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reet0143

@reet0143

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Posted: 9 years ago

#831

rula diya tune is baar mawara,,,,,,,,,,am just speechless,,,,,,

it was so emotional...

u have beautifully penned it...

sometimes life doesn't give us a second chance ...

exactly happened with manik,,,,,,,,,

use bhi haq hai khush hone ka ...

manik's state was heart wrenching,,,,,,

he loves nandu a lot ...

i was crying while reading this update,,,,,,,,,

loved it...

hat's off to u baby,,,,,,,,,,,👏...it's not easy to writing like this,,,,,,,

superb,,,,,,,

stay blessed,,,,,,,,

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jamunamanik

@jamunamanik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#832

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Veryyy emotional part

Superrr manik's love

Wt will happen next

Can't wait for next part

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Love_Queen

@Love_Queen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#833

Super duper emotional update

Really penned it very wel

Amazing

Mind blowing

She just ask him to let her go nd he allow her to go

But how they gonna live without each other

Eagerly waiting for the next update
Update soon dear

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@kyaramalhotra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#834

wooaaa...
ohh no...this is freakin awwsmmm...soo emotional
u kno i never cried but look whta happend to me...
tears are not stopping..
ab kya hoga???
update soon
love kyara..

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navla

@navla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#835

Emotional update...

It is heart wrenching...how manik pleading her ...manik loves her so much ...their is no words to to express his feeling...

too prove his love he let her go...

Nandini is correct on her place...bcz of lie she left him n all negativity cums in her mind...

I knw she will definatley cum back to manik...she need sum alone time...

What happen to manik...feeling bad for manik...I hope manik is ok...

U pinned it amazingly...

I cried while reading...

Please update soon...

Loved d update...

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Kaanika

@Kaanika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#836

I literally cried while reading this update...

It was so emotinal and heart wrenching which words cant describe...

Finally nandini pushed manik back into the darkness...the truth was out but in a wrong way...

The update was just awesome. ..

Manan morning romance was soo sweet amd lovely...

Those douchebags tried to misbehave with her but arayaman saved her...the loss was already done...

Manik was soo worried for his shimmer ...

Nandini was scared and only manik warmth can make her feel secure and calm her...

Manan are separated...destiny played a cruel game with them...

Two innocent souls who were deprived from love found solace in each other but destiny has its own plan...

Manik let nandini go...to prove his love to her...

Nandinj distrust manik..

Both were equally hurt...

Lets see how these two pass these difficult phase of life.

You potrayed soo beautifully...

Dialogues were just perfect alongwith the song describing the situation..

Keep it up..hats off to u...

Really loved it.

Still sniffing.

Thanks a ton for an amazing update..

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

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Posted: 9 years ago

#837

this was very emotional...
nandu finally came to his reality...

manik wanted to tell her own his own but eventually it didn't happened...

nandu is so much in pain so is manik...

she told him to let her go to prove his love n he let her go...n now he won't make any efforts to get her back too... now what will happen whn she would come to know her own brother also knows about his reality...????

i think only he can help manan now ...

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Anushi

@anushi3012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#838

This was too emotional !!! I could not stop myself from feeling their pains from both Nandini and Manik 😭😭😭
Their pouring love at the start before the storm...
And then after Nandini knew the truth... how she felt betrayed...
And Manik of course...
His every movement and actions was just painful.😭😭😭
Their kiss... ayyyeee... please let it not be the last...

Now, tell me, how we will survive till next chapter...😕😕😕
Will Nandini leave Manik???
What will happen??!!

Awesome job as always Mawara!!👏👏

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@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#839

ohh what a heart wrenching update. mawara u made me cry yar.. Owww. ThaT was way too beautifully written. Truth is out.. but in a wrong way.. the way manik was pleading her. oh god ..soo sad.. but nandu is also right. a liee n she is broken. . actually both r broken. She asked him to let her go. or usne jane diya.. n can't say more yr. itsss very very amazingly written. . extremely heart touching. . Eagerly awaiting . for next update. . Stay blessed keep smiling