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priya

@priya_sejwal

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Aww very nice update

Orphanage visit was soo good

Loved it

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Amazinggg
Mindblowingghg update
Beautifull manan...ek dusre ko happy krne keliye kch bhi krne ko tyaar hai...lovd it
Continue soon

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Wow!!! Fabulous update dear..

It ws outstanding..lvd it 2 core..

Extremely sry dear frm bottom of d heart 4 nt able 2 commnt 4 last prts in both IF and wattpad...

Were bsy vid wrk n were not feeling well also...

Thnks so much dear 4 r pm..

Cuming 2 update it ws mindblowing..as mentioned in title really felt sum sort of peace after Reading d update.

So simple n classy update..one more step by manan 2 their nw life...fantastic dear...confession prt ws extremely outstanding... Nw nandu's turn 2 surprise... Her surprise ws equally complementin manik's surprise .

Manan mrng talk ws so cute..

haha manik teasing nandu 2 say those 3 beautiful wrdz...

She s also nt less

Both r gettin more n more comfortable vid each othr..so suprb.. Bechara manik...sb milke ched rhe he usko...

cabir yhn bhi km nhi...yeh kbhi nhi sudhrega... omg!! Manik s blushing...lvs d way cavya helped manik 2 get meet nandu.. navya s such a dramebazz..hahaha

Nandu's dress ws so cute..lvd it 2 core...manik admiring nandu...

Poor manik...uska saara ctrl chala gya..

.bt i luvd it wen manik askd nandu permission 2 kiss her..

Manan kiss ws pure bliss...so romantic... Nandu fully trusts manik...lvd her rply. Suprb...

Nandu's surprise ws outstanding...

Orphanage.. Didnt expctd seriously..

manik felt so contnt aftr seein d smile in nandu's face.

Both manan's pov ws outstanding...

both r explaining eavh othr's importance in their life...

lvd d way manan gelled up vid d kids .. Aw..kids r so cute...

d way manik patiently dealed vid d kids ws spectacular... Awesmly penned dear.. Ni wrdz 2 say..manan meetin badi ma.. Wow!!! Manik givin chocolates n evrything 2 kids..

.he s also getting comfortable vid her happiness..

both r really soulmates.

Badima n nandu's talk ws so peaceful...nandu s so hpy in her life... She dnt wanna lose manik..

Wow!!! Mukthi's pregnency confirmed..suprb...fabulous update dear.. Do continue dear..waitin 4 nxt update...

Edited by Sreeja_babu - 9 years ago

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Boomchelesa

@Boomchelesa

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Starting ka morning scene was super duper amazing...the lines the scenes..so cute..!! Manik brushing his teeth & talking..nandu stubborn haha..! & I love u idiot...this was mind blowing..!!!

And then room scene..i loved nandins dress & thn how the moment build up brw them..& maniks gesture ! Too good !

And the orphange scene was also good. But i think i wud recommend u too come up with something new..bring some twist..story thoda slow pace mein ho gaya hai. U write very nicely..bt i feel these days kuch missing hai..!! Keep writing. Update soon!!

God Bless u

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anshika garg

@anshikagarg126

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Nice
Cute lovely
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
Takecare...
:)

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

THANKS FOR THE PM...

I WAS GETTING VERY BORED... THANKFULLY YOU UPDATED THE CHAPTER... YAYIEEE

THIS WAS AGAIN A VERY BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER...

STARTING OF THE CHAPTER WAS ONLY VERY SWEET...

THEIR PHONE CONVERSATION WAS VERY CUTE... MANIK WANTED TO HEAR THOSE 3 MAGICAL WORDS AGAIN N AGAIN... HOW CUTE IS THAT...!!

N THEN CABIR AND NAVYA LEFT NO CHANCE TO TEASE MANIK... HEHEEE

MANAN ROOM ENCOUNTER WAS VERY ROMANTIC...

MANIK KEPT ON STARING HIS ANGEL...HE WAS MESMERIZED BY HER BEAUTY...

N THEN THEIR ORPHANAGE VISIT WAS VERY GOOD...
THAT GIRL WHEN ASKED MANIK THAT IS HE HER DIDIZ HUSBAND... BOTH MANAN LOVED HEARING THAT...

N NOW TOH THERE IS COMING ONE SMALL NEW MEMBER TO THEIR FAMILY... WOW...

ON WHOLE IT WAS BEAUTIFUL...

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yashi-ka

@yashi-ka

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Adorable update...

So cutee..

Their both adorable section is so beautifully penned down...

Loved it...

Kids were so cute..

Their little bit romance was hot...

Continue soon...

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rockstarlover

@rockstarlover

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#158

beautiful update
manan r adorable
loved their morning teasing session😃
cabir never leaves a chance 2 annoy manik
aww manik brought roses 4 her
their romance was hot😳
nandu's surprise was amazing
loved manik's gestures concerns 4 the orphanage
cont soon

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Wow.. updateis quite fast. Thankew for this update. Update was super duper awesome... Oh How Sweet.. Their phone call was so so Sweet. literally dil le liya. amazing... I just love their talk.. Hehehe.. Cabir kitna tease krta h na manik ko. manik ko to sharam hi aa gyi. hehe.. Ohhoo to manik qas mesmerizing nandini. nandini ki dress was super pretty. . Their Romance was so hot. totally loved it.. nandini is so sweet na. I just love their growing bond.. beautiful bond.. So nandini manik ko orphanage lana chahti thi. ohhh... hehe. kids were cute.. Their moments in orphanage was beautiful.. manik really loves her. how sweetly he listening her.. . Yipeee. whohhooo. Mukti is pregnant. wow. gud news.. amazing update. totally nice.. waiting for next update eagerly. Thanks for pm.. don't be sad.. we are wid u to support you. so just be happy. but THANks for still posting ur story. Keep Smiling ...