MaNan FF- Bleeding Heart#2- Last Chapter Page31 (22/05/16) - Page 15

manan r coming close to each other

they got thr Aditya back in thr life

varsha s maid was caught

ruhi is bring joy npeace in thr life

but wht s manik's dad plan

he is planning to murder nandini

Aditya reached thr home

met malhothras

will he call him daadu

will manik be able to find out it was his own dad who took away all his happiness ??

so much excited to read ur story

thanq for this longest update

loved it

so emotional

so beautiful

so so good

😛

And I was like

Thank god Aditya got founded

I must say you make me so much cry before ..

I was not expecting manan in cost of Karan

And now again ...manik's dad was culprit

Hope this time no one get hurt pls now too much

Let build them happiness now pls

Your story is really heart touching. This is definitely not for weak hearts. Every character is wonderfully explained and shaped really well. Being a girl I can at least understand a bit of what nandini has gone through but not completely. Karan's character though short , but he is wonderful in his own way. You have showed most of it in nandini's version. Manik has gone through no less. A person in this world who so ever it may be trust only his/her parents most , not even love of his life. It was only misunderstanding and a basic human psychology where you believe the one you see n hear. He has given enough chances in prooving his heart right but destiny plays it's own game. The most painful thing is when u get betrayed by your own parents whom you treat more than God. Nandini had meera n karan to lend a shoulder to cry on. But manik had all time tried to show himself strong in front of everyone n as if it doesn't matter any more. His mom was not there as well. Don't even speak about friends. I hope at least now u show the pain he has gone through. Coz he need someone to make him feel better. He need to lent it all out. He can't live all his life in guilt n repentance.

Every writer has a right to mend a story the way he likes . we whole heartedly accept whatever u write, coz u write beautifully. It was solely my opinion whatever is written above. Pls don't mind if I have offend you. It was not intentional.

Excellent update...

Manan's moments were amazing...

Finally!!! Manan found aditya...

& d maid got arrested...

Manik's dad did all those things...

Luved it...

Plz continue soon...

Waiting eagerly...

Take care...

Stay blessed...

Loved it

manik and nandinis closeness... you showed it so nicely...

that one close moment...and after that moment nandini and maniks pov...you put it in such a nice way😳

and adityas back...now i m excited as well tensed ...when all will know maniks father is a real culprit...how difficult it will b for manik...will he handle unexpected shock of his life...

excited for next update ...

pls update aeap