#5 Vivah MaNan FF/THREAD 6 LINK-PG 1 - Page 33

Originally posted by: Vandyandy

Anjali THKS for the PM

AWESOME UPDATE

IM LIKING THE WAY NANDINI IS MAKING HERSELF ADJUSTED TO HER NEW HOUSE BEFORE WEDDING...

TAKING HER STUFF FROM HER HOUSE AND MAKING PLACE FOR THEM IN THIER ( MANAN'S) ROOM...

MANAN R BECOMING STRONGER DAY BY DAY...

GIVING SUPPORT TO EACH OTHER AT DIFFICULT TIME...

AAWWW!!!!! SO MANIK DECIDED TO GIVE A STOP TO HIS DREAMS HIS MUSIC...FELT BAD...

MUSCI SE ZYADA WOH APNI FAMILY SE PYAAR KARTA HAI...

WOOOAAA !!!!!! ITS BECOMING DIFFICULT FOR NANDU TO STAY AWAY FROM MANIK...HEHEHE

MANIK KA JADOO CHAL GAYA...

CRAP !!!!!! NANDU MANIK KA BIRHTDAY BHOOL GAYE THI...SHIT ...

NOW SHE HAS TO THINK FAST TO GIVE HIM A SURPRISE FOR HIS BIRTHDAY...

FUN ON THE WAY...

EXCITED..

WAITING

Originally posted by: Boomchelesa

Okk so last chap comment i gave it on whtpadd..i knw knw it was chotu sa comment..but sorry busy thi tht is why..! But i'll compensate it in this update 😉 haha

FREAAKKK...!! Thank you so much..!! It was sooo long update..!! And so brilliant..! This story has become my obsession..n u r resopnsible for it hehe..! 😛 But sachhi mein after this update i felt happy..it was diff & refreshing..!!

Starting u carried out really well.." Tumhi kahte hona would be better off hun tumhari..." Nandini has a beautiful way of making manik understand..! And then next..WHAT WAS THAT..??!! MANIK DID THT ACTUALLY.??!! 😭 One call & he dissolved his music dreams..in just a blink..!! Nandini shock mein..mai thi shock mein..!! But plsss manik ke dady ko koi akal do..!! But wht u showed here was a real thing..childrens carrier do suffer coz of parents somtyms..but whn the tym comes they realise it its too late..!! Good work ! 👏

And thank god Mr smith is good enough to give him chance in future..!! We still have OUR HOPE alive..!
😊

And nandu was not willing to leave manik..aww..!!! & then tht kisss & then tht 'baby' too good..!! The kiss was so hot..!!! Haha..! Nandini u r becoming bold day by day..aakhir fiance kiski hai..maanik bhool gaya.. 😆 So next nandni in malhotra mansion to arrange he stuffss..!! Her bonding with nyonika is the most overwhelming part of this story..!

Her equations changed with maniks dad..ye toh hona hi tha..josh mein log hosh kho baithte hai..!! Nandini being hurt is so sad..poor girl..! And then the the bedroom scene it is now one of MY FAVOURITE SCENE 😛 Itna achha lika tha yaar..it captivated me in manan magic..

From the starting whn he embraced her..wooww..thn nuzzling his nose in her hair..haee..caressing her back..shitt..& then those kisses on her neck..the entire sequence was flawlessly penned..!! Nandini cant wait to come in his life permenantly & manik cant wait for their 'First night' haha too good secene & thn blushing nandu..!

And then they both saying those lines romantically & fell on bed..!! Out of the box idea u have..Superrrbb..!!! A lovely scene.! And then even after 3 months she knws he is still in pain..nandu tries boosting him again for music..but alas..manik has moved on..!! Like i said i still have hope..without music our manan is incomplete..its the intergral part of manan's magic..!!

And mukti & nandi scene...sweet & simple..!! Ans those pics were awesome..nandini manik ka B'day bhool gayii..!!! Damn kya nandu..!! Well m excited to see spicy & juicy stuffs thoda romantic thoda sweet..!! This update i loved it totally..!!! Update soon.!

God bless u

Originally posted by: Srinivas2808

Hello

Sry I was late as I have School

Nd exams also...ufff

Okay cumin to the update...it was fabulousss

Loving the way nandu is supporting manik

She's so lucky to have him as her life partner

Manik is trying to change...I hope ki manik's dad understand him

Offo nd then manan' romance...I like the u write these scenes

Nandini is becoming bold day by day...hahahhaahahha...

Liked the way of bonding of nyonika mukti nd nandini

Room decor is so nyc...I mean awesome

I think anant shld apologize to nandini

But he is bigger than her...I can understand

Nandini has so much understanding nature

Manik has become so much busy...hope he gets used to tat kind of wrk

Nd nandini understands his sadness inside him...how nyc nd sweet

Loved the way how ur proceeding ur stry

Much happy as their marriage is cumin near

Excited to ur futher parts dear

Thnx for the pm

Cont soon

Take care

Lots of love...!!!!

😊

Originally posted by: assuuu

Wat honf btw nandi I nd manik dad...
Did I miss any part...


Lv der romance...
Maniks bitlrthday...
Hm...
I think she will giv his music back..
Cnt soon

Omggg anjali..!! First of all by considering me as one of ur fav reader u make me feel special..!! Thanx a ton for tht..!! 😊 And of course m so addicted to this beautiful work of urs..tht lamba comment toh banta hai boss..!!

Okk so i wanted to comment this but ni kiya tht..the 24 chap whn i read i felt it lil bit slow type...the way u used to write initially was missing in tht chap ONLY..! But whn i read the next chap & thn 25(B)..!! And then i felt this..yess this is anjali's style chap..this is how she writes..!! You have a certain way of writing which i like & i felt it tht tym tht it was missing..!! But trust me i loved the latest chap alottt.! Keep up the good work..!!

Love
Aisha

Originally posted by: Boomchelesa

Omggg anjali..!! First of all by considering me as one of ur fav reader u make me feel special..!! Thanx a ton for tht..!! 😊 And of course m so addicted to this beautiful work of urs..tht lamba comment toh banta hai boss..!!

Okk so i wanted to comment this but ni kiya tht..the 24 chap whn i read i felt it lil bit slow type...the way u used to write initially was missing in tht chap ONLY..! But whn i read the next chap & thn 25(B)..!! And then i felt this..yess this is anjali's style chap..this is how she writes..!! You have a certain way of writing which i like & i felt it tht tym tht it was missing..!! But trust me i loved the latest chap alottt.! Keep up the good work..!!

Love
Aisha

Originally posted by: anjali_dimples

thanx Aisha.

yes i know. the chapter you are saying which seems slow, was came to my mind like an idea, so i just penned it down. i was not so sure about it, but i had to show it, all the time Manik's peace isnt matters right? Nandini's peace also matters. so that is why.

i am so sorry if you felt that.

but i am charged now, i will right the way i used to write, so dont worry.😊

No worries dear..being a writer u ought to explore certain stuffs..!

Originally posted by: Boomchelesa

No worries dear..being a writer u ought to explore certain stuffs..!

Excited for the part.
Update soon plzzz