#3:MaNanSS: The Mafia and His Shimmer Epilogue(Last)/PG79/25th-June

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Sonu137

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Heyy

First of all congratulations for the new thread!!

and about update indeed it was a very emotional update!!

First their pain of staying away from each other!!

It was hurting them!!

and finally they were going to meet and again an obstacle!!

She told still they dint listened to her!!

Nandini could not even tell manik about his princess!!

And now manik came to know after he lost his princess!!

He paid for his sins!!

But now he will make them suffer!!

But how will nandini react?

Waiting for next

Thanks for pm

Take care

Keep smiling

Love you

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RidzKhambhati

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Awesome update... Waiting for next part... Please update soon...

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Cooki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Very emotional update dear..
I guessed it right...
God snatched his baby as the price of his sins..
Nandini was feeling so devastated and so as manik...
And that also she knew..
She was there when he was asking for the forgiveness..
JF and soha...
They r going to suffer so badly..
What will be nandini's reaction when she will come to know about their baby who is no longer alive..
Thnxxx for the pm...
Continue soon..
Looking forward to read further parts...

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Ash1117

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Awesomeee mindblowing bt tooo emotional part...

Crying badly seeing lovely manan in pain...

Nandu was soo happy when she got too know dat she is carrying manik's princess in her womb...

Bt god was soo unfair with manan dat she lost manik's princess before even manik enjoys her existance...

Too emotional waiting for nxt part plzzz post it soon...

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hinzi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

i knw i m super late

coz i havent commented for d 11th chappy

bt frst of all congo for ur new thread

luv d stry

d 11th chappy was so emotional

cried rivers n rivers

bt it deserved it

so emotional n soulful

luvd manik's pov

came 2 knw his side of stry 2

d church prt was adorbs

n d last manan convo was vry touchy

jst w8ing for d raaz 2 come out

nxt was d 12th chappy

evrytym i feel u cant write any more better,

u come up wid a fantastic update

i jst adore dis update

it was perfect

it had all d elements needed

i m speechless

luv d fact dat manan were together at d church

dat she heard him talking

dat she fellt him near her

bt den d ending had me cry loads

gosh so freaking perfect!

cant write more

update soon

thnx for d pm

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Miheeka Chaudhary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Firstly,m sooo sorry got little late this time.Now coming to the update,God this was damn emotional update of all of ur stories I read so far.I got the hint that this was going to happen so m a bit prepared to not to cry much, bt all my preparation went useless n meaningless, the harder I tried not to cry the more n more tears fell from my eyes . Once again ur writing left me spellbounded. They lost their baby aaahhh!!!! I know somewhere manik had to pay for his sins bt this should not be the price 😭 m not complaining bt kya kru I just can't get over this.Hope that manik n nandini survive this situation strongly with each other. Now its time for those disgusting jerks to pay for their sins.continue soon...love ❤️

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mananluvpani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Omg very emotional n pain full part...
Akhir jiska dur tha wahi hua manik me nandu KO toh bacha liye but baby KO nhi bacha paya ...god be manan se unka unborn baby ko chin Liya...
An jab nandu KO hosh aayega n use pta chalega k uska baby ab nhi RHA toh wo pta nhi kaise react kregi...
Waiting for the next part...