MANAN FF-BLACK MOON CHAPTER 27 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
what was that nandini s mom hiding from nandini


why she s sending her like this

so much susepnce ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update loved it so nandini condition tell she is a vampire I hope manik n nandini meet up soon n nothing bad to nandu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The concept is really good and I love supernatural stories...pls do continue ...the response will be better frm nw on...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 3

I never knew life could be so boring and slow, this train journey surely made me realise this. It had been forever now since i was in this train and dhanaulti was yet to come. I really never considered myself a joyous person, i knew i was boring and may be thats why i never got bored, but this journey crushed my belief into pieces. Letting out a sigh i took out the pamphlet that mom had given me yesterday about that whatever school..MOM!!! i just couldn't get her words out of my head. Nodding my head a bit to shake off those thoughts i engrossed myself into that small pamphlet and started to read its content out loud. St. Georges Academy was built in the year 1889 in the city of dhanaulti by a group of Irish brothers. The school tries to bring out the deep hidden talents of the students and help them explore their lives. Our very first aim is to make the student feel comfortable and therefore we out rightly discard the very concept of uniforms. COOL!!!shouted my brain...We sincerely have no trust on books and believe that life experiences are better teachers, but to help our students compete and survive we do teach the students the syllabus prescribed by the government and are strongly against the idea of homework. I AM ALREADY LIKING THIS SCHOOL...We have four houses in which the students are divided which actively participate in inter houses competitions. Last but not the least our school motto is- BELIEVING IS LIVING. No doubt the school seemed pretty much awesome but i was still coping up with my haunting old school memories. It was evening when i reached dhanaulti. Mom was right, it was pretty cold there but my body heat was just enough for me and i was fine without a sweater. Unlike many people in the station i was unaware of where to go, mom did give me the address to my home, but how was i supposed to manage on my own? I was busy cursing my destiny when i reached the exit and found a man with my name written on a paper. No doubt mom had planned this all...i approached that man who seemed busy trying to recognise the person he was supposed to pick up among the crowd. ahem!!! hello, my name is nandini...i think you are here to pick me up. "ohh, hello ma'am, good evening, myself bahadur, and yes i am here to pick you up, plz come with me.." and in a giffy he took my suitcases and took me to a small car. The drive from the station to my so called home was quite long. Dhanaulti was a beautiful place with mist everywhere, but something irked me, all these places, they seemed so familiar. I loved the chilly and rainy weather here, and the huge trees and greenary everywhere. Bahadur pulled over to some old house. The next thing that happened shocked me, i had a dejavu and i could swear on virgin Mary that i had been here before. The place was serene, a small hilly house surrounded by woods all over, and that mist clouding the garden seemed like heaven and i knew i had been here. You must wondering who am i right ma'am, i am the housekeeper of this house, a cook and the maid too. Your dinner is ready...and i dont want to scare you ma'am but please be careful. This area in particular has had many unfortunate incidents...mostly because of the woods and the beasts it is home to...i would like to take your leave now..". Bahadur's words were something, he was not telling me to be cautious, he was kind of warning me! This seemed weird, why would he warn me? And why would he call wild animals beasts? I was confused and scared now, either bahadur was a person who talked in metaphoric tone and was simply informing me, which was was quite unlikely for an uneducated man like him, or there was something wrong with this place, and my gut feeling said, the latter had more probability.

NANDINI'S HOUSE:


The house was small but to me it seemed gigantic. It was perfect for couples, but over here i was all alone and the eeriness of the place made it look more scary than pretty. The house was pretty old and on one of the walls something was engraved. I looked closely to realise that the engraving said-MARRIAGE QUARTERS 1897. Tired from the long journey i quickly finished the dinner which was absolutely delicious and went to sleep. Memories of my old house and mom covered my eyes, the scene soon shifted and again it was that nightmare. It was same as always, it seemed like i was small and playing with something, then a blury face of a woman told me to go out, i was playing when suddenly there was fire from nowhere and as always i opened my eyes. My breaths were heavy and idk if it was because of the exhaustion or something, but that dream had something more intense this time, something more scary than what i felt in Delhi. I knew it was a sign, i always had. I still remember when we visited a doctor who said it would go away beacuse i was just too scared to explain it to him, we returned to our home and after gathering all of my courage i asked mom if any of our houses had been caught up with fire ever, or if i had had such an incident. Mom denied at once and when i told her my dream, she was shocked, scared and angry i think, she scolded me for making up things and told me to forget it. I was just 8 at that time and since then i have never had a word with mom regarding this dream, she knew i still encounter them, but she simply ignored them just the way she ignored my other abnormal bodily functions. I was thinking about this when a wolf's cry broke my chain of thought. I had never encountered any such thing and obviously i was scared, but that curiosity or rather that attraction in that voice compelled me to peep out of my window to find nothing at all...It was getting difficult now, i had a pile of questions to be answered, and all these things and that dejavu that i felt with almost everything that caught my eyes was making this place even more eerie than i had expected.


THANQ EVERYONE FOR THE AWESOME RESPONSE. I HAD NO IDEA ONE WOULD HELP ME SO MUCH. BUT HONESTLY I AM SORRY FOR THAT RESPONSE. I PROMISE I WOULD CONTINUE THIS STORY EVEN IF I GET A POOR RESPONSE, BUT THIS SHOULD NOT PROHIBIT YOU ALL FROM LIKING MY STORY AND TO COMMENT TOO, AT LEAST NOT FROM LIKING.
Edited by deepanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
I appreciate your writing skills and liked the story start a lot.
I'm glad you described about emotions and added intensity to the chapters. Glad I came across this. But just a small suggestion that please don't compare your work with others, I get it how you feel but all I know is you are better, better than what you thought. Sorry if u felt bad I just want u to believe in yourself. Sorry again but I honestly loved your work and a small question is your story on wattpad too?
Sorry o
If your hurt, didn't mean to.
Regards,
Teja Manaswini
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nandini reached her place

why bahadur warned her like that ???????????


amazing work
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing chap dear
Finally nandu reached her place..
Surely this place is a mystery
Eagerly waiting for next update
Tysm for pm

Keep smiling
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Nyc update...
So many of mystry!! Hmmm... So finally our Nandu :- Combo of heat nd cold.. is where she belongs to... Nd what abt of those beasts...? I thnk they r Manik & Gang... I guess...!
Well.. It's an awsm update.. Luvd it.. Keep going & be blessed!! :) :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys its my birthday today and m really really happy so just one request, many comments for just today, it will be the best gift ever..plz
CHAPTER 4

The day's exhaustion was so much that i had a sound sleep after that nightmare. It as 5:30 in the morning when i woke up, the fresh breeze embraced me in its chilly arms, i just loved this. I quickly freshened up and came down. I was descending down the stairs when i heard the door knob click and saw bahadur enter. Good morning ma'am. I hope you had a sound sleep yesterday, i will just make your breakfast. I smiled at his concern. Thank you bahadur bhaiya, i had a lovely sleep, just one request, call me Nandini, not ma'am, you are elder to me, plz. Shock was written on his face, i wondered why was it so, his shock soon changed into a wide smile and he slightly nodded and entered the kitchen to prepare breakfast for me. I changed into my cloths, i think looked presentable and came down to have my breakfast. School was supposed to start at 7, it felt weird and bad, had i been in Delhi right now, i would have been chilling in my room, but here i still had to go for school, i really was longing for good vacation this year and i had to shift. I was thinking about random stuff, something that i luvd when i realised that i didnt know where and how far my school was. The biggest problem just gave me a surprise visit...how the hell was i supposed to go to school. Thankfully bahadur bhaiya came to my rescue, he told me mom had already appointed a driver for me. How the hell was mom managing all these expenses? My mind screamed out, something was fishy. I walked towards the driver who seemed really aged, he passed me a warm and big smile. Hello beta! how are you? do you remember me? I used to take you for drives when you were a kid. Now this was hell surprising, i had never been to Dhanaulti, how the hell would i know him. He understood my delima. Probably not! you were really small that at time, i still remember how much u used to trouble your mother. Come on man! one more surprise, m not liking this. Mom? you know my mom? "of course i do, she was a lovely woman,a sweet heart indeed, she appointed me as your driver that evening...ohh that evening changed everything. I still remember that smile she gave me before she... and i could not hear what he had to say further because bahadur bahiya's loud yell interrupted us. Shyamlal !!!! do what you have been appointed for...nandini is getting late for school..dont waste your time on stuid gossips, leave now. The driver, shyamlal, was not just scared but hell scared of bahadur and i could sense it. He quickly asked me to take a seat, all through the wayi tried hard to make him say what he would have had bahadur bhaiya not interupted, but he simply and easily changed the topic everytime. School wasnt very far, we reached there on time and the very view of the school blew my head off
SCHOOL:
http://www.happytrips.com/photo/msid-26216230,width-96,height-65.cms
( plz do see it, its beautiful)
the school was magnificent, i believed that these thing never existed but this place proved me wrong. I was spell bound by its beauty and aura, a place like this was next to impossible to find in Delhi. I was staring at school and entred it. It was more than just beautiful, those British architecture just made it eternal. I reached the receptionist who told me where my class was, but thanx to this huge school, i found myself to be lost. I was still trying to find my way out when a husky voice startled me. Looking a way out?. I turned around to meet a pair of smokey grey eyes and a handsome face. The guy had very sharp features and an attractiveness in his voice and i would be lying if i said that i wasnt attracted to him. I never felt a thing about any guy in Delhi but this man was already making me feel weak on my knees. Gathering myself i replied. I think yes." " well then you just met the right person, m always there for girls in need, with a beautiful smile" And in a giffy he snatched the paper in my hands on which my class was written . " Ohhh wow!! you are in my class, nice to meet you, my name is Aryaman Khurrana." " hi, i am nandini". he looked at me and smiled, and i did the same. " come lets go, we are already getting late.". " yeah" i replied and started to follow him like a lost puppy. I was trying hard to remember the land marks to find my way out. The classroom was serene. My class teacher seemed really interactive and friendly, unlike Delhi and to my shock even the students were pretty much welcoming comparatively. I didnt even realise when four periods passed and it was finally time for recess. I was wondering what to do when Aryaman approached me and insisted i joined him, and i was more than happy to do so. We entered the canteen which was huge in comparison to that in my old school and surprisingly i realised that everyone interacted with everyone, no gang thing was prevalent here like that found in Delhi. The way people interacted with Aryaman gave me a hint that probably he was a popular child and i expected him to sit with the huge group, but instead he led me to a table where a group of four people were sitting. I really never liked meeting new people, it always made me nervous, may be because i was an anti social person thats why, whatever may the reason be, right now i really wanted Aryaman's frnds to accept me and like me, idk why, but i just did. his group comprised of two girls and two boys. Hey guys, meet the new student of St Georges and my new and beautiful friend Nandini. The way Aryaman introduced me to his frnds made me feel a lot of things.And Nandini these are my frnds and my family. This is Abhimanue, he said pointing at a guy who had a very frndly aura and face and he quickly waved me a hi and i replied him with a small smile, this is Mukti, she seemed equally frndly like Abhimanue, she looked like a fashionista, this is madhyam, the guy had a stern face but seemed frndly and he passed me a quick smile and finally this is soha. Out of everyone in the group Soha seemed the most fierce, she had two piercing on her right eyebrow, three on her each ear,one on her lips and one on her nose. Her face showed that she wasnt very pleased to see me and unlike others passed me a frown rather than a smile. That made me feel bad. I took a seat amongst them. "So Nandini, where are you from?" " um.. i am from Delhi, Abhimanue" .."Really!!! i so want to visit Delhi once, i've heard there are many malls there, i really want good cloths" ...Mukti's reply made me smile. "So why did you shift Nandini?", Madhyam's question made me nostalgic and all those harsh memories flooded my mind, i was trying hard to find a suitable answer when soha's reply shocked me to hell. "May be her mother abandoned her !!" Her reply made me suspicious, i knew that was not a guess, how the hell did she know what happened with me. I was thinking of a reply and started to look here and there and saw Aryaman. His face said volumes about what he felt, he was angry and irritated and was continously looking at Soha. My stance broke when Abhimanue's sweet voice changed into a harsh and dislike tone," My lovely morning just got ruined, look whose here". I was facing Abhimanue and had to turn around to look at whom he was pointing at.
Edited by deepanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Sound Interesting...
I like it... 😉

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