#5 Vivah MaNan FF/THREAD 6 LINK-PG 1 - Page 17

It's was amazing awesome superb outstanding mind blowing fantastic lovely update tysm dear fr the update n pm next part soon plzzz

Wow...as usual awsum update... luved it to the core... nandu's surprise ws priceless... seriously.. i also feel that making others happy is d best feeling in d world... finally muku is pregnant... bus ab jaldi manik bhi sabko bta de.. bout his music... update soon

Wow... Superb

Plzzz update soon yaar very interesting

hey Angi!
As i promised...

The Morning Moment..
Okk.. Manik was happy nd picking his phone dnt even check the called id as if he
already knw aur better i say he feels that its his girl's call...subah subah 😉

their Morning covo was lovely nd m enjying reading their teasing mom But then this moment came..

""Manik saw the brush and he started brushing his teeth: wo.. me.. umm..

Nandini got confused: what? Manik saf saf bolo na.

Manik took out his brush and spoke: I am brushing my teeth. I can't speak.""

Nd i said eewww~~~😲😆

u Naughty girl..

Nd MaNan Message part was amazing...
At Murthy Villa.. Manik Teasing Mom nd
CaVay's Helping moment was lovely...

i jst loved Nandu's attire (kash aise dress voh show mein pehti holi sequence pe..😕)

Manik;s admiring mOMNT-Their kiss is a bliss to read..
i feel goosebumps in my tummy while reading..😳
my fv convo..😭

Manik placed his finger on her lips: shh...

He traced her lips with his thump, looking at it only: can I kiss you Nandini?

Manik whispered: I am sorry.

Nandini opened her eyes and cupped his face.

Nandini: Manik look at me.

Manik looked at her.

Nandini: remember one thing, do not say sorry ever to me for kissing me. And never ask before kissing me too. Manik you have all rights on me. On my soul, on my heart and on my body too. You can do whatever you want to do.

Manik smiled and caressed her lip which was now swollen because of his desires: ye for this. Sorry.

Nandini slapped his head a little: buddhu.

Then Nandini's surprise ..

the ORPHANAGE...

yaar very loning nd heart touching...😊😭

both pov's r superbly penned by uu..

hattss off Baby..😊

waiting 4 the nxtt..

So sorry for responding to all your pm so late I was off from forum it's been long time n all the stories r pending for me to read but now I got sometime to read the story n finishing one by one it's awesome the story has moved Soo far I m loving it it's mind blowing excellent work n now u hav stopped my pm of your story from now on plz continue ur pm I will surely read ur chapter but don't stop the pm n continue soon

Sorry for late dear

Super awesome update .. You always manage to surprise me.. I loved it.. The visit to orphanage was so beautifully penned down .. The small morning talks n bedroom kiss was so cute and romantic .. Loved it... Yayyy mukti is pregnant n it's confirmed .. Happy moment in family .. Hope Manik's dad supports him in music and happiness continues .. Excited for the next part ..

superb chapter

So finally i completed reading all the chapters
Trust me i was awake almost the whole night to complete it
And it was awesome
The story is simply amazing
I loved the story plot ur way of writing the way u have described the nature of every character everything
Waiting for the next part to be uploaded
Please do it soon