#2MaNanSS:The Mafia And His Shimmer LinkToThread3/5th-May

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Swift007

@Swift007

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Beautiful update

What a bond betwen them

Lovely

Rishab gave a chance to Manik

Amazing

Update the next part soon

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Swagata_kundu

@Swagata_kundu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Love it ... Rishab's povs suits here... Its awsm... 👍🏼

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Mawara

Unres on pg 18

Have a look

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

woww.. amazing update. Short thi but bhot amazing Thi. No manan moments but very very important thi . I just knew it manik vapis le aayega nandu ki ring. ..because vo nandini ki mom ki thi.. Rishab ka p.o.v is just great . Its gud ki Rishab ne ek chance diyaa manik ko. Rishab n manik's bond is actually very great .. Will wait for next update eagerly. . Thanks for pm. .. Love Geet

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anjaliiiii84

@anjaliiiii84

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

riahav give him a chance wow that's awesome..n manik hahaha mafia is scared

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ky2manan

@ky2manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Lovely update
Beautiful
You penned rishab's inner turmoil so brilliantly
He loves his sister very much
And he knows that Manik is her happiness
Manik's condition was miserable
He didn't want to loose them
Rishab gave him a chance
Loved their bond
Waiting for next update
Update soon

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Claire_D

@Claire_D

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Though there was no MaNan scene but the update was beautiful.
For the first time it showed Rishabh's POV & what exactly Manik meant to him as well as Nandini. Rishabh's confusion to deciding to give Manik another chance was written really well. I could literally feel the confusion while reading the update.
Do continue soon..

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Swikriti

@Suku111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Lovely update.
Awesome.
Loved it.
Continue soon.

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Zara Khan

@ZaraKhann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Gawwwddd!

This is soo cute!

U always manage to turn my smile into the widest one!

And that rishab manik bond!

Thank god he didn't say anything to nandini!

But waiting for the update!

Pleaseee Continue sooonn!

Lots of love

Zara😎

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nubula

@nubula

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Posted: 9 years ago

#140

update was beautiful dear.

liked rishu's pov very much.he the best brother.nandu is so lucky to have a brother like him.he cares for nandu like her big bro.nandu ki khusi ke liye rishu manik ko maf kar diya.or nandu ko kuch nehi bataya about manik.only thing matter for him is his di's happiness.

though in this update there was no manan scene but update was fabulous.really like it very much.

waiting for next update and manan scene.

cont soon.