#4 MANANSS: OUR WILD LOVE (Link to next thread PG-1) - Page 94

Awesome update. Manan's moments were well penned. Wow nandini gave birth to a baby girl. Manan's moments during nandini's delivery was well penned. Hats off. U nailed it. Manan's family moments were adorable. Hmm manik was a possessive father. Hehe poor nandini got embarrassed infront of her daughter. Manik's reaction was amazing. Totally an beautifully story showing wat true love is. U wrote it well.keep up the good work.

wonderful update...

maommy daddy playing without adiva was hilarious...lol...

loved it...
amazing story n it was penned down awewomely...

scene i liked d most was
manik trying hard to get nandini back...it was emotional one...

secondly manik made nandini realise abt love...
just being in ideal fantasy of hubby isnt enough to get married...
love is pillar of it ...

thirdly manik adiva n nandini...
family moments were tooo cute...
loved it

fourth nandini n her daddy's bond..
it was special treat ...father daughter duo...

scene i didnt liked ..

1st obvioulsy when manik lied abt his marriage..that was disaster...
ex gf hiding is one thing bt marriage...its heartbreaking to knw abt it frm sm1 else...
bt i think it was ur story so cnt point it out as ur mistake...
bt
2nd one birth scene...
i mean it may b romantic being a fiction bt practically it includes hell risk to baby n mother..
i think medical condition shud b included only if u know d procedure well...
manik didnt wore gloves n he didnt cut d placental cord + he didnt cleaned d baby...it may lead to baby's death ...n nandini's too...
it was gross...may b coz u r non medico i understand bt then u shud nt attempt such scene ...
i m sorry if i hurted u by this bt medical condition shud b bit practical...
i wudnt have mentioned it bt u asked so told u what i felt...
i hope u will take it in positive way...
bt i m sorry once agn dear if it offended u...

lastly d scene i wanted to read n u didnt included...
i think it is ur story n u did justice to d characters as they were flawed bt love made all of them a better person eventually...
so hats off to u for writing so bold n wild story on manan...

keep smiling...
stay blessed...

Awesome story i will miss this story all part are wonderful I can't choose one but still last few updates are awesome i am badly miss this story can't you do anything about this please 😭

Beautiful chapter & what an awesome story ... Loved it all ... Thank u for giving us a chance to read it ... My fav part was when their wild story started that night in pune where N goes to steal her phone & falls for our hottie :)
The whole story was a complete roll a coaster ... Full on high emotions... B it love, jealousy, hatred, betrayal , guilt or repent!!!
Loved them all
Continue writing such lovely stories... That's the only way to keep manan alive in our hearts
Thank you once again !!!

amazing story 😛
I have been reading it from the beginning srry I was a silent reader 🥱
it was a beautiful journey of "OUR WILD LOVE" ⭐️
from the beginning till end
I havent comment before but an amazing writer like u rlly deserve this appreciation 😃
the scene I like the most in the story was when it was raining heavily and nandini was at aryamaan's home and manik rode on jenny to aryamaan's home and how he shouted for nandini after reaching there and how they both rode together to nandini's home and after so long they both got together again 👏
I loved it the most because at that point after so much difficulties and up nd dows they finally unite together and again become two body one soul 😆
honestly there was no such scene or moment when I didn't loke your story 😛
thnks for this superb story of MANAN
but the story has end now we will not able to read "OUR WILD LOVE" anymore 😭
but it was a happy ending which was superb 😃

Another masterpiece comes to an end.. Will miss this story too much.. Update was aweosme .. Adiva is a beautiful name .. I loved the family time .. MaNan are bliss.. I loved everything about the story.. Specially how nandini and Manik never gave upon each other at different situations.. I just loved it.. That should be my favourite part of the story.. Hopefully we get a long epilogue to this ..

Oh my Goddd this was simply amazing

Finally another awesum story of urs cums to a beautiful end.

It was a beautiful journey with u through tis story ...loved each and every part of tis story...