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lovely update...exactly as i thought would anant and nandini react.

Originally posted by: nikki.smiley95

lovely update...exactly as i thought would anant and nandini react.

😊 thank you

superb update after a long time
u wrote beautifully ..
keep it up dear
continue soon
take care
waiting...

Superb update...

Anjali THKS for the PM

Okk so last chap comment i gave it on whtpadd..i knw knw it was chotu sa comment..but sorry busy thi tht is why..! But i'll compensate it in this update 😉 haha

FREAAKKK...!! Thank you so much..!! It was sooo long update..!! And so brilliant..! This story has become my obsession..n u r resopnsible for it hehe..! 😛 But sachhi mein after this update i felt happy..it was diff & refreshing..!!

Starting u carried out really well.." Tumhi kahte hona would be better off hun tumhari..." Nandini has a beautiful way of making manik understand..! And then next..WHAT WAS THAT..??!! MANIK DID THT ACTUALLY.??!! 😭 One call & he dissolved his music dreams..in just a blink..!! Nandini shock mein..mai thi shock mein..!! But plsss manik ke dady ko koi akal do..!! But wht u showed here was a real thing..childrens carrier do suffer coz of parents somtyms..but whn the tym comes they realise it its too late..!! Good work ! 👏

And thank god Mr smith is good enough to give him chance in future..!! We still have OUR HOPE alive..!
😊

And nandu was not willing to leave manik..aww..!!! & then tht kisss & then tht 'baby' too good..!! The kiss was so hot..!!! Haha..! Nandini u r becoming bold day by day..aakhir fiance kiski hai..maanik bhool gaya.. 😆 So next nandni in malhotra mansion to arrange he stuffss..!! Her bonding with nyonika is the most overwhelming part of this story..!

Her equations changed with maniks dad..ye toh hona hi tha..josh mein log hosh kho baithte hai..!! Nandini being hurt is so sad..poor girl..! And then the the bedroom scene it is now one of MY FAVOURITE SCENE 😛 Itna achha lika tha yaar..it captivated me in manan magic..

From the starting whn he embraced her..wooww..thn nuzzling his nose in her hair..haee..caressing her back..shitt..& then those kisses on her neck..the entire sequence was flawlessly penned..!! Nandini cant wait to come in his life permenantly & manik cant wait for their 'First night' haha too good secene & thn blushing nandu..!

And then they both saying those lines romantically & fell on bed..!! Out of the box idea u have..Superrrbb..!!! A lovely scene.! And then even after 3 months she knws he is still in pain..nandu tries boosting him again for music..but alas..manik has moved on..!! Like i said i still have hope..without music our manan is incomplete..its the intergral part of manan's magic..!!

And mukti & nandi scene...sweet & simple..!! Ans those pics were awesome..nandini manik ka B'day bhool gayii..!!! Damn kya nandu..!! Well m excited to see spicy & juicy stuffs thoda romantic thoda sweet..!! This update i loved it totally..!!! Update soon.!

God bless u

Huh manik ke dad ko koi thora akal rent pe dooo..
He need some brain... Upar se nandu sorry v nei bola... how rud...
BTW update was awesome...
Thanks for this fantastic update...
Update sson

Hello

Wat honf btw nandi I nd manik dad...
Did I miss any part...


Lv der romance...
Maniks bitlrthday...
Hm...
I think she will giv his music back..
Cnt soon

Originally posted by: Roshnisk

Superb update...

Manik backoff from music feeling sad... i thought smith will create problem but he understanded ...

I hope d day come soon when anant agree for music...

Only 3 months for marriage waiting for it...

Waiting for next update..