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Rachu14

@Rachu14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Awesome update. Your writing skills are great. Love the emotion you show between manan.

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SIAZAHEED.1

@SIAZAHEED.1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

yaarr!!
abhi teri updates par rahi hoon..
ghar pe guests hai yaarr...
so will comment 2morow okkaaayyeee!!!!!!!!!😊

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pdiyar193

@pdiyar193

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Heyyy!

Thanks for the PM!!!

I truly love this story and follow all the updates!

This chapter was beautifully written!!

Each update gets better!!

Awww this was sucha cute update!

Love Manan!

Their little phone convo was adorable!

Awww him going to see Nandini and bringing roses!

Hayeee!

Their kiss was just magical!<3

Love the way she explained to him he has full right on her!

Loved these two, perfect jodi!

Nandini took him to the place and showed him explaining what it means to her!

Ahh Manik bringing stuff for the kids!

Loved how you included both Manan's viewpoint in this!!!

I can't wait for the next part, super impatient!!

Please continue soon with the next update!:)

Hope people will be loyal to your story and comment as you are in updating!!

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edward_twilight

@edward_twilight

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

last 2 chapters were amazing..firstly the confession... wow it was sooo romantic.. everything was just perfect... from the dresses to to manik n nandini's hide n seek to the setting on the beach .. then the fun game to know themselves through each other's eyes n finally the confession...
it was all soo magical
n then nandini's surprise by taking him to the orphanage n manik's so humble behaviour made me wish that guys like him to exist in real life too

looking forward to how manik n nandini makes his parents understand n convince about the deal

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Awesome update

Superb update

And Manan confession was superb

And then manan update was fab

Loved it

Loved the update

Update the next part soon

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PaR!

@1D43

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Awsm 😊

Loved it.. keep it up 👍🏼

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Thanks for the pm
It was such a beautiful update
Loved how manik came next day with roses and all n how everyone was teasing him
N so loved nandus purifier it was beyond beautiful
N also their visit to orphanage that was the best part
N then at he end they got muktis pregnancy confirmation
Loved the update

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AsthaVerma92

@AsthaVerma92

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Awww such a beautiful update...
Manan hoing orphange
Manik's way to shower love to evrybdy...:
Manan cute lovely moments...
Mukti pregnancy confirm wow its owsm

Plzzz update new part soon