#3:MaNanSS: The Mafia and His Shimmer Epilogue(Last)/PG79/25th-June

Swikriti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Emotional update.
Loved it
Continue soon
Waiting for next update.

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meiej

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

amazing update

and as well as emotional

so sad for nandini

continue soon

waiting

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naziasiddiqui

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Awsmmm

superbbb

amazinggg

mindblowinggg

excellent

fabbb

nice update

loved it very much

Cont soon

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jashanpreet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Seriously an heart wrenching update...
Never wanted Manik to loose his bby...
But anyhow.. ..destiny...
God give them power to got thru this pain...

Loved the update...
Thanks a lot. .
And update soon
God bless you

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geethgeethu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Awesome update dear...pls update soon.

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navneetdhandal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

awsome update dear..

although emotional but its the matter of fact we all have to pay here only for our sins..

its really a tough time for both manik and nandini but i knw they come out of it strongly..

u write every emotion so beautifully mawara i keep on grying while reading,,,

its really emotional and heart touching story..

but hats off to u that u did this job splendidly...

i hope god will grace manik and nandini with this happiness again...

waiting for next part

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siyaaaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

It was damn emotional..and heart touching..

Both r so much in pain...

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Geet *wink*

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Ohh.. I'm crying .. flowing tears... can't stop. oh hell. ThaT was so emotional... its touched my heart like really deep.. dono k p.o.v's r hell beautifully written... So nandini was there when manik was confessing his deeds.. oh shit..she is in also so much pain... Usne liye kitna difficult rha hoga manik ko khud se dur krnaa.. ohh soo emotional. amazing update... But Now dono ek hone vale the. to ye sb.. Oh shit.. Poor nandini... Shit yr how can some people become sp cruel. they just ruined everything... but nandini us fine. but but.. Manan lost their princess. oh.. Manik is in so much pain.. :( nandini is unconscious. how will nandini react. ?? but manik oo strong bnna hoga. use nandini ko sambhalna hogaa.. Ohh. waiting for next update eagerly. thanks for pm. thankss for this beautifully portrayed emotional update. mawara u just took my heart. ur writing is so marvelous.. !! Stay blessed !!

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palak99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Emotional update

I can't stop myself from crying

Waiting for the next update

Continue soon

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rupmanan1

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Its was so emotional and heart wrenching
update dear... ohhh god he lost her princess ... his dream is so scary & now it comes true ...

yah everything happen for good reasn ... waiting for new update & more for nandu reaction i knw she is also hurt ...

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