohh terry...😲Monty...😃Monster Manik...can I go and sit with him...😳
She asked and I nodded in complete no. She made a puppy face while I angrily wrapped my arm around her and pulled her close to me glaring at Fatty who gulped his saliva and turned away to his fortunate

Once the ceremony got started Nandu looked at the baby and her face got even softened. She glanced at the baby silently yet passionately and lot's of care and love in her eye's. I poked her but she didn't even moved a inch.

Manik: " Nandu...ceremony khatam...baby ka name rakh liya
I said and she came out of her trance. She wrapped her arms around me and sniffed silently

Nandu: I miss my mommy Monster Manik...😭😭😭
She whispered lowly and hung her face while I rubbed her back and kissed her hair softly.



We were having our meal...as usually Nandu was eating from my own hands and I was speaking about random stuff trying to cheer her mood but still she looked sad and pale...all of the sudden her stamina had gone weak and it was bothering a lot now

Manik: " Nandu...kya hua...theek sai khana tak nahi khaya tumne...all okay ???
I asked dragging her in corner and she hung her face lowly while I raised her chin up angrily and she sobbed looking at me

Manik: " Don't tell...you need a baby right now...!!!
I asked pissed off while she nodded in no turning away from me

Nandu: Princess Nandini misses her mommy...she wants to go back to her land..😒
She mumbled and I clutched my fist bit angrily

Manik: " You wanna leave Monster Manik alone here...
I asked and she turned to staring at me with soft teary eyes

Nandu: Yesha nahi hai...par daddy needs me there...pata nahi kab tak rahungi yaha...I need to go back
She mumbled while I turned away from her

Manik: " Yeah...Yeah...mujhse peecha chutana hai...I know...tuhmare liye jitna karo utna kam hain...Monster Manik sai jyada tumhe Monty Sonty aur Trishna sai milke khusi milti hain...anyway as you wish...who cares
I mumbled and left while she didn't called out for me which pissed me even more

I had asked Cabir to keep Nandu...sorry Nandini to with him for while and my part...I again went to my lonely mansion and rushed towards my bedroom

Manik: " Mana she needs to go back some day but Monster Manik ko v bhi saath chahiye...and all joh bhi expect kiya...she spoked nothing...ushhe sirf wapas jana hain...😭😡
I muttered taking off my tie harshly and threw ir away. I took off my shoes and lye down on the bed trying to gain sleep which was far away



Next morning I woke up stretching my arms and found something or someone beside me. I turned and saw her sleeping close to me. I coughed and tried pushing her away but she tightened her grip and opened her eye's

Nandu: Sorry wala So Sorry Monster Manik...😒
She whispered holding her ears while I angrily stood up and sat palming my face

Nandu: Ghussa kyu karte hoh...Princess Nandini is sorry for her mistake...you can sue me par tuhme pehle king yaani mere Daddy sai permission leni hogi...then you cab sue me 😒
She said placing her head on my back

Manik: " Ek baap sai permission lu...Can I sue you're daughter...whaa..!!!
I muttered nodding in disbelief while she came in front and lyed on my lap with puppy face

Nandu: Monster Manik maan jao naa...I'm really sorry wala so sorry
She said while how long could I hold. I smiled pulling her cheeks while she happily hid inside me...😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
Cute update...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely part
please continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lo mein a gayi bade dino bad 😃 thanks for the pm dear 😛
Chapy was as usual great muje princess ki dress achhi lagi yaar nandhu manik ki girlfriend wow cabir baba ki jai ho 👏 Jo nek gyan unho ne princess ko diya great manik tho fatty se an bi naraz he yaar nandhu wants to go back to her land and manik become angry on her haye kya baat he but again our princess ne mana hi liya apne monster manik ko or monster b kitne der tak princess se gussa rahta ye hui na meri carzu ka update just like her cutie and funny
Come back n update soon dear luv u.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Continue soon
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing awesome..,
Manik is getting possessive ABT her.. She dosnt know what she actually wants

Lovly update
This story is just too good
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