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shaan...

@shaan...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Amazing update...

Bro-sis bond is beautifully written...

Totally luved it...

Thnx 4 d pm...

Plz continue soon...

Waiting eagerly...

Take care...

Stay blessed...

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simkapoor

@simkapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

awsm update...
manik ws si scared of loosing both of thm...
n thnk god rishab gave him 2 chance..
his out burst ws crrct... bt thnk god he choose hr happiness..
awsm update...
ty fr pm..
cntinue sooonn..
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Aakifa Hussain

@Aakifa_Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

N yeah not to forget d bro-sis bond..
I loved it..
Though rishabh is younger one bt he acted lyk a big bro..
He knew dat Manik is a Mafia bt he knew dat too,Dat his sis's happiness is him nly..!
N he atlast gave Manik a chance..

Loved dis chaptr..! :)

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Superb amazing update dear

Loved it

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

Stay blessed

Keep smiling :)

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iqra286

@iqra286

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Awww😭 really loved d bond of brother n sisty😃😊 he tryely lived his sister but he made a wrong move as hiding things from her will not help but on d other manik also deserves a chance😃 seruxly loved d way he expressed himslf in front of rishu😃 he really cares for bth of dm😃😳 but on a serux note manik is an ass🤣 fumbling n getting nervous to much😆😃 really loved bira🤣 loved his gesture dt he bought back her ring😃 plzz update soon janu

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prithasainnn

@prithasainnn

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz

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Hello peeps! So here goes the Chapter 6!
It is a very short but very Important Chapter ok? It has *No MaNan scene* but you will thoroughly enjoy it! The promo scene will be in next it will be a fun, romance and masti filled update! And confession too!😃 Manik ka birthday is coming too in that update which will be super long and guess when it's coming? Yes yes yes tonight only!!! Happpy??? Bht happy? Maybe some ahm ahm romance bhi ho! 😳Keyword:Maybe that means don't keep your hopes much high only if I felt kay hona chye then only I will add!😉


Stay blessed and happy reading! Next update lainy ka solution pta hai you guys ko! *COMMENTS* Yes! Or else you all know that am very evil!😡

Chapter 6-Second Chance!

Rishab's POV..

I stood under the cold shower in spite of the low temperature outside. The truth! Manik's truth! God it was hurting. I trusted him so much! And what he did to us? What if he will harm my di? But his tears! The purity of his smile. He makes my di laugh! He makes my di happy! Di's health was becoming better since Manik had came in our life. I know she loves him. Yesterday only she told me that Manik had proposed her for being his girlfriend. She had sold her gold ring just to help him paying his debt.

God..! Why can't my life be so simple?

"Rishab? Are you ok in there? It's been an hour darling! Come out!" I heard di's concern full voice.

"Coming!" I shouted from the shower and heard her footsteps going away.

God..! Show me the right path..
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"So how was your day?" Di asked ruffling my hair as I was lying in her lap after dinner. I had a test tomorrow but I hadn't touched my books yet.



I love you di..

"Uneventful!" I whispered lost somewhere..

"Rishu? What happened honey? Where are you lost?" She asked caressing my face and I shook my head..

Oh Di..! I want to protect you..

"Di..! What is Manik to you?" I asked staring at her face and she lowered her face shyly.

I got my answer sadly..

"Well I don't know! He makes me feel special Rishab! He makes me so happy! Tjy pta hai! He never make me feel that I am blind..! I can't tell you exactly what is he to me! But yes he is very special! Lagta hai kay us kay bina reh nahi paoan ge..!" Di was confessing and was increasing my confusion.

"Do you love him?" Arghh I asked the most stupid question of the century.

"Rishuu!" She exclaimed slapping my chest playfully. "Chota hai na chota ban kar reh! What kind of question is that? Get up and prepare your test or else sleep!" She said hiding her blush and I closed my eyes.

"I want to sleep!" I said getting up from her lap and slid under the covers turning my back towards her.

Please go..

"Ok! Good night sweetheart! I love you!" She whispered in my ear caressing my hair and pecked my temple. Then I felt bed moved under her weight and she fumbled with her slippers I heard her cursing. It was her daily routine. I should be helping her but she never let me help her. The only person I saw helping her and she accepting his help was 'Manik' only. Di never let me help her during eating her food nor she let me serve her food but whenever we go out with Manik I saw him helping her in each possible way and to my utter surprise she accepted his help in a very positive way. My Di had never accepted anyone's pity but Manik..! He told my Di how does it feels being special.! The feeling I saw in his eyes for my sister. The way he looks at her. The way he held her hand during walking or in crossing a road. The way he panics when Di chocked during eating meal. The lilies he bought her almost everyday. The teddy bears with which Di's bedroom is almost overflowing. The chocolates and different sweets he brings for Di..! Everything mahn! Each and everything..! That man owe my Di for his love..! He had sparked a new life in my sister.

Rishab..! You want that man away from your sister who loves your sister unconditionally! Who wants to be with your sister in spite of her disabilities? Who will accept your sister? No one!

God! What should I do??

No I can't snatch my sister's happiness and her happiness is in Manik..

I picked up my cell phone and saw around 50 missed calls and 100 messages from Manik..

"I beg you don't tell Nandini anything..!" Manik's pleading voice once again echoed in the room and I bit my lower lip.

If I will tell di tou do zindagiyaan barbaad hoon ge! Both of them can't stay away from each other.

Ok..! It's final now..

I picked up my cell phone and dialed Manik's number. He picked up the call on very first ring..

"Ciao Rishu! Please beta give me a chance to explain!" He spoke without waiting for me to say anything it felt he was very tensed.

Oh buddy..

"Manik! I want to meet you at the coffee shop! Now!" I said in a serious tone..

"Ok! Am coming!" He said hastily and hung up the call. I too got up and changed clothes. Picking up my wallet and motor bike keys I peeped in Di's room she was sleeping very peacefully. I smiled seeing her happy I was about to walk out of her room when I heard her whisper which made me more determined on my decision and it was..

"Thank you for being my life, Manik..!"

If she is dreaming about him it clearly means that she had already accepted him and she won't be letting him go.

After 20 minutes I entered the Coffee shop it was past midnight and very few customers were left so I easily spotted Manik as he was sitting on our usual table. He was sitting with his face in his palms. The broad shoulders were sunk low. He was in the same clothes which he was wearing in noon. Spending time with him told me that he was fond of good clothing and he used to change clothes almost two times a day. Maybe my burst had effected him alot. Was I wrong? Anyone who had been at my place would react the same. But still I felt so bad for him. Should I give him a chance to explain?

God please help..

I walked towards him and placed my free hand on his shoulder as with other I was holding my helmet. He raised his head to look at me. His lips were dried and he was looking so pale.

Oh Manik. Am feeling guilty now..

I sat exactly in front of him and placed my helmet aside. He was quiet and was looking down. Never ever I had saw him so confused. We siblings really effect him.

"So? What you want to explain?" I broke the awkward silence.

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Manik's POV..

"So? What you want to explain?" He spoke to break the awkward silence.

I was determined to tell him everything but..

"I was 16 years old when I killed the very first person of my life! Then after that I lost count..! That's it..!" I spoke in a straight forward tone and Rishab shook his head in disgust.

"This is gross!" He spitted out..

I know..

"Well! What can you expect from a street dog? I was a street dog! I don't know who my mother was! Neither my father! I am not here to give any clarification about WHO AM I! I am what I am! And trust me I can't change! But the only thing is I care for you both! I consider you both my family! I want to protect you both! I want you both happy! The call is yours! If you will ask me to stay away from your sister I will leave this city forever! But before you decide anything I want to tell you that..!" I spoke non stop. Because only I knew how I was controlling myself.

Please let me take care of you both. Please..

"That?" Rishab demanded softly. The tension and frowns he had on his face diminished now. "Thaat??" He stretched his word amusingly this time and I looked away.

Why is this so difficult to say always. I am hesitant in front of Rishab like this what Will I do in front of Nandini. I will be unconscious due to anxiety ohk chuck it..

"That you love her right?" Naughtiness was flashing in his eyes he was suppressing his laughter.

"Ok this is not funny!" I roared and he let out a laugh.

How come this serious conversation turned into a funny one..

"It is mahn! Come on if you love her then be confident ehh? Shying and all doesn't suit a Mafia King..!" He teased again and I was so embarrassed.

"Listen buddy--!" I tried to speak but he showed me his hand.

"I trust you! I know you will take care of my sister! I am really happy that she has got someone who loves her truly! Bus aik baat! Never ever hurt her! She seems so strong but inside she is nothing! She is all wounded! Please! I don't know what am I doing is right or not! But please try to tell her the real you as soon as possible!" He said palming my hand over the table..

Thank God..

"That means you are giving me a chance?" I asked impatiently.

"Of course buddy!" He was smiling.

Oh Christ. I was so happy..
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I was so content now. I will tell Nandini soon. I sipped my coffee and smiled to myself.

God bless you Rishab...



Suddenly Cabir came and placed a box on my table.

"Qui!(Here).! l'anello..!(The ring)!" He exclaimed and sat on the chair in front of me. I picked up the box and opened it. It was the same ring which Nandini sold for me. I was so guilty and ashamed that I asked Cabir to find the jeweler immediately who bought Nandini's ring..

"Grazie compagno!(Thanks Buddy)!" I thanked him heartily and placed the ring back in my pocket.

"I paid double for it! That jeweler was an ass!" Cabir said with a grumpy face and I chuckled.

Idiot..

"It's ok Rich boy!" I mocked him and he turned his face angrily while I resumed sipping my coffee hiding my smile..

I will return it to Nandini on right time.
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Next update tonight only if you guys will comment!!!!!!
Love, Mawara

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Awesome... Rishab accepted Manik with his baggage (mini party) n yes the update was exceptionally written...

Depicting rishabs pov .. His delima.. Actually taking such decision could not be easy... Excepting a mafia for ur sister...

N Manik me nandini ki ring bhi dobara purchase ker li

.. So cute...

Loved the update... It was really really awesome...

Thank u for the pm

Keep smiling

Stay blessed

😃

N will be waiting for the next update 😊

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samyreddy

@samyreddy

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Hey accidentally came across story read all the parts in go...beautiful story I ever read amazing

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daddysjaan

@daddysjaan

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#129

wow wow.. ds is surprising...so fast.. amazing update.. loved d convo btwn manik and rishab.. nandini is so fragile.. hope she vl be able to accept manik's truth..
wow manik bought bck nandini's ring..

plz plz try to update tonight...waiting eagerly..