#3:MaNanSS: The Mafia and His Shimmer Epilogue(Last)/PG79/25th-June - Page 13

So beautifully u penned it down...
Loved each & every emotions which u show through
Ur characters...
So emotinal update...
Nandini's p.o.v. loved it...
She was not wrong at her place...manik lied to her,
this was more hurting for her...but she want them to be together...
Nandini listened to manik's confession...
Nandini was pregnant...
Manan talk...
Soha so cruel...
Manan's baby was no more...
Manik was so shattered...
Waiting for nandini's reaction...
Continue soon...
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Awesome update. Way u penned it was commendable. Hats off. U nailed it. Nandini's pov was well penned. She started hallucinating manik everything.she was right at her point. Chruch part was rocking. U nailed it. Nandini's pov was rocking. Her emotions were well penned. Wow she decided to get back to Manik and got to know she was pregnant.Manik's excited state to meet nandini was adorable. Wat nandini got kidnapped. Soha is disgusting.nandini lost her baby. Nandini's pov was too emotional and heartbreaking. Manik's miserable state was well written. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon. Thanks for pm.love to read further

aswm update
u r truly the best writer

Congrats for the new thread...

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a very nice update, sad for manan and princess, very well written

very emotional update yaar... when. manik confessed his deeds nandini is there... and the way u explained nandini condition and her begging for their baby is heart wrenching... waiting for nandini reaction now...

Amazing update..

nandu pov was full of pain...it depicts how much she was missing him

"Bola na ni! For one week! No hugging! No kissing! And specially no cuddling in night!" I spoke in a strict tone and he made a grumpy sound hell annoyed...her punishment is sooo scary for him...

nandu was really missing him so badly...wants him to come back n not to give up on them easily...

u penned down very beautifully the nandiniz condition...

when she went to church i knew it she would hv listened to manik confession n she did...

n then nanduz call was so pain relief to both of them n when she said jaldi aana...we would be waiting... this was so cute...n she was very excited to tell him...

Ishh! Buddho kahen ka! Smj jaoa na! Who can
imagine that a Mafia like him can be so dumb...so cute

manik was all ready to go in green -orange combo...hehee

n then that fiasco happened... but whatever happens it happen for a reason...

now more pain they will face...

Too emotional.. Manan lost their princess.. 😭 ..what will be the reaction of nandini .I knw its hard time ..but as u said everything happens 4 a reason.. N I trust u as a writer.. Keep it up d good work..waiting 4 next update ..keep smiling 😊 lots of love