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The story looks damn Intresting.. Amazing.. Loved the beginning...

This would be a story to remember though .
Amazing ! :D
Just catching up with your stories .
Have been out of town .

Thankyou for the message .
-God bless

So alya is not a negative character...she loves nandini...manik noticed nandini at first day itself...gud gng dear... eagerly waiting for next chapter

Originally posted by: KYYian

superb start

mindblowing update

so aliya is not bad girl..she is good but let's see what will she do when her bf will fall in love wid her sis?

infinity...that's a cool name

Cabir n piya.. seems nice

so nandini captured maniks attentn even before Aliya... great

loved d update

Yeah...she isn't bad

Originally posted by: abhilashaS

still thoda thoda confused but...

Confused about what?

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Wow!!!! First chapter rckd dear...
It ws really awesum update...
Alia seems 2 b nice in d stry...She luvs nandu vry much...
thnks so much dear 4 d pm...

cuming 2 update, It ws fabulous...
Aliya n nandu r poles apart in all senses...
But they r sisters...I didnt thought nandu will be dis much silent character...
She hates attention...Nandu n her mother talks ws so suprb...
Lvd d way u penned d stry dear...Intro of Aliya n nandu's one day so suprb...
Got a clear pict of their character..👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
No one knew dey both r sisters...Dat too nandu didnt allowd...
Dat ws reallly shcking 😲

den cums our hero...Manik...His intro ws fantastic...
Uske aathe hi alya fida hogyi usmein...Bechari ki lv at first sight..😉😉😉
Hahaha...Girl faintin after seeing manik..Dat ws funny...Hahaha😆😆
Finally manan meet.Dat too one side...Suprbb...
Manik noticing nandu firstly...Instant curious n attraction dawned in him...
Lvd d way u portrayed d story n manik's thoughts...
Now in flashback...Eagerly waitin 4 nxt prts n 4 d revelation of truths...
Do continue...Waitin 4 nxt prt...


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Thank u so much and story will be in present only!
Nandu has her reasons for everything!

Originally posted by: A12609z

Waiting for Manan
plzzz.dono ko alag mat karnaa

Story hadn't started yet

Originally posted by: kyy_manan

Awesm

Well I had d idea it wouldnt be flashbacks

First chap was awesm

Loved Alia & Nandinis bond

Manik ki entry bhi ho gayi

Bas pls keep Alia & Nandinis bond intact

I dun wana see it break apart

Tysm fr pm

lots of love

Their bond will totally be dependent on the situations they will be in

Originally posted by: divyagarg

Awesome start, really

I am glad u didn't start the story from the prologue or in flashback

I am happy with the way u started it

Keep growing and update soon

Hope this will be slow and steady unlike she got us together

Plzzz

And thanks for the pm

It will be

Originally posted by: Nainasadhwani

Nic update. ...4 yrs...it will bi long...nandni ko kich fell nahi hua as usual but manik uska sbse phele attension nandni hi thi..nt alia

It won't be