#2MaNanSS:The Mafia And His Shimmer LinkToThread3/5th-May

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: bluelake99
bt there s a question ,, sry 2 interrupt ,, bt if manik s street child ,, dont knw abt his parents ,, how he knw d birthday ,, i mean celebration nd all .. 😕

Well that's not a big deal! You can make any day your birthday! Sorry I forgot to mention it! Next update me wil take care of it of course! :) and when the truth will be revelead i will explain the point! Am not a perfectionist galti and loopholes reh hty hain human error!

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Thanks for updating chapter 7
Saw it after posting comment for chapter 6
My personal fav scene was the paragliding one
Specially that part where Nandu gets really happy after manik makes her realize she is safe
N m So glad that manik showed Soha her place
N finally manan became one n she also got the ring
But m afraid that Soha will do something
Hopefully everything goes well

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sadiya51

@sadiya51

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Aww such a beutiful update
Thank u so much for the dancing part
My favourite was the night club part where manan danced freely without caring about the world and then the part where manik introduced nandini to his friends
Well the whole update was my favourite
But I guess in the lovemaking part u should have shown nandini's POV coz for manik he can see her but for nandini its kind of different
Will be eagerly waiting for the the next best update
And thank u for this one
It was indeed a special update

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Nicky31

@Nicky31

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Amazing update

Finally confessed love

I liked the night club scene as there Nandani went out of her self n enjoyed like no tomorrow so it's my favourite one

Pls continue soon

Keep writing stay blessed

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Swagata_kundu

@Swagata_kundu

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#225

Every prt is just awesome... It cannot be compared to each other... Just. Love it... ❤️

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NAVYA64

@NAVYA64

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Awesome update

Loved it

Good one

Every thing was perfect and nice

Cont soon

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akshima1995

@akshima1995

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Amazing update
Loved Paragliding wala scene
N when Manik asked for Nandini's permission to kiss her
This soha is srsly a b**ch
Loved the way nandu trusted Manik...
Please give Nandini's pov regarding party if possible
Update next part soon...

Keep smiling always
N Stay Blessed 😊