#2MANAN FF : WILL U BE MY GIRLFRIEND/PART 27 pg 39 & spl update pg

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rimi

@elsaanna

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#181

👏 hey..neerja...i really really loved it..

u did a fabulous job..

awesome..

treamendous

excellent..

beautifully written..

manan and families holiday..

three foodies...

girls bond..

boys fun tym..

super cool parents..

damn cool grand parents..

manan moment,nokh jokh..

everything is so great..

missed you..

God bless you..

please keep writing..

take care..😃

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Crazy8000

@Crazy8000

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

amazing update
loved it totally
missed u so much
lets see what will be nandus reaction when she wake up
thankx for pm
n plz continue soon

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samiksha singh

@samiksha_2593

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#183

O my god oh my god!!!!!
Itti bari story
Wo v itti romantic n there was drama too
Wowww awsm part this is...
Wowww mns wowww
Amazing update dear
Keep it up
Hats off to ur work
All d best

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baby15468

@baby15468

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Thanks for such an awesome valentine gift loved the update.keep writing

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Tatheer Rizvi

@tatheer_rizvi18

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Started reading ur story in wattpad and i just loved each and every word u are just amazing writer just love it. Superb the way you write manik and nandini relation its just awesome just love their cute and romantic moments😳🥺❤️ amazing you are a great writer just loved ur story plzz don't end it its reallly amazing... u are just brilliant just amazing proposal..👍🏼👍🏼 loved each and every part... thankyou so much for this long wala part i can totally understand how much time it took... just lovely... just continue writting u are one of the best writer loved this part alot... finally manan proposed each other just love the way he proposed her awww so cute... ⭐️you have really put so many efforts for this just love it... 😳😳😳

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kd83

@kd83

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#186

Hey writer!! Finally you are back with a bang...

Nice update... loved the way Manik proposed nandini...

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pdiyar193

@pdiyar193

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#187

Oooh yay update is here!!!

Sooo excited for this valentine surprise!!!

Thankyou for the PM!!!

OMG such a long update... I loved every bit of it!!!

Beautifully written!

I love Nandini cute antics.. the way she got excited at the beginning for bhabhi being pregnant!

Hehehe such a adorable doll!

Haha Manik always wants to be with her!!

Ufff Manan are sooo hot.. their romance was the best!! They are perfect!

Nandini should ignore him more.. best punishment! Hehe..;)

I love the prank they played on Cabir and Nandini!

Aww Manik getting possessive over Nandini when Cabir was hugging her and all... Hahaha!

But my favourite part was when he got jealous of the halwa! Too funny!

Love the way he announced her as Mrs Malhotra when giving Mukti the gift!

All the family supporting him as she is his 'half wife'!!

The flight scenes was sooo cute! Especially Cabir and Dhruv getting worried for her.

Manik is sooo protective and caring towards her..

Always looking after his baby..

Aww Manik getting worried for the dream.. but when he found out what it meant soo excited! Nandu on blush mode always!!

I love how he started imagining a mini Nandini... so cute!!! He is the best!

I loved the propsal Manik did, very unique!

Lol Abhi kidnapping her!

Loved the ride part and then the cute sa propsal at the end!

I love there confessions soo cute!!

Family moments are the best!!

Oooh I love the ending when he said he wanted a cricket team.. such a Manik dialogue! Good luck Nandini.. Hehe!:)

I'm sooo excited for the next update!!

Continue soon!:)

P.S this long reply just for your extra long update!!!<3

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Swagatika

@sws2

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#188

Superbbb

Manan are the cutest ❤️

Such a longgg update, enjoyed every bit of it

Manan and friends are absolute fun

Loved the valentine surprise

Thanks for pm

😊

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forumlove

@forumlove

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#189

Its so so so so so awsm you know i luved your story from start and this chapter is out of the box. i so so love it. waiting for the next chapter i like their bond like every bond you show it very well.. manan bond is on top then gang bond then nandini mukti bond nandini cabir and dhruv bond girls bond mananbir bond family bond.. luved it..plz update soon.. waiting waiting waiting...